abhiya os-unsaying memories

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wrote an os.i dont know why.first read it.the concept is not fully mine btw...šŸ˜›

The house is full of crowd and sound of music and dancing coming out of it.every one in the house are happily talking and some young girls are dancing.piya is running here and there,taking care of all the relatives and guests who came in her house.she is also very happy.why shouldnt she?after all its her elder daughter's wedding.she suddenly noticed the sky is little gloomy.she is now running upstairs to close windows before the arrival of strom.just then she heard the sound of band and sanai.so the barat has arrived finally.she is about to go downstairs when her younger daughter came exitedly and said ''mom why are u here come fast.jiju has come with the barat.u know what mom jiju's choice is so bad.he is wearing a dark yellow kurta.eww what a nasty color.come fast now dad is waiting for u''saying this she went out of the room a shocked piya behind.yes shocked.something terribly hit her heart.her head is now paining badly.why now.after so many days...

Flashback

25years before..

Piya was standing there wearing a pretty red salwar kamiz.girting her teeth she hissed ''what is this?'
'''what?''abhay asked with mock innocent face
''what are u wearing?''piya fumed in anger.''kurta jeanse i guess''abhay again said with a mock innocent face.but there was naughtiness in his eyes
.''kurta?huh what the hell is this color.didnt u get a nice kurta to wear today''piya said with another rage of anger..''c'mon piya yellow is my favorite color.how can i miss this color on my wedding day''.abhay replied with a mischief smile.''favorite color.it is the color like sh*t''piya fumed.Abhay was about to say something whe he was interrupted by jeh.''hey guys pls stop now.have u forgotten why have we come here?save some fight for after wedding.now c'mon.''jeh laughed.
so they all went to the court.abhay and piya singed the paper.jeh and angad became the witness.thus abhiya got married
.''i've never thought in my life that u will marry like this piya''said ruhi who was also with them.''me too ruhi.but situation made me do that.now dad wont deny me.''piya said with a green..
they all went to a farm house of jeh which was beautifully decorated with flowers.when the night came all the friends left leaving the newly married couple behind.abhay came to piya and lightly kissed on her forehead.piya blushed.she said slowly "today is our wedding thats why i spaired u.i swear if u wear this sh*t kurta again,i will burn it infront of ur eyes."
"oh then i'll never wear it.i cant lose it u know.''abhay said with a naughty smile.and piya hit him lightly and both laughed.''now c'mon lets sleep.u have office tomorrow right?'' said piya.''ya.i forgot to tell u.i have to go to pune for a office work tomorrow.''abhay said with a sad expression.''its ok.u should sleep now then''.''what sleep.are u mad.its our wedding night.nobody sleeps at wedding night.we wont also.we will stay awake whole night.ok?''abhay said with a determined face.piya smile at his innocence.''ok.now let me change at first.''she said and went to change her dress.when she came back she saw abhay is sleeping peacefully.she smiled and sat beside him.she let him sleep.but she didnt sleep at night.as she promised him.how can she break it.

In morning when abhay was ready for his journey he once looked back to piya.she was also ready for going her home. "abhay when will u come back?''piya asked.''i'll try to come tonight.if i unable i'll come tomorrow''replied abhay."i'll miss u''saying this piya hugged him from behind abhay turned and hugged her back.he looked at his wife who was blushing in his embrace.he kissed her and said ''me too.i love u piya''
''i love u too abhay''she said.
they came out of the house locked it and gave the keys to guard.and they left for their destination
.Piya entered in her house.the house seemed empty.she felt relieved.''oh so they didnt come yet.''she said to herself and ran to her room.a letter was kept on her table.she grab that and torn it.she wrote it to her dad about the marriage.but as she came first it's now useless.she'll have to tell him everything face to face.she heard the sound of car.she came downstairs.her parents has just arrived.she went to her mom.''piya how are u feeling now?''madhu asked''i'm fine mom''piya replied.''u should come with us to simar's wedding.she was really upset when she saw u didnt come.u r her favorite cousin after all.though i told her that u r ill.but still.''madhu said.''sorry mom.i wanted to go but i was feeling really sick''she lied.her voice shook a little for that.''its ok.call her and say sorry.''said madhu with a smile.''ok.u go and rest.u must be tired.''
saying this piya turned around and saw her dad and grand mom just entered.''oh piya.good news.we have fixed ur wedding.the boy is so good.he is a doctor.u will really like him.''grandmom said happily while madhu was signaling not to tell piya but all gone in vain.''please stop fixing my marriage.i wont marry now.''piya fumed and rushed to her room .madhu sigh.

It was 7pm.jeh was working in his office.he was so absorbed in his work just then his phone rang.he picked that.''hello!''he said.someone on the phone said him something and his jaw dropped ''what?''he said with a shock expression and his phone dropped from his hand...

Panchi rushed to the hospital.she saw jeh was standing there with a terrible state.she went to him.''jeh.how is he now??''panchi asked''very critical di.''jeh shook in misery.panchi gasped.her brother the only person of her family was in this state and she couldnt do anything.
just then her husband sid came.he asked her ''how is he?''panchi said "i dont know anything'' she was crying.jeh then said "di we didnt say u one thing.abhay got married yesterday in court with the girl he loves.''
panchi and sid both looked at him shocked face.panchi started to cry again.when did his brother go too far from her that he didnt even said that he loves a girl.he even got married but didnt tell her about his happiest moment.she thought.
the doctor came.panchi rushed to him.''how is my brother doctor''she cried.''i'm sorry.he was badly injured in the accident.his condition is very critical now.i cant give u any hope''said the doctor and left.panchi went numb.she slowly asked jeh "whats her name jeh.give me her number''jeh told piya's name and gave the number.
panchi was about to call when sid stopped her.''err panchi should we call her.i mean err u know i think we should keep their marriage as a secret.at least think about that girl.'' ''how can u say this sid.my brother is dying.and at this moment his beloved is not with him.she has every right to know everything sid.i want her to stay beside him at this last stage of his life.''panchi said and dialled the number.
"hallo can i speek to piya pls"asked panchi.
"yes.hold on."saying this madhu called piya."piya your phone"madhu said
.''my phone at this time?''piya felt amused.she picked up the phone
.''hello!"
"hello piya,i'm panchi ,abhay's sister"panchi said."hello di"piya was little surprised
.''piya can u come to city hospiyal now.its urgent.'
piya shook in terror.she asked with broken voice ''why?''...

Arnab dobrial was in his bed room.he was preparing for sleep when his daughter rushed in his room.''what happen beta?''he asked ''papa pls come with me...i...i cant face it alone''said piya who was shaking in terror and misery...

Hospital
piya is standing in front of abhay's bed.it looked like he was sleeping peacefully on the bed and having a nice dream.piya was looking at him with a blank face.she was all numb.she asked the doctor ''doctor can he listen to me?''''he is in a very unfamiliar state.maybe he can''said the doctor.''i want to talk to him''she said lightly.the doctor left the room.
piya sat beside abhay, stroked his hair slowly.she then grabbed his hand.she whispered with all tearful eyes ''listen u cant leave me.i left every thing and wanted u.and i got u.now i wont let u go anywhere.get it.u have to wake up.r u listening to me.u have to wake up''...

Flashback ends

Piya sat on her bed.she is feeling numb now.unable to react.just then her husband dr.kabir entered.''piya why r u here.phere will start.come''kabir said..''my head is paining.i cant even stand up''said piya with broken voice.kabir gave her medicine.and she took it like a good girl.kabir is also sitting with her.when she said "why r u sitting here.pls go.at least u should stay there.''''no i wont''he said.''what will people say?''she asked with amusement.''i dont care'' ''at least go and check the windows are closed or not.storm is coming''piya urged.''no''kabir again said like a stubborn kid.Theire younger daughter rushed in the room.her eyes were sparkling with excitement like it is the most exiting of her 12years old life.she yelled ''mom dad what r u doing here.come fast.u know very funny and exiting thing is happening now.di is burning jiju's kurta.jiju is standing with mock sad face.so funny na..''she giggled and storm out of the room
.piya is feeling an unspeakable pain in her head.but maybe nothing wrong with her head but with her heart.still there is a deep pain in her heart.tears sparkled in her eyes.no she cant cry today.she shouldnt.why still her heart always winches in pain remembering him.why after so many years still she feels his ocean blue eye.the wind is now blowing heavily.she can smell his scent in the air.is he here with her??maybe he is.or maybe he was always with her.its difficult to stay apart from true love.even after the death...

I know u all want to kill me..but believe me i'm also very sad😭.when i thought this concept on abhiya i cried.when i was typing i cried😭😭..the thing i hate most in the ffs now i did the samešŸ˜‰..well its the revenge for those writer who made me cry😈.honestly tell me how is it.good or bad.if my writing is not that good then u can absolutely tell me.i wont mind and i'll also not write anything again to bother u all. šŸ¤”
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Andromeda001 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arey maine toh kisi ko nahi rulaya. Then why punishing me? U made me cry!
Do write more bt NOT sad stories!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice n lovely but quite sad...tfpm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its make me 😭my ff sad ending but both die together but u alive Pia only & give Abhay death...how stone heart have u😔😭?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG y this kola veri (anger to murder in tamil) how could u do this to abhiya? ur writing skill is awesomešŸ‘ but pls pls pls don't write tragedy 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pagol hoye gachcho naki.it was awsome.although u made me cry which i hste the most but ato sundor conepter jonne aami kanteo raaji achchi.but i didn't get any pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yar ye kya kiya tumne😭 tumne to rula diya😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os!!loved it !panchi abhay sis hehe!!but rula diya yaar end se!!plzz write more !more os!and whenever you write plzz pm me too!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os !loved it ! panchi abhay sis hehe!! but rula diya yaar end se!!plzz write more ! more os!and whenever you write plzz pm me too!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing os of abhiya story , but sad ending , you make me cry
I hate sad ending

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