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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely SS Sonia, you really rock when it comes to describing scenes. You described every scene vividly dear, kudos. Loved the flashback part.

Continue, I am loving it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAIBALROUTH

Lovely SS Sonia, you really rock when it comes to describing scenes. You described every scene vividly dear, kudos. Loved the flashback part.

Continue, I am loving it

Thank you sooo much Saibal bro! 😳 😃 I am really happy that you love my writing! ❤️ Glad you loved the flashback! 😆 😉 Will continue soon need to update for DABH! 😆 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb post dear... wl read it soon bt donno wen 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonia17

Thank you sooo much Saibal bro! 😳 😃 I am really happy that you love my writing! ❤️ Glad you loved the flashback! 😆 😉 Will continue soon need to update for DABH! 😆 😃



Yup, really missing you dear at DABH, and you know, we have hardly FF or SS going on there. 😭

Missing you 😭 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sukhi...

Superb post dear... wl read it soon bt donno wen 😆

Thank you dear! Its okay take your time! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAIBALROUTH



Yup, really missing you dear at DABH, and you know, we have hardly FF or SS going on there. 😭

Missing you 😭 😭

I'm so sorry bhaiya I feel people are losing interest in it! 😕 But I will continue! 😊 See how it goes may somehow wrap it up! 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonia17

I'm so sorry bhaiya I feel people are losing interest in it! 😕 But I will continue! 😊 See how it goes may somehow wrap it up! 😕



Don't wrap it up dear, I was loving it. The way you gave romantic descriptions are simply marvelous. Wish I could write as good as you dear 😭 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAIBALROUTH



Don't wrap it up dear, I was loving it. The way you gave romantic descriptions are simply marvelous. Wish I could write as good as you dear 😭 😭

I dont want too but no one is interested I started on OS the other day many just read and liked they dont comment! I am not doing it for fame, im doing it for the enjoyment and also to increase the rank! Confused I will continue for you! Confused
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonia17

Thanks a lot for reading! 😳 What didnt you understand? Actually when I updated I made a few mistakes and edited through my phone so it messed it up!

The storyline is basically Adi is travelling to Kullu without Avantu knowing, only Nana knows he is going somewhere. He catches a plane and then gets a driver to go Kullu. He doesnt know that Pankhu and Shivam are getting engaged today. Pankhuri is sad when Neha is dressing her up, she doesnt tell her and when she goes she brings out a Dupatta the red one from the show. Then she has a flashbavk (maybe thats your confusion) then she is taken down. They are about to get engaged when Adi realises what is happening and shouts Pankhuri to stop the engagement. Everyone is shocked. Dadaji tries to stop him but he takes Pankhu upstairs he asks her if she loves Shivam. Pankhu is crying. She doesnt know what to say. She breaks down on the floor and confesses so does Adi. They hug and Shivam is at the door. He heard everything and explains to his fam that he doesnt want to get married. They are angry and storm off. The Gupta's are now worried how they will convince the Diwan family for Adi and Pankhuri's marriage. Hope that helps! 😃


i understand the story but i dont understand Hindi only a couple words
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: X.Sisi94


i understand the story but i dont understand Hindi only a couple words

Oh okay thats good then! 😃 Actually my hindi is quite bad so sorry if there are any mistakes I dont know a lot of hindi its not an everyday language for me! 😕 If you want you can tell me the words you didnt understand and I can translate? 😊

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