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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waaaiting.. Non patiently.. But no pressure though ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Silsha

Hai Sana.. 1St a fall, Welcome 2 d Pyar Ka Dard Hai Meetha Meetha Pyara Pyara Family..!!!🤗 I m Prateek..!!😳 lyk d soap title, here all r Lovely Members/Frnz.. OS: aww.. Its really i loved it. I lyk d way of childhood concept..! Its new.. Gud.. And PM Me ..Plz keep wr8ing. Its a Nice concept.


Hey Prateek 😊 thank u soo much...!
Im so glad to be a part of PKDHMMPP Family and that to sooo soon! 😃...And thanx fr ur lovely comments...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: f.s.m

This is unbelievable .. We have such a GREAT writers in our forum !!

Frankly .. I LOVED THIS... Loved it a lot ... Perfectly written .. Everything was just superb .. Keep it up yaar 👏



Aww...thank u soo much dear! 😳...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sushona

hey sana.😊.
my name is shira..
n i'll be waiting 4 ur part.. 😉
pst it soon..😊

Hey Shira 😊...Glad u liked my TS! 😳
Yeah sure...😃




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani

It was cute ! Supersweet !

Loved it to the core ! PM please 😳


Awww...Thanks for this 'supersweet' comment!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 2: Mulakaat...

'Pankhuri have you taken your bag?' asked Maa while pushing the luggage trolley out of the arrivals section on Mumbai airport.

'Oh teri...mera bag' said Pankhuri finally realising that she again left it somewhere. 'Neha have you seen my bag somewhere?' Pankhuri asked pulled Neha aside. 'Bag...umm; O yeah I think I last saw it with you near the coffee shop' Neha side stressing her brain.

'Aree Haan, coffee shop. I was finding it hard to carry 3 coffee cups at a time so I kept it on a table nearby, thought ki I'll take it back once I leave the cups at the table!' Pankhuri finally recollected.

'And you forgot to bring it back, thinking that your bag is so loyal that it will walk back to its master. Isn't it?' Neha remarked sarcastically.

'Whatever, you just handle Maa I'll get my bag okay!' Pankhuri said walking towards the coffee shop.

'I can't handle her for long! Now don't walk so casually, RUNN!!' Neha shouted at Pankhuri's back.

Pankhuri literally started running amidst the crowd, now she couldn't take her mother's scolding because this time her mom's anger would be just like and erupting volcano. She couldn't make out the directions; only thought on her mind was to find her bag. Everyone was staring at this bubbly girl running past the crowd, uttering 'sorrys and oops' all the way long.

She finally halted in front of a book store, panting for breath. She looked left & right to search the coffee shop when she finally spotted the board directing to the coffee shop.

'Ahh, there it is.' Pankhuri said trying to catch her breath.

She ran a hand through her hair, looked at the opposite direction to spot Neha gesturing her to run. She suddenly turned around started running towards the coffee shop when she dashing into something as hard as concrete yet very comfortable and warm. She sensed in a fraction of a second that she dashed into something & now she prepared herself to hit the hard floor. She closed her eyes so as to lessen the impact of the fall, she waited but then she realized that a strong pair of arms had wrapped around her petite waist to save her from falling. She opened her eyes gradually to find a pair of rare combination of blue-green shade of eyes staring at her. That was it! She instantly melted at the sight in front of her, 'OMG...these eyes!' she thought.

She lowered her eyes to take a look the rest of the face when she saw her dupatta covering his face. She realized that in the whole 'process' of falling and landing in a pair of arms her dupatta flew from her neck and landed on this strangers face, covering half of it and leaving his eyes to stare deep into Pankhuri's.

'Pankhuriii...tumhara bag Chachi ji ke paas hain! Your mom is looking for you hurry up!!' Neha shouted from a distance.

Pankhuri came back to reality and straightened herself quickly and ran towards Neha without even glancing at the stranger. 'Hey...' he called out to her, Pankhuri instantly stopped in her tracks. With a racing heart and panting breath she slowly turned around to 'Finally' look at the stranger. Just then a group of tourists came in between them, Pankhuri moved left & right to catch a glance of him but she couldn't.

'Pankhuriii...hurry up!!' Neha shouted. Pankhuri gave up and ran towards Neha & then they both sat in the waiting SUV in the lot and headed off towards home.

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'Neha are you ready?' Chachi ji asked entering the room with a few pairs of Lehengas.

'Of course Chachi ji, after all Pankhuri THE GREAT took the responsibility to get the bride ready!' Pankhuri replied with pride.

Chachi ji smiled & rolled her eyes in amusement while she laid the Lehengas down on the bed carefully. 'Come on Pankhuri now you also get ready, quick!' Chachi said before leaving the girls in the room.

'Pankhuri we will take Neha down, it's getting late you quickly dress up and come down, okay?' said Zia, a friend a Neha.

Pankhuri nodded and quickly grabbed a random Lehenga from the 'Lehenga pile' on the bed and started getting ready.



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'Okay, okay...I'm half way done. Now, just the jewellery is left.' Pankhuri muttered sitting in front of the mirror & panicking.

'Pankhuriii...how much more time do you need? Ladke wale aagaye hai...your mom is looking for you. Come on hurry upp!!' Chachiji shouted from outside.

'Haan Chachiji, just two minutes. Come on Pankhuri you can put on the jewellery while your way down the stairs.' Said Pankhuri before grabbing her ear rings & dupatta and rushing out of the room.

'Chalo Pankhuri hurry up!' she said to herself rushing down the stairs when felt a strong tug on her dupatta. But she was running down too fast to little to sense that her dupatta got caught in the railing, due to which she twirled & slipped.

'Owww...' she squealed in horror only to land safely 'again' in a pair of strong arms.

On opening her eyes she saw the same pair of eyes staring at her. 'OMG, the airport guy...!' her eyes widened at the sudden realization. 'Why the hell am I so relaxed in his arms, OMG but they are so comfy so yet strong. Shut up Pankhuri how can you think about a stranger like this, are you forgetting your goal?' Pankhuri was stuck in between her conflicting mind & heart.

She quickly straightened herself & adjusted her long flowing dupatta pulling it carefully from the railing. She glanced at him once again to take a proper look, when she saw him staring at her continuously. 'What the hell! He is staring at me so shamelessly!' she thought.

'You are Pank...' the guy started saying, just then Chachiji shouted from downstairs, 'Pankhuri hurry up...!' Pankhuri rushed down without listening to him.

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'Wow yaar...the ceremony went on so well na?' Neha said sitting in front of the mirror brushing her hair. On not getting a reply from Pankhuri she looked in her direction to find her staring out of the window into the bright starlit sky. 'Pankhuri? What happened?' Neha asked shaking Pankhuri out of her thoughts.

'Huh? What?...Wh, what happened?' a lost Pankhuri replied.

'What happened to you? The cool dude Pankhuri who doesn't believe in 'Yashraj movies wala Love' is staring at the stars? What is wrong with you?' Neha remarked sarcastically.

'What the hell are you talking about Neha? & what is the connection between staring at the sky & 'Yashraj movies ka Love' and my cool attitude?' asked a totally confused Pankhuri. 'And waise bhi staring at the skies doesn't decide my belief in love, I do believe in it but just don't like that extreme wala love where hero & heroine run away to escape their families who are 'Family enemies' (Family friends ka opposite). Then they marry & live in mountains and lead a happy life ever after!' Pankhuri added sarcastically.

'Connection hain my dear! Itni intensity se uss chand ko dekhna matlab zaroor koi naa koi toh tere dil main hai hi. Koi nahi bhi hua toh, kisi na kisi ka khayal toh definitely hai! Bol kauna hai woh bechaara? Areey, kahi woh tera Ad... ' Neha said but was cut off by Pankhuri.

'Oho Neha shut up! Kya bakwas kar rahi hai, now go & sleep & let me also get some rest kal tere would-be-hubby ke ghar shagun dene jaane hai mujhe. After all I'm his one-&-only saali!' Pankhuri said getting into the bed & pulling the warm blanket. Neha just rolled her eyes in reply before switching off the lights and going to bed.

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Hayee...that is it for today guyss! OMG writing after quiet a long time. Exams! I tell you...anyways, now read peacefully & review. Today's episode was a very heavy one, so here is a lighter chapter to divert your mood & bring in some positivity so that our belief grows even stronger ki 'Everything is gonna be alright!' So be positive my pyaaron...& enjoy!

Happy reading!

~ ❤️ Sana ❤️ ~

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Posted: 12 years ago
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it is awesome fantastic and faboulous plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was just amazing! Haye me toh tere fan bangaye hu! You are an incredibly talented writer! Loved the fall in the arms and the dupatta flying! Gosh why soo filmy?! No dont take me wrong I love it to bits! 😃 😳 I am a die hard romantic! 😉 😳 Oh wowo! Love how he was staring at her and love the little pics you added there! Nice touch! 😉 😃 Loved it all! Keep going, Good Luck with exams! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Oh God, I soo hate you !!
I have my exams going on
One horrible such exam tomorrow
I dunno nothing, no damn thing at all
And here I am shamelessly reading ur update !!
Agar main fail hui to sirf aur sirf tumhari vajah se !!

PS. I loved it !! Hayyee Yash Raj wala love 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonia17

This was just amazing! Haye me toh tere fan bangaye hu! You are an incredibly talented writer! Loved the fall in the arms and the dupatta flying! Gosh why soo filmy?! No dont take me wrong I love it to bits! 😃 😳 I am a die hard romantic! 😉 😳 Oh wowo! Love how he was staring at her and love the little pics you added there! Nice touch! 😉 😃 Loved it all! Keep going, Good Luck with exams! 🤗


Hey Soniaa...! 😃 Thank you so much dear.🤗 I'm a full full full romantic person & love all those u know filmy incidents in real life 😉 so here they are! I know red lehenge mein dekh ke poor guy dekhta hi rehgaya! 😳 Thanks again for this lovely comment yaaar seriously love u sooo much for this! 🤗

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