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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sketches of FATE : PART 2

A week before:

I was waiting for him.We had planned to go out for a movie and then go to an amusement park.He was late like always.

He looked pretty dressed up when he was coming to me.He wud always wear jeans and tshirts,but today he was more cool and charming...he was complete opposite to my dressing becoz im always a tomboy wearing my kitty shirt and jeans.My hair was short.I then stared into his mesmerizing looks and smiled.His blue eyes wud always bring a smile on my face.His brown hair glinted against the setting sun.He looked too perfect.

A:are u ready...?

Pi:im ready before a year and u r that late...

He was silent for the entire ride as we going in car...

He was silent all through the movie too..

I stared at him for 10 to 15 times if he will talk.,..but he was silent...and he didn't even noticed me staring at him...I gritted my teeth...

Finally wen the movie was over,I was tired and angy...My mind was going crazy with all the silence...becoz im a chatterbox and I love talking...its important to me as breathing...

Pi:god...im dying now...plz talk something else...

A:don't be over dramatic now...

Finally we stopped the car at our favorite amusement park...it was night 7pm now...I saw in the sky and noticed all the stars sparkling...and also a small streak of moon I seen...and we entered the park but there was no one in the park,...

Pi:Are u gng to talk or not?

A:wont your mouth be silent for a second...

Pi:it has been hours since u talked...

Then I turned and started walking..back to car...but suddenly abhay holded my hand and pulled me nearer and there was a bouquet of flowers in his hand now...it was attractive and beautiful with all my favorite flowers...with lilly's white and red roses... ...

Pi:for whom did u buy this bouquet...

A:cant u shut up...

P:ok... then I kept my hands on my mouth...

And then abhay went on his knees and...by giving the bouquet to me...

A:Piya...I love u...

P:wt?...r u crazy wts all this...?

Thank u so much for liking my story...

Plzz leave ur comments...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update. Brilliantly written. Excited for the next part what will be piyas answer .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Brilliant update Nithu Di!Thanks for pm!Waiting for next!Pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update..ah my like button is not working
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hehe piya was getting bored due to abhay's silence and jab abhay bola so she is shocked waiting for her answer hope something positive😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update 😉 Abhiya Rockzz😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update...waiting for piya's outburst...plz god save abhay ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww abhay is sooo romantic
n piya dumbo ufff hope she realize soon otherwise i ll bash her
amazing update
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
nice story..loved the updates..continue soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Sketches of FATE : PART 3

Keerthi:Piya...u cant always hid like this just come out ur college starts tomorrow...

My mom shouted...i then threw the book in my hand and stood up...

P:what...did u say the college starts tomorrow...

K:obviously...

I know my mom is enjoying by teasing me like this...

P:omg now I have to meet him everyday in college...then I thought abt the evening he had proposed me...he said pi..piya I love u...

P:wt the hell...i said at him...and yelled...

He stared at me simply...he drove me home after that in his car...but I replied him after get down of car..."im 100percent sure im not in love with u..."

Ab:il still wait piya...

P:u don't need to abhay...

I by telling this on that day returned back home...

And after a week,he was still waiting for my answer.

Was he crazy?...i told him this bestfriends falling in love I don't ever like...and I doint ever accept...he then told me that...

A:Im in love with u I ever since know u...

He made my vacation get wasted...all of a sudden I found inside my room hiding from him...from morning till night...

And the vacation is going to end tomorrow...

P:Abhay uuu...

Present day:

Pi:I thought he wud come for me to pickup but he is nowhere...that's a releif for me...i took my car now and drove to college...

I then picked my books from locker and walked towards my class...

The day passed and it was lunch break.i walked towardss caffeteria to meet him.but he was not there...

And the whole day ended,just like that without him...

It seems that he was avoiding me now...Now im felling terribl;e without him...actually without seeing him I couldn't be...

Pi:why did he not come yet...

Fate had planned proposals for everyone of us...I knew it was a fate but sketches of fate were perfect...y did it come between me and my best friend abhay...that stupid fate...

There's a thin line between friendship and love I think he misunderstood it...

Then I reached my house in my car thinking of abhay...

When I parked my car,I saw him entering his house with a girl...his house is opposite of our house...

P:who the hell was she? And y was he holding her hand?...

Wait was it T...?


Thank u so much everyone for reading my story nd liking it...

Now plz leave ur commnets for this Part...!

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