Abhiya SS: Mushkil Pyaar Note on pg 22 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting start
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Amazing start .
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Another work on Abhiya. Lovely concept n Plz continue.
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Awesome Prologue 👏
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nice start!
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nice prologue
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Banner credit goes to Pancakes

Chapter - 1

Piya is going to her hostel by walk where she is now staying n thinking how life changed after she came from Paris first abhay avoiding her n jay kept irritating her like she was some baby to top of it her USA return step brother made her leave home

Flashback

Piya goes n opens as there was knock on the door n sees a tall n handsome guy at the door step

Piya: Yes!!! how can i help you

Stranger: Who r u n what r u doing in my house

Piya: Excuse me this is my house</font>

Stranger: This is Dobriyal Mansion

Piya: Yes but who r u ???

Stranger: I am ARJUN...ARJUN DOBRIYAL u got a problem with that !!!

Piya: What !!!

Just then Misha comes n jumps on him

Misha: Bhaiyya kaise ho aap

Arjun: I am fine mishu but who is this girl

Misha: Ye this is piya our sister

Arjun: how can she be our sister misha she is not understood !!!!

Piya was heart broken to hear it n immediately leaves for her room

Misha: But bhai

Arjun: No if's n but's

Misha: MOM n DAD dekho kon aya hai

Everyone come except piya as left for her room</font>

Madhu(hugging him): Arre arjun kitne saal beeth gaye tume dekhe hue kaise ho tum

Arjun: Main aacha hoon aur woh ladki iss ghar kya kar rahi hai

Arnab: Kon ladki beta

Arjun: Piya what is she doing here

Arnab: Beta woh tumhari behen

Madhu: woh yaha nahi toh kaha hogi

Arjun: I don't wanna see her in my house tell her to get lost from here

Arnab: She is your sister arjun

Arjun: she is not my sister and she only a burden on us

Madhu: Arjun !!!!!

Arjun: She have to choose between me n her

Panchi: Bhai aap pagal hogaye hai kya woh humari behen hai

Misha: Birdy is right bhai how can we choose

Madhu: she is as important as you Arjun

Arjun: Fine!!! i am leaving then...he starts to leave

They couldn't do anything so they choose

Madhu: Arjun we choose you plz don't go

Arnab: Madhu tum pagal hogayi ho kya piya kaha jayeg

Madhu: I don't care Arnab mujhe sirf apni bete ki parva hai main usse kona nahi chati

Panchi: Mom how could you !!!!

Misha: Mom she is your daughter

Madhu: Mujhe kuch sunna nahi hai woh kahi aur bhi reh sakti hai

Arjun all the way was smirking that his worked

Madhu: Arjun tum apne kamre jao fresh hoke ajao

Arjun: Mom main jaunga lekin kal subha tak mujhe woh ladki iss ghar mein nahi dekhna chahiye

Madhu: as you wish

Arjun goes to his room n everyone goes to dinning table but they didn't know that piya heard everything

After that piya packs her all things n leaves home when everyone were sleeping at midnight n goes to hostel

Piya: Ma'am can i stay here

Warden: But piya you were staying in Dobriyal mansion right but why you wanna stay here

Piya: Ma'am i don't want to stay there anymore n i am not there daughter anymore

Warden: but piya do you remember everything

Piya: Yes i remember everything n I am not there daughter ma'am plz let me stay here in my room

Warden: Okay but what about fees piya

Piya takes some money from her bag which she earned from her modelling in Paris n gives to wardon

Warden: here is room keys piya

Piya: Thanx ma'am n plz don't let anyone know that my memory is back plz

Warden: Okay...wardenthinks in her mind oh god why are you punishing this girl so much...

Piya leaves...

Flashback Ends

Precap: Piya decides leave dehradoon forever n abhay comes to know piya has been staying in hostel

Edited by AriyaLilyOrchid - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the 1st chapp!!👏
cont soon waitin to read more!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nice update😊 but y is this arjun so nasty😡 continue asap😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nice part
update after a long wait thanks
so pia has a step brother too how rude he is
now pia wants to leave dehradoon
oh no wht will hapen now when abhay comes to know about this
plzz update soon
thanks for pm

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