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flora212

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awwe I like the plot😳 it seams cute excited for the next part

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Wow great story please update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story
thanks for sharing your story with us.

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sukuvivu

@sukuvivu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

AWESOME...I always wanted to read something spicy on abhiya Like this!!!

Thanks for writing shreya n i want link of the outsider too.plz giv na..

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Seema

@...Seema...

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

shreya maza agaya 😃

a v interesting start,

steel(abhay)partner in da mission turned out to b piya,she killed angelo n risked her life,abhay took da bullet upon himself n agay kia hota hay shreya k pm ka shiddat se intezar rahe ga.

Edited by vmpy - 11 years ago

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

awesome start...a very interesting concept...😃

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

it's just too awsum shreya.

i am watching homeland these days and i was just wondering if we will ever have a show like it on indian telly and i so hoped visu would be in it. show ka toh pata nahi but i m glad that i got an opportunity to read a story like that on them. though the concept is totally different but i lvd the starting.

really looking forward to read it more. i so luv to see intelligent ,smart women as cops or spies .(thanks to castle and homeland)

eagerly waiting to read the next part.

btw i luv the name blade and steel!

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Wow Woww what a concept. I totally love it. the title is amazing and reading the 1st update itself I can see how it fits. totally loved the fight and how they protected each other. smart and intelligent..superb.. waiting to read more.

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rida mahveen

@mahi4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Wow ! Interesting start 👏 loved da Fyt scene n how dey help each other. Eagerly waiting 4 da story to unfold 😃 ... Please update time n again , m dying 2 read it, literally addicted to it 😳

Edited by mahi4ever - 11 years ago