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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
wonderful update

their get together was lovely. it was great to see all of them having so much fun and enjoyment. abhay is genuinely trying to make amends for his past mistakes and he is really lucky to have friends who have trusted him again and taken him back in their lives. convo b/w tora and abhay was good..it looks like both abhay and pia can't hide anything from her.

the best part about their little party was the personal touch abhay put in their with tora's help and no wonder pia knew it was done for her.both abhay-pia are not able to control the force pulling them towards each other and i wonder how long can they actually deny it . tora and risa were smart enough to give them some free space.

loved how excited and happy abhay was when he was talking with pia. the dance sequence was lovely. they were too lost in each other to notice anything. they were in a blissful state .

it seems pia really has a hard task at hand now of sorting out her feelings and that too soon coz it looks like abhay has clarity regarding his feelings even though he hasn't put them across her or in words.

kate is blinded by her rage and ego and it will definitely lead her to wrong path. it actually makes her dangerous as she is desperate now and can go to any lengths. pia and abhay needs to be careful of her.


all in all an amazing update. just loved it.


Edited by MS-meghasharma - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
WOW!! fantastic update dear...loved it...
Going to listen to this song now...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Rock on...beautiful update.. It WAs indeed full of feelings...abhay was trying to understand the feeling and expressions of piya while piya was lil bit conscious of the surrounding with their two friends... After a long time they all spent time together and had a very joyful time...will be eagerly waiting for next update dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
OMG after so long...
Anyway its a pleasant
surprise
its a fantastic update
you have describe very graceful n beautiful their every emotion, bond, care, friendship, hesitation
you have totally rock it
thanks for the pm
plz continue soon
eagerly waitting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
its book 2 i need to catch up old story before reaching here so i am bookmarking here 😆
thanks for pm 🤗
Edited by ..ClickitBaby.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
nice update... The decorations... & everything kate... Still in her world with abhay... !! Lyk the last part.. !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Beautiful i just read the last two chapters
Loved the abhIya scene

What help does haseena needs regarding abhay
I hope piya tells Anik her decision soon
Loved abhay Tora scene
Loved the party scene and most of all abhiya

I just love how you girls pen down everything in writing
Loved it

Sorry for late reply on last one but I did on time for this update

Continue soon
And thanks for the pm
Edited by Abhiya_Visu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
wow indu tora...great job...mindblowing update...loved it totally...piya is confused abt her feelings...and abhay is not...it was nice to see only abhay, piya, risa and tora...just them and no one else to intrupt or be villan or come in between for a change...

and this kate...grrr... 😡 what is she planning...hope piya and abhay and risa and tora will be ok...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

I so like being first :D
Coming to the update, wow finally you guys updated this. It's always been one of my favourite stories. I love the dance.

PS. I think you missed two e's in tete a tete. ;) Just saying. :P

Thanks so much for pointing it out Shreya! No. I didn't. But my lappy did! I type things alright and then my lappy turns it to some mummy jumbo alien thing...I have no clue about!!! Donno how the hell it does it! Too frustrating! 😡

Anyways tried fixing it but with no result! Every time I type it and post, the same alien thing crops up!! 😕Tried 7 times and failed. So changing it altogether. 🥱
Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: doll.12

Can I also get pm???

Yeah of course dear!! Why--didn't I pm you? 😲

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