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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Chapter but I still think Pia should tell Abhay about her been Piyali and I think this against be used as a weapon against them by Sid and Mathali
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Posted: 11 years ago
I was not expecting an update so soon and my my, we have two. Oh Shreya, itni speed mein mat jaao. Abb yeh bhi jaldi khatam ho gaya toh hamara kya hoga.

So the scene opens with Siddharth and Maithili. And she is happy that Siddharth is betraying them and they are so close to Victory. This reminds me of the scene in May when Maithili is introduced as a vampire. They had a scheme where Metz was to drink Piya's blood at a specific time ,to gain the ultimate powers and Abhay was to be kept out of their way. So what is their scheme now that they feel that they are close to victory. Planning to drink Piya's blood again. Are they planning everything together or do they have separate plans of their own. Maithili wanted Abhayendra at any cost and Siddharth was just a means. This she would not want Siddharth to know and she must be having her own plans. Coming to Siddharth, he was his true self when he was with Piyali. He spoke to her as if he was speaking to himself, straight from his heart. Perhaps he was cheating on Metz assuring her that he is betraying them so as to justify his actions. But does he have his own separate plans. At any rate, he would not want to be used as a puppet where Maithili pulls the strings.

And then we have Abhiya moments. It felt really comforting to see them at peace forgetting the worries of the world for the time being. After a heated confrontation and a intense confession, they need to be calm and so they were, savoring each and every moment in a peaceful way and not allowing their conversations into another list of arguments.
And they did not want to part also.
May be Not earlier, but now being dragged into the supernatural world, Piya does not actually mind turning into a vampire just to be with him and not wanting to giving him excuses for keeping things from her just to protect her.

And we have the kabaab mein adorable couple MishKa. Reminds me of old days Misha, when she first senses something between Abhay and Piya, when she catches Piya redhanded coming into the house at early hours (the episode where Abhay kidnaps her and takes her to a vampire cave). Misha asks her with whom and how she spent the night and Piya accidentally blurts out Abhay's name and Misha teases her. This one also reminded me of the same old Misha.
Kaash Kabir usse keh paata - Apni behen se kuch toh seekh Misha :-)
But then she wouldn't be our Mishi , right?

Natalya and Luke were in town for few weeks and they had come to invite the Raichands for "The Succession" What was the emergency in this that Haseena called Abhay to come home fast. So when were Natalya and Luke at Raichand's place? During the time of the werewolf attack or later when Abhay dropped Piya home? Because before their confrontation, Abhay was with them. If Haseena had called Abhay, before the fight , to inform about Natalya's visit, then she did not tell him when he came home after the fight and was still in a state of shock that Piya got her memories and everyone except him knew about that. So what was the emergency?

Coming to Natalya and Luke, Like everyone else, I thought they were a couple. But she sired him, meaning she is his creator. I first thought that she was his biological mother, before it became clear that she must have been the one who turned him.
If Luke was curious about humans, now he really wanted to be among them esp after meeting Piya. He knew about Abhay having a mate. But getting to know to that she is a human and after getting to meet her, he is all the more curious to spend time with them.
And lo, he meets Dishu.

And we have Natalya meeting her father who is a wizard. So does he also reside somewhere near Dehradhun? Does he know Reina then?
Must atleast know about her if not having met her. Surprising he chose to meet her during her visit in Dehradhun, unless he lived close by. But its a stupid question of mine. Wizards have their own ways of transport. They can apparate and travel in time. But it looks like they are meeting after a long time. And he is also not happy at his daughter turned into a vampire and that too without her consent.
First I thought that it would have been Siddharth who turned her into a vampire. Especially when she said that a friend of Luke helped her in eliminating the vampire who turned her and Abhay also in their conversation, mentions to Piya having helped Luke in saving his mother's - Natalya's life. (By the way is it proper to mention as his mother. They are not couple but they dont behave as mother and son I guess). But when she said that the vampire did not die an easy death and he suffered, it should be some one else and not Siddharth.

And we have some good moments between Luke and Dishu. But where is all this heading to. I mean if Disha were a mere human or if Disha were actually Reina (Though I thought Disha was Reina, now I dont think it is she and I would like the suspense to be maintained till you decide to disclose it). Did Alina sense that Luke was a vampire. She knew where Abhay was when Haseena told Piya that Abhay left home. Since Haseena and Alina might have plotted that Alina, must also be aware that Abhay was not just brooding but engaged with someone. But did she know they were vampires and sent Piya just like that. or did she know about these vampires that they dont harm humans unnecessarily. They have been living for some weeks in Dehradhun. As a Werewolf queen, would she keep a track on the vampires close in the city?
If she knew everything about Luke and Natalya and their relationship with the Raichands, would she approve of his friendship with Disha, considering Disha being a mere human?

And again, we have Abhiya moments. I always wanted Abhay to be with her in her room, (honestly just for some sweet nothings and not something serious šŸ˜†) But I never expected Abhay to come out open and do whatever he did. I thought he would silently watch her going to sleep and admiring her thus. Because that is the Abhay we all knew.

Then again I am not surprised at his advance, because all these days, both of them have been through tremendous stress which would have taken a toll on their physical self and now that their minds have calmed down, their bodies control the minds now. After all body and mind are the part of the same system.

Now what exactly did Piya want by asking him which side of the bed he wanted to take . This is really a very innocent question please šŸ˜›

Your writing skills will never cease to amaze me. The plot, the situation and the dialogues are written in a very professional way. Reading your works gives me the same feeling when I read the works of reputed fiction authors.

My comments for Episode 41 follows :-)



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Posted: 11 years ago
Coming to Chapter 41

The episode opens with Alina Disha Convo. My questions about Alina's knowledge on Lukas are the same as per my earlier comment. What was the photograph which Disha was staring at? Some significance or just a directorial touch.

We have the conversation between Natalya and Luke with him telling her about his new acquaintance. But then she says whenever she met Alina, she gives similar vibes. So Alina's and Natalya's paths have crossed.

Piya wakes up in a happy mood and she finds Misha back to her teasing mode. The line "Super Model returns home after a wild night" really cracked me up. Just like the good old Misha from the show.Their cute fight reminded me of Panchi Misha old times with Madhu intervening and Piya enjoying the fight.
And Alina and Piya have their own moments. But here I once again felt that Alina could be Reina. Alina asks Piya to tell him about her time travel and that she is Piyali. But then this is supposed to be Reina's secret. How could Alina ask Piya to reveal it Abhay unless Reina permits the right time. Ofcourse it could be if Alina is Reina or Reina had asked Alina to do so. But then what did Reina actually want.
She or through Alina did not want Piya to disclose her identity infront of Sid when she met him as Piyali. It could be because, she knew Siddharth could be in his own self and shed all the quality of deceit and speak his heart out. But the moment Abhiya confess and accept their love, Alina/Reina wants Piya to tell Abhay that she is Piyali. Why did she sent Piya into the past when Piya already knew the story of the trio? and Now why does she want Piya to tell everything to Abhay.
Even I am not sure of his reactions. To Abhay - Piyali was a good friend. He treated her with more respect and then he hated her because of Siddharth's lie. When he found that out after all these years, he felt a sense of remorse and also was saddened when he knew that Piyali actually might have loved him. What would be his feelings if he met Piyali now. Few weeks (or a month before) when he saw her, he was filled with rage that he not retained his control, he would have almost killed her. Now if he met her (not knowing that she is Piya) he may have expressed his remorse and treated her with same respect. But I doubt if he would have that kind of feeling towards her. When you really respect a person, the way Abhayendra once respected Piyali, that feeling may easily not be replaced with passion or love. Just like Abhay had for Alina in the show. If he comes to know that Piya is none other than Piyali, I doubt if he would take it lightly. But I am also interested to know his reaction. Thats why I am with Piya, when she hesitates to break this information to him. I am not saying that she is right. But she does have her inhibitions. She also knows that Abhay hates Piyali for some reasons and is not aware that Siddharth has clarified it to Abhay. Wish Piya could discuss more on this with Alina instead of just having Alina telling her what to do.

I am also interested more in his reaction when she tells him that she has to meet Siddharth as Piyali. He would never allow her to do that. But Reina /Alina wanted Piya to meet Siddharth. To make him feel guilty, to bring out the old Siddharth. How could Alina think that Abhay would allow further meetings of Piyali with Siddharth? I expected it otherwise. I thought Piya would ask Alina if she should tell Abhay about her time travel or atleast what she should tell him if he asked her how she got her memories back. Did Alina also wanted to know how Abhay would react?

Coming to Abhiya convo. I dont wish to start if their actions (as in the last episode) were of adult types or not. But their convos are more high level. Their state of mind while discussing things is beyond the comprehension of a simple mind šŸ˜† .Just kidding.
And besides, you're beautiful, all riled up. It makes me want to lots of things which aren't appropriate for a college campus-"
This line also cracked me up. Yeh log college mein kya kya nahi kiye šŸ˜†
Locker mein, library mein, finally class room mein bhi

So they did talk about Siddharth and shared with each other their own experiences and point of views about him

Misha, I can understand her concern. If Abhay had remained consistent in his behaviour, she would never have doubted his love for Piya. But like she said in the show - This Abhay na kabhi on toh kabhi off, Piya ke feelings ke saath khel raha hai. But she did sense this time that Abhiya were like sort of in a serious relationship. Like taking their relationship forward.

Good to see T again. Her presence makes Mt.College complete . (noth without Trangad ofcourse) - But I wish Abhay told her how may BFs she herself changed - First Kabir, then Abhay (though it was a pretense most of the time), She tried to flirt with Siddharth and it flopped and then back to Kabir and she would be on the look out for any handsome guy. But Abhay is more sensible than getting involved in the cat fights.

It was odd that Abhay expressed his concern over the worry lit face of Ms.Gupta. He normally does not interfere into other people's business unless he knows something more about Ms Gupta...
And what is this Tommy Tuppence N or M. A directorial(ALS) touch šŸ˜†.
So what exactly perturbed Ms.Gupta. Did Luke trigger some long lost feelings within her. We never got to know about her family except that she treated Alina as her family.

And thanks for the lines describing Kabir's feelings. You know Shreya, how much I always wanted Kabir to play in an important role post leap also. Pre leap, Kabir was one person who understood Abhiya's feelings towards each other perfectly.
He tells after the dance competition, right, that he does not know what feelings Abhay and Piya have towards each other. But he is sure that Abhay cares for her and Piya cares for Abhay equally and whatever between them, he would not have it go wrong just because of Kabir. After all Kabir is the good guy. I really loved Kabir for that scene. Thanks for specially mentioning Kabir and his POV on Abhiya. Post leap, everyone were treated like dumbos.

And Abhiya again. She wanted him to be normal , make friends. His being a vampire is not an excuse. She simply did not want him to be sentenced to loneliness.In the show also, when Abhay kidnaps her and takes her to the vampire cave and demands to know how she could play so cheap as to play with his feelings, she says that she did this only to make him feel happy. She could not understand why he should suffer a heartbreak for a princess who was dead 200 years ago. Her intention of knowing the truth was not out of meanness but she wanted the invisible wall between them to collapse.
Its not that vampires have to be anti social. After all she had seen Siddharth now and then as he moved comfortably with humans as a part of them. So why should Abhay stay away from all this.

So finally Abhay has convinced Piya to resign from Siddharth's office. But I dont think she would resign. Alina may talk her out of it. I am more and more intrigued with the motives of Reina and Alina. From the time of werewolf attack Reina has not come as herself. If she desired Abhiya union, then we dont get to see her rejoice. We get to see everything only from Alina's eyes. I wont ask who Reina is as it would be good to wait till the appropriate moment when her identity is disclosed. But I do want to know what exactly is her motive which she, at present, is trying to get via Alina( If Reina is not Alina)

Luke has someone to share his feelings with. Natalya seems to be understanding.
But what did Luke mean by saying
"But then why did she come here yesterday? She was so aloof today."

Where did Disha come yesterday. He met her at her house, right?

Will the succession fiasco of Natalya, interfere in Abhiya's life some how.
Will we get to see more of Marcus.
Is there something more to Luke Disha's story

I think the story will move from the normal college day to day life into more supernatural mode. If Yes, then I am super duper excited.
I want more Abhiya action scenes (not just romance or supernatural fights but more of mind game- Hunger games District 11, District 13 šŸ˜†

Thanks for double update Shreya. This came as a surprise. But please itni jadli bhi update mat karo. Aggar Likhna complete kiya, toh episodes bank karo. Will feel very empty if this too gets completed soon.

Hope to get more clarifications in the next update.

Thanks a lot Shreya šŸ¤—


Edited by harinisriram39 - 11 years ago
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Edited by FieryHeart - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry 4 late coment shreya ...mera xam ta ...whose side Siddharth is ...he is so confusing...I realy want him 2 b on Piyali side ...
abhiya scene was great
so Pia is resigning from siddharth's office...I hope Alina convinced her 2 meet him as piyali
Edited by hema_rawat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
another nice part ā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļø
abhiya scenes were cute 😳
bt these 2 idiots seems like nw like abhay piya is also in hide hide mission 😔
bt wats mishu's prob ?šŸ˜• dos c wnt kabir 2 b like abhay ? as c keeps on complaining about wat he is doing 2 piya 2 kabir šŸ˜†
luke-dishu looks interesting šŸ˜›
missing sidina šŸ˜”
tnx 4r the pm 😊
n sorry 4r commenting late šŸ˜’
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sh_Abhiya

excellent update + fullttoo enjoying update + some light moment or shud i say love moment or impressing moment ( hope he succeed in his impression so dat new angle / love will start )
so mr luke fall in love with dishu , when he said to natalya dat time natalya expression was mindblowing ( imagine kiya ) after mr luke trying to impressed dishu but look like she is hard nut n he shud do more hard work for mission to get his soulmate

arre wah itni jaldi decide kar liya ki dishu is his soulmate? what if she isn't?šŸ˜†


n our cutipie , naughty , stubberness couple abhiya moment , pia n abhay moment in car in college , every scenes of abhiya fullttoo enjoying n love the misha staring session to pia-abhay when both talking each other look like misha is not sis of pia but misha is pia boyfriend n she jealous from abhay


it's a sibling thing. we're often protective about her sisters/brothers and Misha was quite protective of Piya right from the very beginning. So her reaction is pretty normal😳


one thing , hope pia tell everything to abhay otherwise this hiding session will create big problem in future

Haha. Yeah she will soonšŸ˜›


thanks for pm n continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..

dishu ne luke se aise kyun baat ki. whats troubling her.

and btw even i m dying to know how will abhay react when he gets to know it was pia who had travelled in time to meet him as piyali



Usne kyun baat ki tumhi bata do na dishušŸ˜†šŸ˜†

haha lol that's supposed to be the BIG one, isnt itšŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aadi720

nice update...

abhiya scenes were awesome... loved there banter!!!!
continue soon!!!
thanks for the pm...


Glad you liked :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu

Wow shreya

I just reAd the last couple of chapters in one go
Loved it
I so glad abhay finally got some senses
I wished they showed it like this in the show
Very well written šŸ‘ It was mindblowing and fantabulous
I am confused about Sid. Is he playing a game with Maithali or abhiya and Alina and ?


maybe he is just being a guy and two timing both metz and alinašŸ˜‰


Alina is Reina finally
I loved chandeena plan to set up abhiya
I liking Luke
Luke and Dishu cool
I felt bad for Luke when Dishu said it has too stop
But I guess Dishu has her own probs like Natalya said
I eager to know when piya tells abhay about her going to the past
And abhay reaction
Loved it all
All the chapters written really well
Awesome
Fantastic
Superb
Amazing
Mind blowing
Love how you write
Keep up the great work
Thanks for the pm's
And sorry for late replies

thanks so much. Hmm...wait for a couple for chaps. You will get to knowšŸ˜›


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Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

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