Abhiya One shot.- 'A perfect Replacement'

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kirti

@Andromeda001

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Beautiful OS indu. So Abhay is restless n jealous as he thinks Piya s going 2 replace him. Gosh Abhay when r u gonna learn dat there is no 2nd 4 Piya, it is either u or no one. I m sure Piya was just showing him all this. Wish we cud get Piya's POV too. Beautifully written

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

What a surprise Indu.. thanks for the OS. loved reading the small piece. Abhay is checking her contacts, his jealousy poor baby 😆 as i always say you manage to pen down Abhay's feelings so well and even in this small piece it's clearly visible. 👏

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Indu fantastic piece of writing...!! Loved it❤️

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silent.desire

@silent.desire

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Beautiful story. You explained Abhay's pain nicely. 🤗 Thank you and keep it up.

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Sh_Abhiya

@Sh_Abhiya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

awesome update , love the role reversal of abhiya , in pkyek pia jealous n become jalkukdi n but love here abhay was jealous

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

m kind of confuse..! dere is no one who cn replace abhay in piya's life..! and y didn't u pm me??

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: piaviviandsena
m kind of confuse..! dere is no one who cn replace abhay in piya's life..! and y didn't u pm me??

confused-why dear?
Tell me..i will clear it.. 😊

you're right dear. It is that sometimes men like Abhay too need assurance that they matter!

I pmd no one dear. I am going through extreme work preassure! I just got a few minutes time..and wrote it to refresh myself. Sorry! :( I thought nt to bother my readers wth this little nothing! Bt thank you so much for reading it. 🤗

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Oh Indu, That was really very touching. No matter how much Abhay wanted Piya to stay away from him, it would only leave him broken in all senses if she moved on.
This was really a heart wrenching OS

Please do write more esp with Abhiya coming together.