FADING DARKNESS #2..CH27..PG41..28/12/2014

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: jack-12
congrats and what a twist dude! great writing

thank u😊

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav
awesome
loved it

thank u😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: vijayarvi
omg no words to explain ur writing 👏👏dear i finished all the parts at one sitting cant take break...mindblowing story u have penned it very well..i have finished all the 20 parts in one sitting but now i have to wait for next update..cant wait so long dear pls update soon😃

oh thank u so much😳..i'm so happy u enjoyed reading my story..😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: shria
first of all congo for book 2🤗thank u shria😊
now coming to d update ghoshh it was soo shocking😲 haseena's twin sis is their😲
it must hav been really diffi for haseena to choose between her children & sis
at last everything is solved😃
nw im waiting to see hw abhay will react will he hate her mom or try to find her?😕lets see how he reacts now😊
continu soon😳

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: captainplus
nice ⭐️ n emotional update 😭

bt y is chand so uncaring 2wards abhay ? 😕he has become hard and cold in the process of hiding his pain and it shows in his behaviour of abhay😕

wen in flashback he wanted 2 protect both of his children 4m apsara

he does love abhay..only now the distance between them is big

hope everything bcoms f9 soon

tnx 4r the pm 😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: hema_rawat
cingo 4 new thread thank u😊
awsm update
very emotnal , so it was haseena's sistr who kidnapd arjun , nd many life sufferd becoz of misunderstndg,alisha lost her life
I feel very bad 4 apsara ,her father punished her without her fault ,
glad u liked it😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: bellaaa
congratzzz tora for thread 2 🤗thanks beenish😊
well written piece of update
loved it ... glad u liked it😊
poor haseena and her sister ... bear so much
thats why arjun became like this
cont soon

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal
Amazing Tora...lovely...congr8tt for 2nd thread...really sad blast of past...continue soon😊

thank u😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu
First of all congratulations fr new thread
Very well written
Very emotional update
Haseena suffered a lot
Finally abhay knows the truth
Continue soon thanks for pm

thank u..glad u liked it😊

Originally posted by: SheDevil
Awesome update
Finally got to know haseena side story
Lets c wht.Abhay will.do
Plz cont.

thanks shrish.😊.lets see what happens now

Originally posted by: mire220
awesome story:)

thank u😊

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

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what to say?!! I felt tears in my eyes while reading it!! 😭 excellent execution of remorse, guilt and hidden truths Tora !!👏 really with your tactful handling of words your projection of every emotion was vibrant wth life! So realistic yet wonderful!!⭐️

Nobody is directly at fault here. Everyone was more or less like a puppet in the hands of fate! i felt bad every1. Chand, arjun, abhay, haseena, arnab every other character is sum or other way burning in remorce and going through a painful phase of their life and all becz of the misundrstanding that had lead to mistakes dne in their past.
i think its late bt still i hope all of them find peace and overcum ths burden they are having inside.
Nw am eagerly awaiting haseena- abhay meeting. And ya abhay-pia too!
Please update this one soon tora! U have made me too emotional.😔That is the reason i cudnt help bt comment ryt nw!
cntinue ths quick plz!
And thanks for ths amazing update.🤗
p.s. Loved the fb where chand met haseena! That was very beautifully written!!⭐️

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago