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Part 2

"Who is the guy you were with?"

"Jai Khurana, he's a college-mate of mine. We have 2-3 classes together... He's such a cute flirt di. He is an awesome company to be with!"

"Woah! Hold on Girl!"

"Ha! Sorry di!"

"Listen Piya, Khuranas are not good company to keep!"

"Business Rivalry? C'mon di! Thats Abhay and Dad's business! We should chill out!"

"ITS NOT JUST BUSINESS RIVALRY..."

Piya was shocked seeing this behavior of Amrita. Never had she seen her infuriate to this extent. She got frustrated because of Amrita bursting at her that she looked away outside. Amrita was shocked at herself... She hadn't expected that she would burst at her sister-in-law like this. She tried to speak to her many times but Piya didn't look at her once. She kept looking away. Amrita could anyhow see her eyes getting moist frequently and Piya struggled to hide them and dry them before they fell. When they reached home, she just banged out of the car and rushed to the room. By this time, her anger had vanished in thin air... She was more curious than angry, she wanted to know the hidden mystery between the Raichands and Khuranas. She looked for some of Abhay's Novels... They were ancient scriptures, very rare. The like of these were just one or two of their kind and one copy belonged to the Raichands and the other belonged to the museums of Archaeological Survey of India. One of the books particularly attracted Piya, she bookmarked the book and went to sleep.

Abhay hadn't called her the entire day yesterday, Piya was gloomy and a little mum. She had no enthusiasm to dress up to College. She pulled on a full sleeve black shirt with blue denims. It had been raining since night in Paris. The atmosphere was gloomy and there was dense fog all around the river. The visibility was low and it was extremely cold. Over the black shirt, she pulled a thick black over-coat. It was beautifully shaped to her waist and went down to 3-4 inches above her knees. Up to nearly 3 inch below her knees went a pair of black boots which had 6 inch heels...


*Don't throw JUTTIS at me for being so MATHEMATICALLY correct! I am re-discovering my Maths Skills...😳 Need it for an interview coming up😳🤣*

...all in all she looked no less than a model. Her eyes glowed with jet black kajal which enhanced her eye-features. It added more glow to her fair white skin. When she was in no mood to dress up, she looked LOVELIEST. She looked really sexy in her outfit. When she looked in the mirror, she smirked at herself, took her bag and winked at herself and left.

*Ho gaya description... Don't stare at me huh!😳🤣*

The college looked entirely different that day. The roof of the buildings were invisible because of fog. There were less students outside but the galleries were full. She made her way to the class where Jai was making paper planes...

*Kill me now🤣 How much do you guys stare?*

...Piya giggled as she watched him act kiddish. She followed the way and sat beside him.

"Good Morning Jeh!"

"Heyo Mrs. Raichand!"

"So! The rains have taken a toll on your mind... 😳"

"Ohh no! Actually main usually rainy days aise hi spend karta hoon..."

"Haha! Btw you must be congratulated for correctly speaking a FULL SENTENCE in Hindi..."

"Thank You Thank You!"

JAI BHAAAIII!!!!!!!!

Jai turned and saw Alina standing with a strange expression on her face. There was shock and lots of blush that brightened her cheeks. She ran to him and said, "Bhai! You know what! College mein ek naya ladka aaya hai...!" Before she could elaborate, she fainted in his arms. Jai and Piya rushed out to see that a huge crowd had gathered near a black car. Jai and Piya came down to the ground when Piya's phone rang.

"Hey!"

"ABHAY! YOUUU!"

"Come soon! I am waiting just for you..."

"Waiting? Tum ghar aa gaye? Hullo! Abhay! Listen!"

"What the! Where the h---"

The crowd clear in front of Piya and she saw someone standing by the car. A young man of very young age... Wearing a black shirt with blue jeans... Same as Piya. He wore a brown and black jacket over it. Piya started to look at him starting from his shoes. The girls were going crazy for him. Piya looked up and her eyes met Abhay's endearing gaze. Her heart skipped a beat and she left the hold of Jai's shoulders. She dropped her bag on the wet ground and ran with all her speed towards him.

Abhay stepped forward and took Piya in his arms. They swung around in a circle in front of the entire college. Piya tightly cuddled Abhay tucking her face in his jacket. Abhay was holding her with all his love. She took out her face and kissed his cheeks dearly. "I missed you so much Abhay!" Abhay was still motionless... He just wanted to entrap her with all the love he could. Her scent, made him feel home again. Her touch and her breath, made his dead heart beat again... Her lips made his cheeks flush with fever wherever the lips caressed. It wasn't that only Piya longed for him, but even Abhay...

*Yeh lo ji mera last comment padh lo... 😳 iske baad I am going in dreamland... Khud hi likho and khud hi phir blush karo! Waah ji waah!*

...the audience had left way back. There were large noises of deep sighs as it was revealed the 'THE NEW GUY' was actually Piya's property. His chocolate boy appearance had made every heart skip a beat. For Abhay and Piya, the world didn't matter anymore. It was Abhay for Piya and Piya for Abhay. She took out her face from his jacket and placed it in proximity with Abhay's. Both of their noses touched each other and so did their temples. She looked in his eyes and saw her world in them. Love... Love and LOTS of Love... was the only thing she saw in them. There wasn't a slight place left for hunger... Or physical attraction. A tear dropped from Piya's eyes. Abhay quickly moved and kissed it away. He cupped her face now and pecked both of her eyes. He kissed her forehead and then she tucked her face in his arms again. Abhay lifted her up and made her sit in the car. The glasses were tinted. Soon, they drove to the outskirts where there stood a beautiful lake... Completely covered with fog. It was wet everywhere and that supported Abhay and his likes. They were still sitting in the car, now on the back seats. Piya had her legs up on the seat, her head resting on Abhay's collar-bone. Abhay's hand went around Piya from behind and his palms entangled hers from the same side. Abhay occasionally caressed her lovingly.

"I have been to so many places in these 100 years, but the solitude I find with you, is unfathomable"

"You flatter me so much! Don't love me so much Abhay!"

"Piya... Is everything alright?"

"Abhay! Don't love me to an extent which I cannot return. Don't love me so much that it is near-death experience when you're not with me... Don't love me so much that..."

Abhay took her lips for a deep passionate kiss before she could speak another word. Tears chased down each other one after the other... He didn't leave her till she felt better. But she didn't, her emotions had become to heavy for her to handle it themselves. She sulked... Abhay clutched her protectively in his arms till she FINALLY felt better. "Life is hell without you..."

"I promise, I will never fail you again..."

"You haven't! EVER! I trust you blindly..."

Abhay kissed her cheeks. He then removed her tresses from her neck and caressed them. He sucked and kissed her face, neck, chin... She never refused him. Her body was surrendered to him, her soul belonged to Abhay now!... She left herself loose lay on his lap...

Precap- Raichands v/s Khuranas?

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Guys, my little ability to display romance has disappeared 😳 and I am working to regain it. Err... You guys want romance or hate? Passion is not my cup of tea. I warn you again! I don't write in a BBB manner! Nothing passionate. Abhay and Piya are a sweet couple in my FF... Who can romance more passionately than can BBB! So people who read those type of stories can skip the FF😆
Edited by .BadtameezDil. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
haye i am in abhiya dreamland. isse cute update toh ho hi nahi sakta.i so loved it but more than update ur comments cracked me. 🤣 beautiful update.yeah i am first and that too without pm. [:D/]
Edited by Bisweswar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Haye shivu, completely love it dear. Hope Pia finds out the secret rivalry soon!
Waise I was LOLing at your bich me notes 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful update. Finally Abhay returned n Abhiya have taken me along wid them in their land. Hope Piya finds out abt Jeh soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey jaan u knw i am egerly waiting 4 this update... its amazing...
precap is interesting... waiting 4 next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
amazing upates
m glad that abhay is back...pia was so gloomy w/o him.
wanna see how abhay and jeh's first meeting would go.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very Very nice and beautiful so now everybody in the colleage knows Abhay belongs to Piya and Piya belongs to Abhay
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
loved the update...loved abhiya scenes..continue soon!thanks4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
lovely update
without abhay , pia was feeling alone & abhiya scenes romantic
waiting for nxt update
continue soon
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Edited by singhshailesh86 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Shivu,😊
I just love this FF alot.❤️I have readed it's First-Two Prequels before joining IF.😳And I really love it alot and really so much happy and glad that you are writing a sequel to it.😃
The last Chap was Super-Awesome.👏👏⭐️Especially your commentaries in between made it more memorable for me.🤣 🤣
OMG Jai was making paper-planes?!😲 🤣 🤣I hope You won't make him the antoganist later.Which I know is gonna happen.🤣
Really nice how you displayed Abhiya's romance in front of the colg,😉😃 😳Something That I always wanted to see atleast once in the show!But **Sigh**🥱🥱
Good now Everyone know Abhiya belongs to each other.😛😉😆
Loved the last part inside the car,My Abhiya really just can't live without each other...😳
I loved that dialogue by Pia the most,Life without you is Hell."❤️😛😳 Haaye that Just took My breat away.So Damn Beautifull. ❤️Just like life without PKYEK and Abhiya is Hell.😭🤢 😆😆
Waiting for Ajeh's encounter eagerly. 😉 🤣
Pls Continue Soon.😳
And Pls Do PM me whenever you update.😊😉😳

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