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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Andromeda001

Awesome ending. Arnab n his destruction brigade were destroyed by Abhay. Finally Abhiya together n Abhay's sis Sana safe too. Thnx 4 d happy ending.


you are welcome
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
amazing os
it was a different love story and lvd reading it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing os

</div><div>it was a different love story and lvd reading it.




thank you dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its amazing wordless unbelivable a beautifull love story... wat are u sam, i lile ur creativity, ur writing and more than that this is ur best story in which i am in love with story u make me fall 4 abhiya once again... thanx 4 writing dis story... its sad at starting to see abhay as robot and his painfull life story but when end is gud everything is gud... abhiya together and forever in our heart...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

its amazing wordless unbelivable a beautifull love story... wat are u sam, i lile ur creativity, ur writing and more than that this is ur best story in which i am in love with story u make me fall 4 abhiya once again... thanx 4 writing dis story... its sad at starting to see abhay as robot and his painfull life story but when end is gud everything is gud... abhiya together and forever in our heart...




thanks for the heart touching complement trishna...so sweet of you
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Res.😊
Sorry for being late Sona,😳I will update My comment later at night or tommorow when I complete reading.😊
Didn't saw your PM before.😭 😭 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: janvie

Res.😊
Sorry for being late Sona,😳I will update My comment later at night or tommorow when I complete reading.😊
Didn't saw your PM before.😭 😭 😳



its ok
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
thnks to you all for being so supportive...its motivated me alot...thnks again
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
OMFG😲😲What an Mind-blowing concept.So Unique.A human and half robot human love story.👏👏⭐️Loved it to the core of My heart.❤️
Sona ji,You have crossed all the limits of Awesomeness and Amazingness now,There is only one word I have for you and your writing skills,That is "PERFECT".!!!!👏👏


That Arnab was such a🤬here.😡Hekept Sana alive in vulnerable condition to blackmail Abhay at the last moment.🤢
But I loved how Abhay fought all of them and Though Himself Dying,He didn't failed to destroy that factory,Arnab😡and The robos.👏👏⭐️
And Wohoo,Piya kissed him.😉 😳It was so Hot.I loved how He passionately hugged her after that.❤️
But the part Which actually made me blush hard,hard,very-very hard was the Human Abhay kissing Piya.☺️ ☺️That was so passionate and intense Man!!! ☺️
I'm dead BLUSHING.🤢☺️ ☺️
And That part also reminds Me of our very Famous Hospital Saviour + Tharkey Abhay scene from PKYEK. 😳Just Love and Miss My PKYEK and Abhiya so much yaar,😭😭🤢Want Them back as Soon as possible...Can never left hope for PKYEK2. 😳
The Abla Purush between Two Dangerous Naaris cracked me up Big time.🤣 🤣This dialouge reminds me of RK-The DRAMEBAAZ.🤣 🤣Seriously,It was an RK style Nautanki dialogue,😉 😳Loved it alot.❤️
And The Ending was Just Beyond Perfection.😃A Complete Happy Family filled with Pure Love.❤️I just love this Story so much yaar,I so wish and want you to continue it. 😳Pls Make a Sequel continuing the story from here if possible.(With Just One or Two parts as an OS like this.😳)😳
Thanks for the PM.😃

P.S. :- I know I'm too late,So Biggiee Waala Sholly Kaan pakad ke.😳 😳 😆

Edited by janvie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: janvie

OMFG😲😲What an Mind-blowing concept.So Unique.A human and half robot human love story.👏👏⭐️Loved it to the core of My heart.❤️

Sona ji,You have crossed all the limits of Awesomeness and Amazingness now,There is only one word I have for you and your writing skills,That is "PERFECT".!!!!👏👏


That Arnab was such a🤬here.😡Hekept Sana alive in vulnerable condition to blackmail Abhay at the last moment.🤢
But I loved how Abhay fought all of them and Though Himself Dying,He didn't failed to destroy that factory,Arnab😡and The robos.👏👏⭐️
And Wohoo,Piya kissed him.😉 😳It was so Hot.I loved how He passionately hugged her after that.❤️
But the part Which actually made me blush hard,hard,very-very hard was the Human Abhay kissing Piya.☺️ ☺️That was so passionate and intense Man!!! ☺️
I'm dead BLUSHING.🤢☺️ ☺️
And That part also reminds Me of our very Famous Hospital Saviour + Tharkey Abhay scene from PKYEK. 😳Just Love and Miss My PKYEK and Abhiya so much yaar,😭😭🤢Want Them back as Soon as possible...Can never left hope for PKYEK2. 😳
The Abla Purush between Two Dangerous Naaris cracked me up Big time.🤣 🤣This dialouge reminds me of RK-The DRAMEBAAZ.🤣 🤣Seriously,It was an RK style Nautanki dialogue,😉 😳Loved it alot.❤️
And The Ending was Just Beyond Perfection.😃A Complete Happy Family filled with Pure Love.❤️I just love this Story so much yaar,I so wish and want you to continue it. 😳Pls Make a Sequel continuing the story from here if possible.(With Just One or Two parts as an OS like this.😳)😳
Thanks for the PM.😃

P.S. :- I know I'm too late,So Biggiee Waala Sholly Kaan pakad ke.😳 😳 😆



awww...thats so cute...thnks buddy for appreciating...doesn't matter how late you comment but i am glad you liked the story...i will make a sequel of it later as os if possible...thnks dear...
Edited by samwllms - 12 years ago

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