Abhiya Small Romantic chit chat

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey, just writing an small OS just not many diagonal because am not a writer or good at it.

So basically in the Show , I don't like the wedding so fast without any ritual so , the theme of the os is that

Abhiya marriage is few days, all college friends of Mount College gather to celebrate or party. At college only with permission as a reunion.

All are enjoying the party, around it happy and light every where, Piya just come in parking lot to take some fresh air.

Piya ( Searching something in car) : kaha gaya, where is my lucky charm.

Suddenly abhay comes in search of her.

Abhay : right behind you!!

Piya : shit abhay you scared me!!

Abhay : oh! Now you scared phale toh warning a vampire, but am now normal human like you.

Piya : God abhay , tum bhi na!!

Abhay : No, bye the way what are you doing in parking lot??

Piya : just searching something, want some fresh air. I am happy that we all planned this party, we all needed this.

Abhay : ya, And see we are alone here, let's stay here for a while. It's romantic.

Piya : acha ji, agar koi dekha toh and inside party is going on ( Pause n kept her hand on chin) ok, for some time.

Abhay : ok, miss Dobriyal oops soon to be Mrs Raichand . Shall we sit on bonnet of car as I want to see stars with you forever!! 😉😉

Piya : ok, Mr. Fiance. As you wish. Abhay I am so happy we will be married in few days. See that star, that my mumma she will so happy to see us together and continent. she would love to have you for me.

Abhay : Ha, woh toh ha I am the best!!

Piya : Abhay!! You are too much, you know that. I don't what I do without you.

Abhay : Tum, mujhe sa pyaar karti, in your dreams while I come to you 😉 .

Piya : You!! ( She hit him on her shoulder)

Abhay, I want to live my life with you, enjoy, love with you, fight little bit , have children with you, grow old with you ( she is getting a little emotional her) . Tum hoga mera saath, till death .

Abhay : of course piya, we will live our life, full fill our dreams, grow old .And I want to have three kids two girls and one boy.

Piya ( she smile a little) : Tum misha ka picha kabhi nhi chodoge, n three kids that a lot but I accept that and the three have your smiles.

Abhay : hmm ya! But.. ( his phone ring) Ya misha we are coming, ya ya. In parking lot. Coming. Cholo ab Misha ka call tha all are searching for us.

Piya : Ya, the thing I was searching for already got it ( looking at abhay lovingly) and kiss on his cheek.

Then they walk together, but piya run inside

Abhay : Piya you are my lucky charm. Smile his dimple smile. 😍☺


Kabir Misha and all are shown doing dance and have fun, Abhay piya dancing romantically.

End.


Thank you, just trying a thought that come to my mind while watching a scene from a series. You can suggest if missing something.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Ah! This is really cute.i wish I wish we were lucky enough to have such light-hearted moments in the show ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fearless_Lover

Ah! This is really cute.i wish I wish we were lucky enough to have such light-hearted moments in the show ❤️

Thank you, just a try I am more of a reader than writing . ☺

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Posted: 4 years ago
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So beautiful yr

U should write a story u know you are too good in writing

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Posted: 4 years ago
#5

How sweet! If only the show gave us more moments like this 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: simply.meghana

How sweet! If only the show gave us more moments like this 😆

This one is cute right

I love it

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It's a nice try .. keep writing on such cute Abhiya moment

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice but you bought a lot of Misha in their conversation

I want abhiyas talk only I know it's your point of view but let's be honest just hated the ending it was soo less abhiya with all their scenes with other people like Misha , Kabir , danish , n than that other couples from other shows

Seriously wanted more focus on abhiya

The ending still makes me upset

Bahot kuch baakhi hai abhiya n iss story mai ♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: lubnas227

Nice but you bought a lot of Misha in their conversation

I want abhiyas talk only I know it's your point of view but let's be honest just hated the ending it was soo less abhiya with all their scenes with other people like Misha , Kabir , danish , n than that other couples from other shows

Seriously wanted more focus on abhiya

The ending still makes me upset

Bahot kuch baakhi hai abhiya n iss story mai ♥️

Thank you for the feedback, I also want more in abhiya story, but it was just a thought and am not a great writer. Just want to make this fourm live, so just a small contribution from my side.


Misha name or example were just to make it cute but funny.

Thank you for the encouraging review.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Its cute and light hearted❤️

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