PaYa OS : Talk To Me ! Part 2 Updated - Pg.3 - Page 2

This was absolutly beautiful! 😭😭 I was crying throughout this OS! I was so gripped, it is similar to the storyline but you made it 10x better in every possible angle! I could feel the emotions, the pain Adi was going through in me! This OS actually gave me goosebumps! 😭 😳 I have to say this is one of the best OS's I have read ever! 👏👏 The real feel to it was incredible! A big thanks to your sister for persuading you to write otherwise we wouldnt have witnessed such an amazing talent in our forum! ⭐️ 👏 I request you to write further OS's, SS's or FF's in the future when you are free! 😃 We need you! 😳 😃

Originally posted by: kgh212121

omg it was amazing all of it,

just one shikiyat...where's the i love you????


u better continue, too good

Originally posted by: -Gunjan-

Hey first of all, I think we all should thank your sister that persuaded you to write on PaYa😉😛 But really this was outstanding! I love how sweetly you told the story keeping all the character traits in mind. Which actually made this even more believable! This was amazing! I loved it and I might be just reading this again until my eyes don't get tired😳😆 This was def amazing and guess what there's no tamatars or aloos coming your way only tareefs!😃 Please do continue to write more OS' on these two, you do an amazing job at it. Your writing is a pleasure to read. Hope to see more from you as you've already made another fan out of me😉

Originally posted by: EHMMBH_fan1

I order you to continue this...It was so amazing!! I could see it happening like right infront of me...I have to give ur sister a big hug for telling u to write coz otherwise ur amazing talent would have gone to waste!!!

Gr8 job and 🤗 to u for writing this...Thnx for the pm and plzz do write more :(

Originally posted by: Sonia17

This was absolutly beautiful! 😭😭 I was crying throughout this OS! I was so gripped, it is similar to the storyline but you made it 10x better in every possible angle! I could feel the emotions, the pain Adi was going through in me! This OS actually gave me goosebumps! 😭 😳 I have to say this is one of the best OS's I have read ever! 👏👏 The real feel to it was incredible! A big thanks to your sister for persuading you to write otherwise we wouldnt have witnessed such an amazing talent in our forum! ⭐️ 👏 I request you to write further OS's, SS's or FF's in the future when you are free! 😃 We need you! 😳 😃

Lovely OS. The end made me awww! ;)

Originally posted by: trickytreat

😆 Bol diya usko thanks - khush ho gai pagal 😆

I've written some before on many pairs, and the day before the 15 day separtion, I couldn't resist and wrote on PaYa (even during my finals 😆)

She (somehow) loved it 😲 and asked me to write more. I said, depends on mood.

Call it her luck, I was in a writing mood and I asked her farmaish - she said PaYa so PaYa it is !

And since you all know resisting them isn't exactly easy, AND having lovely people like you give sooo awesome long, meaningful and flattering comments, I couldn't help but write more :P

(YES, even during finals )

You know, today, I gave my exam, sat in the car, and even though my paper went like hopeless, I was soon scribbling this OS's part 2 on my phone 😆

Okay. I know I bored you to hell :P

So I'll end.. THANK YOU SOOO MUCH FOR THE AMAZING COMMENT !! 🤗

And sorry for pakaofying you 😆

Haha awww how sweet! You should totally watch this show if you don't already😃
Awww haha that's so sweet! That you wrote for your sister. Definitely, they're definitely different than the pairs you see on other tv shows, which is why this show is so addicting!😳
Omg haha you wrote in the car hahah now that's dedication!😉😆
Oh no, no you definitely didn't bore me at all!😛 It was totally my pleasure! Just keep writing because your truly amazing at it!😃🤗
I thought I was pakaofying you, since I was so insistent on having you write again!😳 Anyways hopefully I'll get to read more of your work, btw what's your name?

Aweosme ⭐️

Originally posted by: -Gunjan-

Haha awww how sweet! You should totally watch this show if you don't already😃
Awww haha that's so sweet! That you wrote for your sister. Definitely, they're definitely different than the pairs you see on other tv shows, which is why this show is so addicting!😳
Omg haha you wrote in the car hahah now that's dedication!😉😆
Oh no, no you definitely didn't bore me at all!😛 It was totally my pleasure! Just keep writing because your truly amazing at it!😃🤗
I thought I was pakaofying you, since I was so insistent on having you write again!😳 Anyways hopefully I'll get to read more of your work, btw what's your name?