Abhiya SS : Beautiful Mistake (completed) *Epilogue on page 26* - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Interesting
So abhay is here
his reaction to seeing n hearing piya is confusing
gives me feeling he knows her already
but she doesnt
is he angry because he doesnt like her or is it because he does like her too much but just doesnt like the fact shes his brothers wife??
Looking forward to next update
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Huda1996

Wooowww, what an update , u really know d tricks to make ur fans impatience. Abhay was shock aftr seeing piya as armaan's wife ahaan
DAL MAI kuch kala hai , waiting for nxt update and yeah, plzzz don't take much time for next update , nd do it jldi jldi as much as u can 👍🏼

Thanks dear
Haha am glad you are liking it

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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: cuteariya

awe arushi is so cute she want everything perfect for her abhay uncle 😃
but pia know how to make her agree 😉
somewhere pia also got happy abt abhay's return but don't know why 😃
finally abhay came back 🥳
ouch but why did he get shocked & angry seeing pia? 😕
haseena & pia both were confused by abhay's behavior😕
but pia was hurt 😭
continue plz

Thanks dear
Yes arushi is cute
That's their relation
You'll know about that soon is all I can say😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: ...Seema...

Mind blowing update

Sorry fr nt being regular here..not well
Abhay enterd
Tu ne maari entriyan
Tu dil me baji ghantiyanabhay is angry n piya n haseena shocked
Looking forward to next update

Thanks seema am glad you liked it I couldn't send you so worry
Your favorite part right😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Huda1996

Heyyy updateee plzzz

I'm updating dear😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Salaam everyone,
First of all Eid Mubarak and now here's the eid gift a update

Chapter 4

Piya was studying in her room when she heared a sad musin playing. She looked around. She stood up silently and walked outside the room. She heared the tune coming from the room beside her's. She remembered Arushi telling her that it's Abhay room.

She saw that the door was standing ajar. She peeped in and saw Abhay playing violin. She stood at the door admiring the tune.

Abhay was lost in his own world of thoughts while playing the violin. Suddenly his eyes fall on the door and he saw Piya standing there. He stops playing and stood up.

Piya saw that Abhay has noticed her. She bit her lips in nervousness. Abhay came and stood in front of her.

"What are you doing here?" Abhay asked curtly

"You play beautifully" Piya praises with a nervous smile

Abhay got angry something in him burn. He threw away the violin breaking it into pieces.

Piya jerked back with shock and fear. She looked at him. She was scared.

"I.." Piya tried to say something

"Get lost" he gritted

A tear fell from her eyes. Abhay saw that he looked away and closed his eyes trying to control himself.

Piya looked at him hurt. She was not able to understand why he is behaving with her like this. She ran away crying.

Abhay fisted his hands and punched the wall in anger.

Piya locked her room and jumped on bed crying. She was not able to bear Abhay's anger. She couldn't understand what was her fault.

"Everyone says he is nice and better than Armaan but no he is rude extremely rude and bad guy. I hate him" she cried

"Don't cry Piya he is no one! Why are you crying for him? Just ignore him okay? Ignore him!" She decided trying to control herself

Next day

Piya entered the dining room and saw Abhay seated just beside her seat. She looked down and remembered the two awful incidents with him.

"Just ignore" Piya ordered herself in mind

She walked towards her seat silently and sat between Armaan and Abhay.

Abhay saw her sitting. He stopped eating. Glancing her for once he stood up.

Piya got scared thinking he may scream on her again but to her surprise he walked away silently. She sighed in relief.

After having her breakfast Piya rushed to college. She didn't wanted to stay at home with Abhay and ruined her mood.


"What happened Piya you seems lost today" Misha asked sitting beside her

"Don't even ask Misha" Piya shook her head with a anger

"Kis se lar kar aye ho?" Misha chuckled

"That Abhay Raichand" Piya gritted

Misha looked on surprised. She was not expecting this.

"Abhay!" She exclaimed

"Yeah your so called sweet Abhay Raichand" Piya made face " you say he is sweet but no he is arrogant and rude extremely arrogant"

"Hold on hold on! You are talking about Abhay right? Abhay Raichand?" Misha was not able to believe

Piya glared her

"I mean... okay leave that and tell me what happened why are you so angry on him? What did he did?" Misha asked

"He shouted on me that too twice! I agree it was my mistake first time but second time he just got mad without reason" Piya threw her hand in air

"He shouted? Why?" Misha looked at her

Piya rolled her eyes - "I was giving him coffee and it spilled on his hands by mistake and he shouted on me and later I heared him playing violin so I just stood by his room door enjoying the tune but when he saw me he started shooting again and even broke his violin because I praised it" Piya told her everything

"I think he is mad" Piya seethed in anger

"Maybe he didn't like you peeping in his room shouted" Misha reasoned

"Are you serious Misha? Is that the way? And you was praising him like he is some angel but see he is so arrogant I think psycho too" Piya ranted her anger

"Piya he must have reasons you shouldn't talk bad about someone like this" Misha defended

"You know what Misha just leave it" Piya was angry for her friend to side Abhay

"Or maybe Misha is right?" Piya thought suddenly

Piya looked around the house and saw Arushi playing around alone.

"Means Mr Abhay Raichand is not at home! Nice" Piya sighed in relief

She didn't wanted to face him again and bear his unknown anger.

Abhay sat on the chair laughing and chatting with his friends.

"So Abhay tell us about her" his friend winked

The smile disappeared from his face as the sadness struck him

"She was a beautiful dream just... a dream!" Abhay replied with sadness

"Dude don't you know she left him" Second friend whispers to the first one

He was shocked to hear this and gave him unbelievable look. He then looked at Abhay.

"I love her a lot. She was my life I could've done anything for her if only she would've given me a chance" Abhay looked down with pain and sadness

"By the way dude Misha was telling me that you shouted on Armaan's wife, she is her best friend so she told Mish. you should control yourself Abhay just because of that girl you love you shouldn't hurt others" Said Misha's brother

Abhay looked away - "I couldn't control myself seeing her she reminds me of..." He became silent while his friends looked on confuse

"Just leave it why are we even discussing all this" Abhay said

His friends agree understanding his plight.

Abhay entered the house. He walked towards his room. Just then Piya came out of her room. Their eyes met. Abhay looked away and entered his room.

"So he is also ignoring me?" Piya asked herself and then smiled brightly "better!"

Some days passed like this Abhay and Piya ignored each other completely. Piya wanted to be on safe side and Abhay wanted to have a control on himself.

Abhay was going out when Armaan called him.

"Yes bro" Abhay looked at him with smile

"Abhay you know na I don't have time. Piya doesn't have car of her own and I want that she own one for her use so take her to show room and bought her a car of her choice" Armaan explained

Abhay was shocked

"Bhai.. I? I can't" Abhay denied

"Why not Abhay?" Armaan looked at him

Abhay looked away trying to find reasons.

"Abhay you have helped me all the time now do this too please" Armaan smiled and walked away as if knowing Abhay reply

Abhay pressed his forehead in helplessly. He didn't wanted to go with Piya anywhere but now he was helpless for his brother. He sat in hall and start to play with his phone in order to calm his nerves.

Piya saw him from the upstairs.

"Now why is he here till now?" Piya murmured

She silently descended the stairs. Abhay saw her as she was passing by the hall. He cleared his throat.

"Piya.." he called for the first time

Piya stopped in her tracks. As she turned towards him she keep on thinking what he wanted to say to her for once she thought that he is going to apologise for his rash behaviour by seeing his hesitation to speak but that was not the reason she get to know soon after.

"Armaan wants that I took you to showroom so that you could buy a car" Abhay said looking away

Piya was going to deny but then thought otherwise.

"He doesn't want to, just for Armaan you too agree" Piya thought

Piya looked away and nodded.

"Come" Abhay said without looking at her and walked forward

Piya made face and followed him.
They sat in car and Abhay drive off. The whole journey was silent but Abhay couldn't help but eye her stealthily.

"What are you doing Abhay? Have you gone mad or what?" Abhay asked himself in mind and tried to concentrate on road

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I hope you guys liked the update no more anger promise

Enjoy,
Asshi


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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Walaikum salam asshi n eid mubarak
Wonderful update
Abhay playing violin oh he broke as piya praised him
Piya is confused n misha too sided abhay
Abhay lost his love
I think d storm is over hehehe
Looking forward to next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
but piya never mentioned she knew abhay. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Eid Mubarak to you and and your family:) Mind blowing update :):) Do update sooonnn :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Nice update
so it isnt piya who ayaan is angry at
its because she reminds him of his lost love
but shes still his bros wife
looking forward to seeing how he handles this
he cant be angry with her all the time can he
how would armaan react if he realized how his bro feels about his wife?
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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