AP#139 U'r My Destiny,Fated 2Luv U.Thrs No Way Bak - Page 19

Shreya I read ur comment n its overwhelming, thank u 😳 But honestly it was disconnected in many places But I just wanted to be done with it 😭

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

Shreya I read ur comment n its overwhelming, thank u 😳 But honestly it was disconnected in many places But I just wanted to be done with it 😭

Hmmm no. I dont think diff POVs would affect it coz I feel it was necessary to show a glimpse into diff character's POV here but the writing itself is inconsistent. There r many places I screwed up bigtime I wasn happy with the way I depicted Marcus or the fight part n the part where Abhay lies to the council. It hadn made sense to me but I had written more than half already n it was late to make changes. Trust me had I tried to rewrite I would never have posted it But this was supposed to be an OS n I had already made it a mini SS n the whole thing is 40000 words 😲 But I had to wrap it up. I cant do justice to all characters in a short story n it was my fault to have come up with this in the first place. I suppose this has to be my worst piece of writing

I will save my comments for later.. didnt get time to read yet 😆

I don't think so mandy. you feel like that because you wrapped it up and maybe it feels too rushed to you. but you did it very well n honestly no one could have written this better than you.

Nowadays my age is a topic of doubt 😆

Tanzie u need more than half an hr to read it 😆 So do it when u go home 😳