FADING DARKNESS #2..CH27..PG41..28/12/2014 - Page 19

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu

Beautifully written

It was a very sad update but u wrote abhay vulnerability and loved how piya comforted abhay

please do not kill haseena please save her poor abhay he really needs her

Omg piya went to raichand house. can't wait till next update

Update soon

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: _Jaan_

Fab update Tora!👏👏

So finally Abhay got to know his mom's disease and Pia too that Haseena is Abhay's mom!

I hope Haseena makes it

So Pia is on her way to meet Chand! Waiting 😊

Thanks for the pm😃

Originally posted by: bellaaa

last two updates were mind blowing tora
meeting of abhya and haseena was the best moment ... poor abhay just met her mother and now she is in coma
the way piya handling abhay awsome ... so piya want chand to be with haseena ... i want haseena to live with her family
cont soon

Originally posted by: didlr

this was a great update. Poor abhay, he'd suffered so much earlier and now again after knowing his mom's condition. But I'm happy he has the support of pia this tym.

thanks fr pm

Originally posted by: Bleak_House

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Oh my god tora!! Hw shud i react after reading the update??!! Shud i mention hw incredible it is..or should i first convey the emotional surge..that i felt after reading this?!?
I am stunned!! The sheer depth n beauty of dis update had left me wth no words!! You have excelled..i dnt know even hw to put it wat exactly i am feeling!thank u fairy😊 I cn just say tht once again while going thru the update i felt my eyes teary tht happns so rare bt wth ur updats its becumng a regular situatn nw!
The part where abhay gets to knw abt haseena's illness and the variant of emotns tht he goes thru is so so beautifully n subtly written..tht my own heart swelled..! You have picturised ths abhay so extremely well n wonderfully that the character shines as one of the jewels despite hs imperfctns n natural humane errors!!! Marveilleux!!!⭐️ 👏
the part where u depicted hs pain..helplesness..n the tear ...tht he cudnt shed even if he tried..is one of the best parts of the update!! Nt to mentn the emotnl impact it had bt more than tht the depth n beauty wth whch u depicd the scene made me awestruck!!! 👏 glad u liked it😊
then again where pia notices the vacant look in hs eyes..and the part where its mentnd tht he needed sum1 to cnsole hm even if he dsnt agree..was immencely heart wrenchng..n beautiful!!! 👏Indeed there are sum who cudnt cry even if they want to..or neither do they cum to agree tht they need sumone to hold their hand n be their strength! And our abhay here happens to be exactly one of these kinds..!
Then the other part where we see pia managing bth her work n abhay n then her meeting wth her brother..is all very well explaind. 👏
so nw pia heads for abhay's hme to meet hs dad..or shud i say to bring hm bck to shimla?uh..that remains to be seen..but yes she has gone to meet chandHm..i knew the moment there was the mentn of her reading sumthng in the diary thts bothering her..tht i knew she would have sumthng lyk dis in her mind!
Nw let us see where her actn leads to..n what results cum out of it..?!! I dnt knw wat u have plannd for next bt i wil patiently wait for no mre storms though i dread there cud be one! And haseena..i hope wil get well soon!! Abhay cannt lose her..nt after crossing so many hurdles..so many ups n dwns..nw..he just cnt!! If he does then there wil b loss of hope trust n belev..whch i fear he wnt be able to take!lets see what happens
Awaiting...the next..
And once again ths updat outshines if nt 4m a happy note bt as a fine literary piece of work!!! ⭐️
keep writing...you rock!!!🤗thank u for such a lovely comment every single time!!i really cherish them🤗
p.s. And very sorry for being this late.it's ok..no problem😊

First and foremost congo on the 2nd book 🥳 This has been one of my fav FFs here n I am so glad it made it to book 2 👏 So sorry I couldn be there when u opened this coz u know y anyways I caught up with all the updates n well I have no words to say 😃 It was heartbreakingly brilliant 👏 Too good! And u say I am good at emotional stuff??? 😲 Which is nothing but a joke to me 😛 Honestly? U literally tug at ur reader's heartstrings n if I can ever write anything tat can move my reader I'll think I have improved 😆 Emotions r ur forte n u do it brilliantly 👏 There can never be two thoughts on that I loved the way u have written abt Chandeena n this is the only FF I have read here tat focused on Chandeena n man u have done a brilliant job 👏 Haseena's childhood, her sister's trauma, Chandeena meeting everything was so wonderfully depicted 👏 Gosh her sis went through so much pain for no fault of hers First n foremost all she needed was her family's support but they themselves shunned her leaving her no where to turn to 😭 That was so, so sad 😭 Nobody deserves such a harsh fate n to think Haseena's sister endured all the pain by herself, bottling it up Haseena would have always felt guilty for no fault of hers coz on one hand she was getting to enjoy every phase of life but her sister was caged like an animal She went on to become a lover, a wife n a mother but her sister, her twin, her soul sister who had shared their mother's womb at one time was suffering in her hell So she had kidnapped Arjun to overcome her grief of having lost her child but things turned out dreadfully wrong I dont blame Arjun coz that scarred him for life. Haseena's sis was not in the right state of mind n how can one expect an innocent child to understand her trauma? He assumed he was being tortured by a psychopath for no fault of his! It must have been so difficult for him to overcome his fears but then Alisha comes into his life like a ray of hope. But then he gets a rude awakening! The girl he loves with all his heart is the daughter of a woman whose face is a memory of his worst nightmare Wat happened was an accident that was unfortunate. Could have been avoided but considering Arjun's traumatic state of mind I doubt it would have been I cant blame Arjun any more coz it wasn easy for him. Though he put on a happy face before all to see, he was dying everyday within 😭 Finally Abhay got to know the truth n wat a shock it must have been for him to discover his mother was alive all these years when he assumed she was dead n she had been nothing but a distant memory in his life? All the years he spent w/o a mother's love n affection must have eaten his insides! Its natural for him to blame Chand n I understand y Chand asked Haseena to walk away! He was just being a concerned father who knew his wife's sister was a threat to his family. Everything is so messed up right now! We had been sympathising with Pia all this while when others have probably suffered more than her. She could atleast speak of her inner turmoil to Misha or cry her heart out unlike Abhay, Arjun, Chandeena who had kept their anguish suppressed within themselves all these years? My my Tora! Its U who has magic in her hands! 🤗

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

First and foremost congo on the 2nd book 🥳thank u mansa..i really missed ur comments..glad to see u here again😊 This has been one of my fav FFs here n I am so glad it made it to book 2 👏 So sorry I couldn be there when u opened this coz u know y anyways i understand..no problem😊I caught up with all the updates n well I have no words to say 😃 It was heartbreakingly brilliant 👏 Too good! And u say I am good at emotional stuff??? 😲 u are😛Which is nothing but a joke to me 😛 Honestly? U literally tug at ur reader's heartstrings n if I can ever write anything tat can move my reader I'll think I have improved 😆 Emotions r ur forte n u do it brilliantly 👏 There can never be two thoughts on that I loved the way u have written abt Chandeena n this is the only FF I have read here tat focused on Chandeena n man u have done a brilliant job 👏yes they have an important role in this story..so they must be included Haseena's childhood, her sister's trauma, Chandeena meeting everything was so wonderfully depicted 👏 Gosh her sis went through so much pain for no fault of hers First n foremost all she needed was her family's support but they themselves shunned her leaving her no where to turn to 😭 That was so, so sad 😭 Nobody deserves such a harsh fate n to think Haseena's sister endured all the pain by herself, bottling it up Haseena would have always felt guilty for no fault of hers coz on one hand she was getting to enjoy every phase of life but her sister was caged like an animal She went on to become a lover, a wife n a mother but her sister, her twin, her soul sister who had shared their mother's womb at one time was suffering in her hell So she had kidnapped Arjun to overcome her grief of having lost her child but things turned out dreadfully wrong I dont blame Arjun coz that scarred him for life. Haseena's sis was not in the right state of mind n how can one expect an innocent child to understand her trauma? He assumed he was being tortured by a psychopath for no fault of his! It must have been so difficult for him to overcome his fears but then Alisha comes into his life like a ray of hope. But then he gets a rude awakening! The girl he loves with all his heart is the daughter of a woman whose face is a memory of his worst nightmare yes he felt betrayed.. Wat happened was an accident that was unfortunate. Could have been avoided but considering Arjun's traumatic state of mind I doubt it would have been I cant blame Arjun any more coz it wasn easy for him. Though he put on a happy face before all to see, he was dying everyday within 😭 Finally Abhay got to know the truth n wat a shock it must have been for him to discover his mother was alive all these years when he assumed she was dead n she had been nothing but a distant memory in his life? All the years he spent w/o a mother's love n affection must have eaten his insides!it did..underneath he's still a lost boy pining for loveIts natural for him to blame Chand n I understand y Chand asked Haseena to walk away! He was just being a concerned father who knew his wife's sister was a threat to his family. Everything is so messed up right now! We had been sympathising with Pia all this while when others have probably suffered more than her. She could atleast speak of her inner turmoil to Misha or cry her heart out unlike Abhay, Arjun, Chandeena who had kept their anguish suppressed within themselves all these years?everybody has suffered here...in the past or the present..what matters is how they free themselvesMy my Tora! Its U who has magic in her hands! 🤗thank u..😳

Well I am confused abt Abhiya part here 😕 Didn they kiss n make up? Y is Pia still unsure of her feelings for Abhay? Pia is defo not the kind of a girl who would kiss a random guy if she wasn absolutely sure of her feelings. This is one part that I found weird.well..of course he's special to her..but she's afraid to admit her feelings to herself..deep in her she does know that she loves him..and he's the only one for her

Abhay was finally united with his mom but destiny couldn have been more cruel with him 😭 He lost her the moment he found her. I know Haseena is still fighting for her life but I donno y I have a feeling u will kill her off 😭not so soon..lots of twist still to come..story's doesn't end till u will read the end..😉that i can promise for this story😊 I hope Haseena comes through n she can be with her son.well, we'll see I know the kids at the orphanage r her life but not like she cant be there for them if she gets her family right? I am glad Abhay has Pia with him in his difficult times n I really hope Pia doesn walk away from him they're both there for each other now😊Arjun is right in not confessing abt his past with Pia now coz though Pia already knows the truth, hearing it from her brother will be too much for her to deal with right now n even she needs her space to come to terms with what is happening yes, but she will know soon enoughSo Pia is going to talk to Chand?yup 😕 I wonder what it will be all abt.

Fab as always Tora 👏 Please do continue soon 😳 And yeah I hope u havent dozed off reading my comment 🤣no i didn't i read it twice actually😊...thanks for such a wonderful comment🤗