NEW ABHYIA SS:BTWN lIFE N DEATH ch1a UPDATED PG 8

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: smitakundra
Hey no plan of updating it..i thought..today i got a lil time..so will read the updates..but its still stick on prologue..pls update..

just updating will pm u dnt wry

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Seema

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#52

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
hey nice concept... plz update soon and pm me... sorry i just now catch this one...

thanx a lot.its okk.yup sure will pm u.

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Bleak_House
thats a very interesting start aquib.👍🏼
I noticed this story just today!
So pia is dead? Or is it..like u said the word ...'delusion'?
Surely interesting! Plz update soon!😊

thanx a lot indu.yup abhay is living in his own world.piya is dead

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Seema

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CHARACTER SKETCH:

MAIN LEADS:

ABHAY RAICHAND:

A 22 yrs old guy.a university student,suffering due to his grevious past.

PIYA DOBRIYAL:

Avery jolly girl n a bright student but her love cost her,her life.

OTHER CHARACTERS:

RAICHAND FAMILY:

CHAND RAICHAND:

Abhays father,a powerful and rich business man .a workcholic person

HASEENA RAICHAND:

A v caring and loving mom.she cant see abhay in dat condition.

NIYA RAICHAND:

Abhays elder sister.loves her little bro a lot.

DOBRIYAL FAMILY:

ARNAB DOBRIYAL:

A business man.somehw jealous of chand raichand but never expresses his hatred.he is now suffering very badly due to his acts.

MADHU DOBRIYAL:

piyas mom and is a typical house wife.and loves her only daughter a lot,who is no more.

NOTE:

TONS OF THANKS FOR LIKING AND APPRECIATING MY WORK.

SORRY FOR BEING SO LATE.

I WOULD LIKE TO MENTION THAT THE STORY WILL BE FROM CHARACTERS POINT OF VIEW ESPECIALLY FROM ABHAYS POINT OF VIEW AND WILL RUN SOME OF THE TIME IN FLASHBACKS.

I APOLOGISE FOR ALL GRAMMATICAL AND OTHER MISTAKES.

CHAPTER 1 COMING SOON.

PRECAP:TERI YAAD SAATH HAY

Edited by vmpy - 12 years ago

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

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chapter 1 (a)

TERI YAAD SAATH HAY:

Mom,mom Niya shouted at the top of her lungs,what happened beta asked haseena.

mom abhay was so late today so i went to wake him up but he is not responding at all.😭Haseena after controlling her trembling self directed Niya to call the doctor and sat beside abhay on his bed caressing his face while tears were flowing over her face uncontrolabally.

she whispered ,abhay please control yourself ,be our old abhay please.😭

MRS.raichand apparently he is much better now but mentally he is not that strong which he appears or pretends to be.please bring him to the hospital for further detailed check up ,i have given the necessary injectionhe will gain consciousness soon.dont worry said the doctor and he left from there.

haseena and niya were sitting there staring at abhayfor a long while now.suddenly his body started jerky movements,the restlessness was qt visible from his body gestures and suddenly he started saying i killed her,yes i killed her no no no i didnt kill her believe me i didnt kill her.both his mom n sis rushed towards him and shook him he at last gain consciousness.he looked at the duo asking what happened both replied at the same time nothing hiding da tears in their eyes.haseena directed abhay to freshen up after a little bit of rest as he had to go hospital after having breakfast.

they both came out of the room looking at each other with their eyes saying

kab tak acting kartay rahengay.

aur dekhi nahe jaati iski halat.

and both went downstairs to prepare themselves for another realistic act.

part b coming soon

Edited by vmpy - 12 years ago