Abhiya FF : My Lover..My Owner Teaser on pg 39 [3/12] - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

interesting update
god abhay always hurt pia badly 😡 😡 He's compelled to be.
poor pia feeling really bad 🥺 🥺 In next update u all gonna cry for her 😭
abhay love her but hurt her more True ! But when there is love, u had to bear the pain too
fb was sad I didn't like the way abhay force pia 😡 😡 More fbs just like that or I should say worst than that is coming !
finally pia said her heart out all the pain 😭 😭 She had bear too much to be the tolerant one now
so abhay did all this bcoz he dnt want to loose pia He loves her and that's why he hurts mentally, physically or more because its scares him to death to be parted away from her as his light she is.
hope abhay will understand pia & trust her He won't ! U have to be really Very patience for it as Abhay is reluctant to leave Pia out of his mere sight.
continue soon. I will update it in Friday 😃 And thank u so much dear it has to be most lengthy comment on this FF 😳


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Thanks jaani 😛
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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! awesome update dear...loved it...😊


Thank u dear 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
when u gonna update dear 😭
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

when u gonna update dear 😭


Awww...😆 In evening 😳
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Hola people !! Here is the new update 😃 Please forgive the mistakes as I am doing it in rush.

This update has no Abhiya scenes but its important for the story. The next update is errmm...I won't tell 😛










5.Trusting The Slave (1)




Year : 1850

The daylight burns my skin. It feels as if it gonna staked my dermis with its thousands needles of silver. And I am just his slave. My heart has stopped its beats and my mind is reluctant to believe it. I am turned ! I am turned into those awful, dark creatures of night that haunts in our dreams. I hate myself but not more than him. My Master. He pulled me into darkness where there is no light, no dreams, no happiness, no escape from it. I loath him, no ! I despised him to my every fiber of skin and it will never change. My eyes slowly open but my eyelashes were too heavy to make it. The room was full dark, only a light coming through from a broken window was the only source. The sun was harsh today. An idea popped in my head. He told me that if we step into the sunlight it can turned ourselves in ashes. After having a lot of courage, I slowly got up. I know he is nowhere to be seen and I was glad for that. I walked to the door in small steps. I tried my every effort but the door was jammed. I broke that window with a heavy stick. I crawled up to it and slowly made my myself out from that dusty room. I spread my arms to feel the light that is going to blemish my white dermis. I was so glad. Weakness was there in my body but my mind was full of energy. I ran out of that place. How many miles I don't know but my only priority was get away from Abhayendra. I ran & ran. Those skeleton types haunted jungles can't scare me now. I was in some kind of village. I walked through the dusky road and watch through those small beautiful huts.


"Maithli !!" I heard him.

I gasped but didn't let him to hover my senses. I saw an old man sitting outside from his small house with a kid. I asked him if I can take shelter in his house and he agreed. Before letting me in he asked my name, I can't let him know my real name so I told him I am Gayatri. His house was more beautiful from inside. Those traditional curtains, decorations remind me of my own palace. My unbeaten heart wrench in pain of such heavy loss. My family. I missed them so much. I still get over the night when Abhayendra eventually killed a young girl, for my sake and turned her into ashes by those inflamed fire and people thought it was me who died in a fire accident so that no one be bothered to search for me. Days passed like this. The old man was just like my father. Caring, compassionate and helpful. He treated me as his own daughter and I was blessed by it.

One day, I was returning from my walk around the jungle, actually after the hunt, I found many villagers gathered around the house of the old man. Some were whispering and whimpering. I asked a woman to know what's the matter. She give a frightful look. "U don't know ! The kid who used to be with the old man was actually his grandson. His parents died in an accident. Being in poverty still he kept the child with himself. And now when the time was going fortunate, this has to be done !"


"What happened ? Please tell me !" I begged. I don't know but there was something very wrong, I felt.


The woman sobbed. "Last night, the kid went to the deep jungle and some wild animal attacked him ! And now the kid is no more!" She cried.

I cringe in fear. I stepped ahead from those crowd. The old man was crying, almost screaming in rage because of loosing his only family. I helplessly stared at him and the guilt pierced my dead heart. I stared at the lifeless body and something took my attention. A mark ! I moved closer and bent over my knees. I slowly touched the body and it was all so cold. My eyes moved to his neck and the horror struck in my throat ! Marks of two fangs were dig into his skin and some scratch around it.

I knew it who has done this and it just because of me. The old man's life is in danger because of me and I can't afford to loose him. He treated me as his own daughter and its not his fault that he gave me his shelter. I decided I'll leave this place too. And next time I'll make sure no human would be ever hurted just because of me.


Days passed into weeks. I was still safe but I don't know till when. I know he will catch me again and the after punishment would be a horror !! I gulped at the mere thought. I won't let again happened it.

One night, I was there in a dense forest of a village. I was here to quench my thirst and killed an cheetah. I was draining him dry when suddenly a noise of growling I heard. I was suspicious so I looked behind. I cringe in terror when I found a huge, fierce wolf groaning at me. His large size made me realize he is not a normal wolf. He is an werewolf, who so capable of hurting a newborn just like me. And he would eventually do it if I do something wrong. His yellow pupils reflecting my image and same goes with me. I knew our kind & werewolves are the most natural enemies from the very beginning and it may remained the same for eternity. I got back to the earth, when he groaned in tremendous level.


There was only me, a newborn and enormous wolf who was actually a werewolf. The moon reflected in his hazel yellowish irises. I stared at his beauty. Who wouldn't be lost in those eyes !! Before I could show my sharp fangs to him and attack him, he suddenly flopped down, nervously. He was close his eyes and his growl was slow. My heart wrench at the mere scene. In the dark night, escaping from my creator and an encounter with a werewolf, the thought amused me, somehow.


To a little bit of distance, I watched him in a detailed look. The wolf was now calm. I slowly made my way towards him. I realized he hurt his one of his leg and that's paining him the most. I slowly touched the place where his leather like skin got bruised and healed it with my mere touch. The wolf slowly leaned over and his eyes sparkling great fullness. I smiled at him as he got up to stand on his feet. He leaned over me this time rubbed his nose into my hair. It was cute. I laughed, it was tickling into my skin.

In a flicker of second...he stopped. His eyes never left me. A fog kind of gather around his heavy body as he closed his lashes. I stood blankly over there. He turned to human ! His body well build, lean, his eyes brown and a beautiful smile.


"This is real me." He stated.


I was speechless. "What ?"


"I am Jaydev." He smiled at me.


I wasn't going to tell him my real name, but then what?


"U don't need to lie Maithli, I know you." He grinned.


"What ? How do u know my real name ??" I was annoyed and took some steps backwards.

"Your kind always do this same. Every time a new name, new resident and new identity." He confidently spoke.



"But that doesn't answer of my question ! How do u know me Jaydev ??!!!" I infuriatingly asked.


Before his lips could parted, his eyes grew widened in shock. He was looking my back with fear. "No !!" He screamed.


The voice which always haunts in my wildest nightmares. The voice who authorized me in a most imprudent way. It hissed down to my ears...



"Princess... U caught !"




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Hope u all will like it 😆 And next update is quite long but will be not a boring one I will make sure 😳 Do LIKE & COMMENT please !






Love u all ❤️



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Edited by Abhiyan_SHREYA - 11 years ago
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Updated finally 😆
Edited by Abhiyan_SHREYA - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: VI-SU

oye where is update???


😆 Updating likha to hai 😆 Chal one hour bas 😉
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@Angel kar diya dear 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
it's ok shreyu😛awesome update 😃 Tfs 😛

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