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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: MohanaLuvAbhiya
Welcome dear, this scene was totally out of the world, next I would like to see the scene where Sid created misunderstandings between Ametz, as I always wonder how he did & what was its affect on their relationship, I am talking about the misunderstanding when they were alive, remember that scene in flashback where Maithili was talking & laughing to Sid & Abhendra was looking from behind

That's a good one. But the scene would be from Sid's POV. I will defo try it out. Thanks 😃

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Happy & shocked to see you with this os. Maithili in her human life was sweet , independent ,kind & loving . She was so determined & Abhay was right at his place . His status didn't make his situation easier so his reaction was justified. They were sweet & hot in the end . When will u update scarred love & genie one . It's been too long .

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Mohana love Abhiya

@MohanaLuvAbhiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

That's a good one. But the scene would be from Sid's POV. I will defo try it out. Thanks 😃

I will wait eagerly for it & you are right it will look nice from Sid's POV only as he only can explain his plan properly.😛

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--geny--

@--geny--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Firstly your writing is same as it was before..Beautiful! Really *HAPPY* to see you writing again...

I love your drabbles...you were writing before!
Its my fav too.your chronicles of a fallen princess: Forever And Ever After.

One of fav scene and yes,was bent to know when Abhay lost his virginity? lol...bt Human AMetz were really sweet and pure of love...I loved this and enjoyed reading it.Pls Do write more na Mansa di!

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

Oh damn 😆 Wasn't this supposed to be racy? 🤣 Thanks for liking 😳

haha ... For that u should have made it on abhiya na... U don't have a clue ... My heart was burning .. Seeing him with mathli.. ... What to do... Can't see him with her.. Hehe😆 dil tarapta hai... By the way why don't u try this out on abhiya too... Pleej..

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
Happy & shocked to see you with this os. Maithili in her human life was sweet , independent ,kind & loving . She was so determined & Abhay was right at his place . His status didn't make his situation easier so his reaction was justified. They were sweet & hot in the end . When will u update scarred love & genie one . It's been too long .

Happy to see you Megha 🤗 Metz was indeed a different person when she had been a human. She is carefree and innocent as you rightly put across. Little did she care about the consequences unlike Abhay who was a mere servant.

Oh my 😆 U found it sweet too 🤣 Well I tried writing a racy one but it didn work out given the circumstances in the drabble 😳 I couldn make it any racier 😆

P. S - Genie wala will continue in Wattpad on MaNan since I couldn't visualise Abhiya in the lead character roles. I agree most of our stories here are our own but the essence of Abhiya is retained. Here my Abhay and Pia didn work out for me as a writer. So not continuing the Abhiya version. Sorry about that About SL believe me, I tried but nothing is working out Hence I wrote this drabble coz I was stuck.

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: MohanaLuvAbhiya
I will wait eagerly for it & you are right it will look nice from Sid's POV only as he only can explain his plan properly.😛

Yeah but since this is Maithali's chronicles, I will twist this a bit and write on a sequence where Sid rescued Metz and manipulated her. Will that do? 😊

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: --geny--
Firstly your writing is same as it was before..Beautiful! Really *HAPPY* to see you writing again...

I love your drabbles...you were writing before!
Its my fav too.your chronicles of a fallen princess: Forever And Ever After.

One of fav scene and yes,was bent to know when Abhay lost his virginity? lol...bt Human AMetz were really sweet and pure of love...I loved this and enjoyed reading it.Pls Do write more na Mansa di!

Thanks Geny 🤗 I am glad u like it and I enjoy writing these drabbles too since I love Metz 😳 Well not that I approve of her actions as a vampire but she is a complicated character with many layers to her and I love that about her.

I have another drabble in mind based on Mohana's suggestion.

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.
omg omg RES

A double OMG? 😆

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: doll.12
haha ... For that u should have made it on abhiya na... U don't have a clue ... My heart was burning .. Seeing him with mathli.. ... What to do... Can't see him with her.. Hehe😆 dil tarapta hai... By the way why don't u try this out on abhiya too... Pleej..

To try it on Abhiya I need the sequence to be in place dear 😆 Ainvi I dont write racy stuff for the heck of it. I had written one for a TS long long ago 😆 This specific sequence on Abhiya that I wrote on AMetz? I don't think I can pen it on Abhiya but the next update on my SS may have such scenes 😛😆

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