Abhiya AT #337 ~ Meri Zindagi Se Jaane Ka Kya Loge Tum - Page 10

Originally posted by: whats.up.danger

so the idea is chand is vampire and haseena is sort kf a witch in 1600s. Chand often used her help but then a siatuation occured so that the villagers are going to burn haseena for witchcraft things. Now chand saves her from there and converts her but then they discover secret about chand’s life and there is power struggle between chand’s creator and chand. In the meantime due to dracula events (inspired as it is from the castlevania series) supernatural world is in chaos and they want to create council sort of thing to bring vampires under some governance so it doesnt threaten them again! Chand and haseena get stuck in that. Now i ahve little more general plot direction but writing is turning out to be little difficult. Like Chand’s creator can control his actions and haseena has to find a way to breka him free.

Yeah my first thought when reading was Castlevania 🤣 but good start

Is Chand’s creator against the whole governance thing? Maybe he can use chand as a puppet to dismantle those plans or something

Originally posted by: simply.meghana

Yeah my first thought when reading was Castlevania 🤣 but good start

Is Chand’s creator against the whole governance thing? Maybe he can use chand as a puppet to dismantle those plans or something

And then i also have to find a way around a potential loophole. Like haseena is different. And chand was not exactly pro-haseena. His creator himself forced chand to save her. Now i need to give him a motivation strong enough where he expects chand to save her but doesnt realise the consequence could be chand falling in love with haseena. There is also an element like harry potter verse’s patronus changing when someone falls in lovr. Something along those lines exist in this story verse too. Thats how chand would realise he has fallen for haseena. And all this while maintaining it remains organic and now artificial love.

Originally posted by: whats.up.danger

yeah so he is going to use chand as puppet! And haseena has to break him free. But i dont know how to wrote political conflicts. Like i have general direction that okay there is going to be governnace and his creator basically wants to control it bh placing chand in the middle of it maybe! And then he can always control chand. But i ahve never written these aspects. I dont how to start.

And then i also have to find a way around a potential loophole. Like haseena is different. And chand was not exactly pro-haseena. His creator himself forced chand to save her. Now i need to give him a motivation strong enough where he expects chand to save her but doesnt realise the consequence could be chand falling in love with haseena. There is also an element like harry potter verse’s patronus changing when someone falls in lovr. Something along those lines exist in this story verse too. Thats how chand would realise he has fallen for haseena. And all this while maintaining it remains organic and now artificial love.

Yeah political conflict is very hard to write for me as well 😆
maybe Haseena has some ties to important people driving the governance idea? so having her around would be beneficial to the creator

Originally posted by: simply.meghana

Yeah political conflict is very hard to write for me as well 😆
maybe Haseena has some ties to important people driving the governance idea? so having her around would be beneficial to the creator

Originally posted by: whats.up.danger

oh that could be helpful yeah. He is blinded by the desire to have power and hence didnt think it through. That works thanks a lot 😃

Haan. Am going round and round there trying to write something there. Lets see when i have something concrete 😆

I know that feeling all too well 🤣 you’re welcome glad I could be of some use 🤗🤣

Originally posted by: simply.meghana

I know that feeling all too well 🤣 you’re welcome glad I could be of some use 🤗🤣

Subah ho gaye Mamu 😆

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you should start new category! How many 30 days streak badges u have 🤣

She should get a special badge for having the most 30 day streak badges 🤣