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Originally posted by: ashu1909

nice update

Originally posted by: cool_sri

awesome start!!!!!!

Originally posted by: zoshad3119

awesome update dear...

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing start

waiting to read more

Originally posted by: maria090

nice update ❤️

Thanks a lot all🤗 aww I will try to update soon.😳

Originally posted by: Desire6

Wr s Abhay.. Too much of mystery.. Cant waito read next part,lovly updt

Thanks🤗and I am happy you find a mystery in Abhay and I will try to update as soon as possible.

Originally posted by: janvie

Res.😊

Shitt di,I readed it just the same time you posted but didn't res then and damn,I'm in train right now,Network problem.😡😭 😆😆

Unres

Wow Di,Such an Wonderfully Awesome and Amazing update!👏👏⭐️I loved it alot.❤️

So Piya is Missing her Abhay-endra.I loved their first meeting.❤️It was just Simply Rocking.

And how Abhay said to Mish,"So lets leave your selfless sister here..".Aww That was such a Cute,Naughty Abhay,I'm loving this Abhay so much already.Don't know why but I'm sure the 2nd Abhay must be Akdu like our Asli Waala of the Show.😉 🤣🤣

So What happened exactly that He went missing with his mom?!I'm eagerly waiting for the mysteries revealations and to see their love-story now.

Loved Misha-Piya bonding like always.

I loved the way you described Pia's emotions,That's Simply Beautiful.😳 👏👏⭐️

I'm excited to see how She have taught lesson to Mish and Abhay in the past.😉 😆And Especially to Our Mr.Casanova. 🤣 🤣

The Precap is so Lovely and Heart-Touching.❤️ 🤗 😳

Why does Misha everywhere mistrusts My Abhay.😡But what I loved most is Piya saying,

"He is not a Cheat!"I loved it always whenever Piya or Abhay comes in the defense of each other.❤️ 😳 😆

And Yup My Angel Abhay can never ever cheat on his life Piya. 😉 😳

Pls Continue Soon.😊 😳 😳

And Thanks in advance for the PM.😛 😆

P.S.:-No Shahi di,I still haven't thankyou enough for writing such a beautiful FF on My Abhiya.😛 😉 😆

🤗

I love you so much.❤️Ahaan.😉 😳 😆

🤗❤️Aww my sweetheart Thanks a lot dear muaah lovely comment dear...🤣 ya Abhay one is cool and about 2 I cannot say you now anything...🤣 Ya about lesson from Pia... it will be shown in flashback...😆 there will be good lot part of Abhayendra and Pia like how they came closer...❤️ Misha never mistrust Abhay it is she cannot see her sister Pia sad re.. she loves her a lot and specially in this ff you know only she knows about them so she do cares a lot for Pia. Ya Abhay name itself says you angel. All the stories and mysteries will be unfold at times..

Originally posted by: nidu-dsena

amazing update shahi 🤗
too mysterious 😊 im eagerly waiting aisa kya hua between abhay1 n pia
dat he left her..
u described d characters very beautifully
haaaye i was imagining d whole scenes while reading 😳

Thanks 🤗😲😲tu ne itna seriously padke rigorously comment diya. Thanks a lot Nidu...🤗 aww I am happy you taking so much interest to know everything... and really I am happy that you imagined the scene...😳

Originally posted by: singhshailesh86

wow , from first chapter , mystery started + painfull + fun loving moment
u describe every scenes in well mannered whether pia feeling about abhay , or room decoration
waiting for nxt for second abhay entery & how pia will react in party when she will see abhay
thanks for pm & continue soon

Thanks 🤗 aww you loved first chapter and I am happy you loved all phase... a party Misha was telling was one from which she came but ya parties will be there in future and thanks a lot you understood all scenes clearly. I guess Abhay will not meet her in party but some where else and I still need to write that part but till then we have Abhayendra and Pia...😳 most welcome and I will try to update it as soon as possible..

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

Nice update Shahi 👏 There's so much mystery surrounding Abhay esp from Pia's flashback n precap. Misha feels Abhay cheated on her but Pia denies it strongly. I am waiting to know what actually went wrong b/w Pia n Abhayendra aka Abhay1 n wanna know how Abhay2 fits into this story. I have a feeling Pia will run into Abhay2 in the party 😆 The ambience of the back drop was well explained Shahi n I could imagine it while reading. Good one n thanks for the PM 😳

Thanks 🤗 a party Misha was telling was one from which she came but ya parties will be there in future and thanks a lot you understood all scenes clearly. I guess Abhay will not meet her in party but some where else and I still need to write that part but till then we have Abhayendra and Pia...😳 and thanks you found a mystery in Abhay 1 as well and ya everyone wants to know what and Abhay 2 fit here and yes Pia will definitely go behind him at first I mean anyone because he will look replica of abhay1 with minute change...😳 and most welcome.

Originally posted by: Kawan

Asum update

Thanks 🤗

Originally posted by: ..Cute_Angel..

Awesome update shahi

Loved d flashback ...Casanova Abhay😉

Thanks 🤗😉Ahaan so mam ko bhi Casanova pasand aya hai.. Thanks re that everyone welcomed Abhayendra as he is show Casanova...😆

Originally posted by: vaani21

Very interesting update shahi!!

Luved the way u have explained Pia's emotions.👏

Thanks 🤗 and I am happy you found it interesting and loved Pia's emotions.

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal

Lovely starting...plzz pm me ur next update...I love it😊

Thanks 🤗 and ya sure I will pm next part as well.

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu

Wow amazing update

Written really well

I cannot w8 till abhay raichand entry lol

Thanks for pm

Continue soon

Thanks 🤗 ya everyone keen to know and meet Abhay Raichand he will enter but till then have fun with our own Casanova Abhayendra.😳 Most welcome and ya I will update it as soon as possible.

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

will read soon and comment

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the story seems different. nice start shahi. liked it. I wonder what happened to Abhay that he left and never came back. and it only made me think more if Abhay is vampire or human? btw is it human story of supernatural involved here? Abhay pias meeting was nicely written. thanks for the pm. looking fwd to the story.

🤗Thanks a lot Tanzie and most welcome to comment first time on my post. It means a lot. Aww ya I cannot say anything about it now😳 but I am happy you all thinking. Aww thanks you loved Abhay and Pia's meeting. Most welcome and I will update it as soon as possible.

updated finally Gosh why I was having problem to upload banner..

Nyc start shahi waise mai b soch rai thi who is abhay hmm nd woh thakur hai😔raichand kyu nai hope mera abhay jaldi aa jaye...hm tohdi confusing story hai..par baat be clear ho jaye...