Sweetheart...read d story so far in a go...😉😉sweetheart...sorry to say this but for me this will be best ever story of urs forever though i loved all ur works.👏👏
sweetheart...i loved it so so much.😛😛
sweetheart...i want to say lot more & I will but not now. Its really late here. 4 in d morning. Before going to bed suddenly this story came to my mind as u asked me to approve after reading it whether u could do it in rishbala version so i thought to read few parts & Give my word but i couldnt stop. I got so into d story...loved d story lot more from part 8 Lol...i hope u know d reason. 😉😉
sweetheart...please start editing it in rishbala version now!!😃😃
sweetheart...i ll edit d comment tmrw so pls dont reply...😉😉
sweetheart...bye!!😛😛
res...
unres...
okay enough of sweethearts LOL...😆😆my sexy vampire made me go gaga for him & also made me use his trademark word sweetheart LOL😆😆
well, i have read the 1st two parts long go when u have started this story later i left it as i could hardly connect with d characters as i didnt watch PKYEK fully...only few episodes that too of abhay & piya but yesterday i started & nowhere i couldnt start...seriously Meg, u have written so awesomely...i really want to take ur hand & kiss it...😃😃
dipali will nicely fit in panchi's role lol...while reading only dipali came in frnt of my eyes in place of panchi LOL...😆😆
in the casino when abhay refused to drink which was handled to him by piya i thought oh okay..hero is admiring heroine so he wants to be in senses LOL😆😆 then only i came to know he drinks blood in wine glass...how i wish i get a peg LOL😆😆
when he showed his darkest secret to piya i thought she will go for a deadly faint but that girl was gawking his fangs & red eyes with so much interest LOL 😆😆
Meg, i cant believe u only wrote those sensuous scenes...😲😲i was shocked but i really enjoyed reading that shower scene & their further naughtiness...☺️☺️
but what was that? is that a honeymoon trip?? that too swiss...they went in a flash & returned in flash...dhoka dhoka dhoka...😡😡i expected at least two update will go in swiss trip but not even a para...never mind...u gave us lots of hot scenes so maaf kardiya...😉😉
i loved the scenes were he turns her to a vampire...😛😛his worries was palpable in his eyes for her but she was so strong & stubborn in her decision...😳😳
in part 9 in guess at the end u have asked apologizes to ur readers for making piya revenge on her family but i would say that was one brilliant move...even if u have killed them we wont mind...they tortured her & abused her so much so they deserve that punishment..glad they all were arrested...so dont ask apologizes in rishbala version LOL😆😆
if u ask me to pick one hottest scene then i would say..abhay licking piya's blood stained lips & kissing her...☺️☺️
Meg...i have lot more to say but i know u ll soon start this incredible story in rishbala version & there i ll give my detailed comments...😉😉
few requests & suggestions Meg...i wont mind if u use them or u go by ur way u have planned...😳😳
first thing if u could pls edit the first part soon & post it separately...bcos if u post on mass update few might miss to see this in pm thinking its abhiya story...second thing if u post one update in this week then i can get another update on mass update LOL...😆😆
in second chapter last line he says something like this...u will be mine...i will make u mine forever...that scene takes place in casino i guess & i seriously wish u place a kiss scene there...he could hypnotize her & kiss her...there starts the story "Kissed by the baddest bidder"😉😉
i know u will make bittuji play danish role but i want roma to be bittuji's wife LOL...😳😳
for a change balraj can be that drunkard bas***d madhu's dad bcos malik is so soft😳😳 & leelawati & dipali...the two lady vamps who tortured madhu LOL...🤣padmini, madhus sweet mother who is in heaven now LOL...😆😆
mukkund will fit in kabir's Role i guess...😆😆i had the urge to make sullu a bartender but no...he should not be a nice guy...😈😈 make him as the man who tried to molest madhu in the party or the goon who tried to force him on madhu...bcos both the monsters end were same...suck their blood & make them gayab LOL...🤣& finally u r allowed to add many more kisses & love making but never dare to edit any of those cozy scenes...LOL😆😆 they r so hot, romantic & passionate...☺️☺️
so i have given my final word & i know ur decision too...😉😉
i can bet & say all ur readers will love this story like hell...⭐️⭐️
u have an amazing creative mind...👏👏
thanks dear...😳😳
Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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