FF-Time and Again[Book 3]COMPLETE!Epilogue now up.PM list page 74*

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: pink_rose
Hey,

Please add me to your PM list. I read your update and note just now.

Due to some personal problems I was not that regular in IF for the last couple of weeks as such did not see your message.

Hi. I can add you- but would you be willing to comment? Because I want to avoid PMing anyone who won't comment.

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#532

You know i always read this and sorry i was out of country so couldnt update my comments still you didnt add my name in pm :/ neither did i ever leave an impression of not wanting to read anything you write

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.
You know i always read this and sorry i was out of country so couldnt update my comments still you didnt add my name in pm :/ neither did i ever leave an impression of not wanting to read anything you write

I didn't add anyone who didn't say. I'll add you😳

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Nshahtalati

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Posted: 11 years ago

#534

Wow I read it. It's amazing. U are the best writer. The way u wrote every one emotion. And the best part was Abhay and Piya part. I loved it very much, but little sed for Piya and happy too. I hope every things go well after this in Piya life. 👏Ohhh and I am the first one to comment after update yahooo.

Edited by nshahtalati - 11 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: --peehu--
What about me shreya :O

Bola kyun nahi madam aapne. Chalo I will pm you

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: nshahtalati
Wow I read it. It's amazing. U are the best writer. The way u wrote every one emotion. And the best part was Abhay and Piya part. I loved it very much, but little sed for Piya and happy too. I hope every things go well after this in Piya life.👏Ohhh and I am the first one to comment after update yahooo.

Oh my. Thank you so much. Glad you liked. :)
Things will be bittersweet for Piya at least now

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pink_rose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#537

Thanks for the PM.

I will be out of station the entire next weeks starting from today. Its a long overdue break I will be taking from my schedule.

Once I am back I will read the update and add my comments for it.

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megha sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#538

amazing update .

pia is a vampire and abhiya are married..wow.

so finally sid has betrayed maithili even though it was for himself. sid's betrayal was totally unexpected for maithili and i am sure she would get more angry now since she did started loving him. serves her right...this is the biggest punishment she could get being betrayed by the person who u trust .

sid has come out like a master player in all this fiasco. he was the one who was actually turned situations in his favour.

alina must be happy to see sid's reaction. fight b/w alina and maithili was fierce. hopefully she would be fine soon.

misha has seen everything...that was unexpected. sid came at the right time to nudge abhay and got him out of his dilemma.

once again abhay is feeling guilty and i am glad pia cleared it out for him. poor luke it seems like is struck in b/w. so abhay and pia have to exchange their blood thrice and he has sired her so that means pia would have to do everything which he says. ( in tvd they showed sire bond thing like this only)

liked misha-alina-pia convo when they were doing her makeup for her wedding. it was funny and loved how they kept on teasing her.

now in the last scene everyone is looking shocked at pia as she is crying & hugging misha...is it coz of blood tears?didn't they tell pia or doesn't she know vampires have blood tears??

waiting for next update

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
amazing update .
pia is a vampire and abhiya are married..wow.

so finally sid has betrayed maithili even though it was for himself. sid's betrayal was totally unexpected for maithili and i am sure she would get more angry now since she did started loving him. serves her right...this is the biggest punishment she could get being betrayed by the person who u trust .

sid has come out like a master player in all this fiasco. he was the one who was actually turned situations in his favour.

Yup. Sid's planned his betrayal well. He was never under her control.

alina must be happy to see sid's reaction. fight b/w alina and maithili was fierce. hopefully she would be fine soon.

misha has seen everything...that was unexpected. sid came at the right time to nudge abhay and got him out of his dilemma.

once again abhay is feeling guilty and i am glad pia cleared it out for him. poor luke it seems like is struck in b/w. so abhay and pia have to exchange their blood thrice and he has sired her so that means pia would have to do everything which he says. ( in tvd they showed sire bond thing like this only)

Err...no. I don't want the element of control in a relationship and I dunno abt TVD since I only read the books and I hear they're different from the show. Thrice is just a number which sounded balanced. Abhay won't force Piya to do anything.

liked misha-alina-pia convo when they were doing her makeup for her wedding. it was funny and loved how they kept on teasing her.

now in the last scene everyone is looking shocked at pia as she is crying & hugging misha...is it coz of blood tears?didn't they tell pia or doesn't she know vampires have blood tears??

waiting for next update

Er... I wasn't planning blood tears. I'll give the explanation later on :)

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harinisriram39

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Posted: 11 years ago

#540

So Abhay, Sid and Alina managed to reach before Piya died and it must have been quiet a shock to Maithili seeing Siddharth not supporting her.

And Abhay had to turn Piya so that she would not be lost for ever and now Piya is a vampire now 😭 (Still I cannot think of another way how Abhay and Piya could be together and its better to think of her as a vampire than to have both of them die. Wish she could have been an immortal in another way. But honestly I dont have an idea how)

The revelation that Abhay is a vampire and Piya now has become one, may not be that shocking to Misha, because she has already experienced being close to a vampire - Maithili when she tries to kill all the three sisters. And knowing Misha - she is an extreme strong person. Buts its really sad for her that she already lost a sister and now will be distanced from her best friend and sister.

So Alina came to know that Sid never wanted Piya to be killed or Maithili to win. He was only buying time and was hinting to Abhay whenever Piya was in danger.

Good or bad, he wanted to be a master of his own will.

The subsequent fight scene was too good. Alina asked Natalya to give her powers. But why would Natalya give powers to Alina - I mean normally the elders or the rulers would not interfere in ever supernatural fight. Did Natalya give her powers because she wanted good to win over evil this time?

And why was Alina in joy on getting to know that Piya is a vampire now. Had she been seeing this for a while or was this in the plan too.

And how could Sid heal Alina instantly from the wounds created by spells. They could not be healed that easily, right.

Abhay may still be confused about Sid, but after this atleast he wont distrust him. Good of Luke to come there and lend his support to Abhay. Looks like he would share good bond with Piya as Abhay would always be in silent mode when she asks him questions :-)

And Piya also was not shocked to core that she became a vampire. She was not against becoming one because she wanted to be with Abhay. She had always seen the good side of vampires and do not loathe them and while she was almost dying, she wished to be with Abhay in any form rather than being separated from him.

Despite the initial heartbreaks, Piya and Misha were in their usual self. "I suppose the Khadoos personality is transmitted through blood, is it?

I was actually imagining Misha saying that and was laughing out loud. Misha will always be Misha and her complaints on dressing up like a genteel lady :-)

And then Abhay Piya Marriage. The much awaited event took place with no sort of glum or tension. Just like it had to be.

Alina had made sure that Piya had enough blood in her system that she did not feel the thirst despite being a-midst so many humans. For just a few hours new born Piya seemed to be in full control, just like a new bride on the eve of her marriage. Is it because she was fully fed or did Alina cast any spell on her making her forget her thirst.

It took Abhay an year and Haseena twenty before they could get a control over themselves. But things were different then. They lived in an era of violence and even humans were blood thirsty.

And Chand, Haseena Luke were astonished seeing Piya's tears. If they were blood tears, they would not be astonished, but shocked lest anyone notice this. Were they astonished because Piya could shed human tears? Or is this because of her being so controlled though she is a new born?

Or is Piya more than a normal vampire. Whatever Abhay must be relieved of his protect Piya mission as Piya would be more stronger as a new born vampire. And no more stay away from him.

Wonder what will Abhay do now as he will no longer be needed to protect Piya , the way he had to while she was human 😆

Edited by harinisriram39 - 11 years ago