Arranged... (A Short Story)

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bmbb

@bmbb

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Loved it...do write more of abhiya stories

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

It's beautiful in true sense of the word my dear!! ⭐️

Reading it was like being on a wonderous journey that sometimes felt ecstatic and sometimes overwhelming. I could not say how much the story affected my imaginary senses! I almost forgot that I was reading something. Felt I was in the middle and the scene was playing around and infront me. Abhay Piya's cute but lovely married life...piya's shyness hesitancy and their little things between two people just married, were marvellous in their portrayal. They were a treat to the eyes and a part to be cherished!!❤️

I loved each and every word of the story and almost read it in one breath without pause. Haha...

When Abhay smiled--i smiled, when Piya felt a shiver--i felt it too and finally Piya thought she loved him and prepared to profess her feelings, i became excited!! :D

Not to mention when at the last scene Abhay said those four magic words I was ecstatic and on cloud nine!!! Believe me your writing was sooo good that every picture breathed with reality and when I was transported to abhiya land I never realised! ❤️ All I knew was that Abhay Piya were there infront n around me and I didn't want their journey to end!

P.S. seriously you wrote the marriage parts so good that I was half convinced that you have gone through them yourself!! Trust me it was that believable and perfect. 👏

I have no words to praise you! This was the most beautiful short story I have read on abhiya in a long long time...!! Thank you for writing it. Please if possible I personally request you to write more on them. I promise I will be there to read my dearest. 🤗 lots of love to you. Stay happy and blessed.❤️

P.P.S. why didn't you pm? I almost could have missed this story if it wasn't in the first page! :/

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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Wow I loved this story it was beautiful written. I loved the ending especially It was so magical

Please do write more

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

I should thank Indu aka Paint.It.Black for suggesting me to read this story. It's well written and the best part is it's something you can relate to. A sweet, simple, realistic scenario where two strangers bound to each other by marriage find love and become soulmates in the true sense. Also loved the subtle humor u have imbibed in ur OS.

Good job 👍🏼 👏

I have not visited this place in like forever now but I really enjoyed reading ur OS.

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

. Sorry sorry sorry 4 being late :p LOL
OK come 2 d point.. Beautifully written
It's very nice & innocent luv stry.. Nothing artificial .. I can easily rela te wid it..
Thoda lambi hai (LOL, u knw it rgt) BT still I enjoyed it..
A simple stry of a grl & boy who fell in love after marriage
Keep it up..
I m waiting 4 ur NXT story :*
Missed u so much #Ayesha :* :*

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anjali

@anjalisharma07

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Awesome story...

please if possible then post its next part...

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Dhanashree

@pinks0986

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Just Beautiful 👏👏👏

will be waiting for the next part dear...😛😛

Edited by pinky_rajatfan - 8 years ago

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Ayesha khan

@abhiya4evr

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: bestpasstime
it is superb
amazing story
thanks for update
i love to read more stories of yours

thanks.
I would love to write more stories on abhiya and I'll write.

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Ayesha khan

@abhiya4evr

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Supervampire
amazing story
beautiful described their marriage life journey
ending is gr8
if u can plz write 2nd season of this story

thank you So much.

I have nothing more to tell in their story, So part 2 won't be possible.

Edited by abhiya4evr - 8 years ago