SS : The 5:30 People -- part 7 --pg-40(24th December) - Page 8

Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.

I just read both the parts and I find it;s an amazing concept. i just loved the concept of 5.30 people and the name. its pretty amazing.

Actually its the title of the story that just didn't leave my mind due to certain reasons , and then I thought of this concept later. Glad to know that you like the title too. 😊

is this your first writeup? or you regularly do? you are pretty good i must say.

Before this I have written only one shots on DebLan (DWTG ). So its my first attempt to write something more than a one shot , and defo my 1st work on Abhiya. 😊

If u really think that I am good , than I will try to never let u down. 😊

I love Piyas sense of humor and Abhay offcourse. i would like to know more about how the concept 5.30 ppl came. do write about it if you can. and this concept has great scope of FF so if you can make it or a SS i suppose that can be amazing.

Never thought of writing this as an FF coz its a supernatural story and I am not sure I will actually be able to write a full-on supernatural FF.

But about turning it into an SS , I think I can give it a try.

waiting for next part

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

awsum update

the story is fats paced but i loved the way abhay-pia relationship has progressed..it is not rushed .

Glad to know that u didn't find the progress rushed. 😊

love pia here specially her humour & abhay's ancient style. their convo's were superb.

jeh is a jerk and i am glad pia taught him a good lesson but he got better of her in the end.

pia has accpeted abhay as vampire & friend again ..that was good and loved how abhay shared with her his past.

pia's cousin seems to know abhay but how is he also a supernatural? what is the secret of pia ? abhay should have told her that too earlier.

wonderful chapter

waiting for next part

Originally posted by: ObessedNN

Hello Ani!

Thanx 4 d pm.

It was an awesome update.👏 Loved Abhiya's convo.

That Amazon river thing was really funny.😆

Studin a lot of geography , na Nishu ? Else u wudn't hav noticed that. 😆

That Jeh Khurana is such a jerk. How cud he blackmail Piya... 😡

So Abhay's fungi suggestion actually worked.😃

Yeah , Piya is talented.

Who is this shiny green eyed person that was laughing at Abhay ?

What is this Prabal thing now? How does he know Abhay ?

Piya is dying... 😭 I hope that Misha is able to heip her.

After Piya is fine, the very 1st thing Abhay shud do is to kill Jeh brutally. 😈

Havin murderous thoughts , are we ? 😆

I must say ... u r gud at mysteries.

Update soon . Wud wait 4 the next chapter.😊

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

wow awesome update loved it
it's fabulous 👏ending left me doubtful 😕

That's what I was aiming for 😉

may be piya is also related to supernaturals😲
but i know both abhiya love each other now ❤️

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Liked it a lot. The second part I felt was a marked improvement over the first in terms of confidence and styling.

I really wanted someone to tell me that. 😃

you need to write more and i loved the ending.

I like cliffhangers 😆

Of that , I am certain 😉😆

you are one of the few people I could actually respect as a writer.

I have no idea , what makes U say that , but it means a lot to me . 😊

Please keep writing 😳

Originally posted by: Abhiya-4ever

Amazing updt n Thanks 4 pm..
Abhay & Piya bcm very fast frnds n i now she has accepted him as a Vamp

Yes ! Generous Piya , naa ? 😆

Luv Piya's sense of humour
N Piya fell for Abhay :-*

What is the secrer of Piya that Abhay wanna tell
Cont soon

Originally posted by: cuteariya

mind blowing update
loll pia dadi 😆
poor pia lost her parent 😭
god that jay jerk 😡
abhiya first meeting was lovely ❤️

that jerk jay still didn't leave chance to impress pia 😡

he sent marriage proposal at pia home 😡
abhay so want to kill him
OMG shocking revelation abhay is vampire 😲
still pia couldn't hate him
hell that jerk jay make MMS of pia disgusting pig 😡
yippee abhay gave her idea & its work 👏
but that jerk try to kill pia 😡
poor pia almost die but thank god abhay came on time
hope he cane save pia
pia was scared to die before letting abhay know abt her feeling to him
what abt this eclipse night? 😕
why abhay was waiting for pia & what he want to do with her? 😕
plz update soon

Originally posted by: rmifzala

hey read ur superb story in a go...just loved it...pls...pm me...really waiting for ur story!!!!!

Originally posted by: VISUforEternity

brilliant updt

hahaha pia is adorable, called abhay parisitic idoit😆

Yeah. Funny as she is 😆

lol fungi line

Jeh is🤬 ye kabhi sudhar nae skta... cheap he is

End is suspensefuisul, so abhay doesnt love pia but have have his own motives.. but pia has fallen for him..

eager to know what happens next

plz plz update soon