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Sharna

@sharna2k6

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

OMGG!! I kid you not, I had goosebumps the entire time while I was reading this! This is fabulous, beyond fabulous actually!

I have read some of your work on ArHi, and I love them. You are a brilliant writer!

I love the idea of it too. It's so different than what is going on, but I could clearly imagine the concerns and expressions of Adi and Panku! But Avantika.. imagining her so warm towards Pankuri is a little hard to imagine hahaha.. I hope she warms up to her soon!

One of the best OS's I've read.. Loved it!

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Supriya

@Miss.Supriya

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wooow its lovely! keep it up!

loved ur writing..u hve done an amazing job! n its nice to see pankhu na adi married n avantu nt being evil!

v.well written...v.gripping!!

enjoyed reading i!

do write more

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

RES. in a rush so want to read in relax mood will un-res. tomorrow IA

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Nice one!

Although i am not really a fan of this couple at all, it was enjoyable to read

Lovely OS 😳

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YOUR FACE

@PersieV

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ShiningStar18
Nice one!

Although i am not really a fan of this couple at all, it was enjoyable to read

Lovely OS 😳

Neither was I but then I realised why this couple was chosen. Most importantly I'm in love with Adi

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

loved it awesome well written poor punkuri worried about adi reaction after he said he did not want a baby poor girl glad his reaction was not what she expected awesome thanks for the pm

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

superb updt

luvd it

thanks for pm

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

I only watch snippets of the show and when I do I can't help but stare at Adi's eyes...I'm so very jealous of him!!

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Anon

@infiresmayn

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

AWWW :')

I really, really liked this!! :D

The first thing was 'Avantu' and her attitude towards Pankhudi!! It was a shock to see her behaving humanely, to say the least!! 🤣 😆

GAH! ADI'S EYES <3 <3 I'M JELLEH, REALLY 😆 haha

Oh, Pankhudi - all ready to abort her child just because she thinks her husband doesn't want it -____-

But, it's ok - Adi stepped in and is ready to take responsibility!! :') Bless the guy's cotton socks 😆

Loved this OS a lot ... you should definitely write more on this pairing!! 😃

Fab work, as always, and thanks for the PM! ⭐️

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

i really not much into this one but my mom watches it religiously it was shocking to see avanthika like this but i really look fwd to her in the serial she is one such character she appears tough and lots of things happening to her but she dos what she believes i love her abt that n she was strong in her view in ur os too...bit soft yeah but she was true

nice short n sweet os

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