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Awesome! Plz do PM me!😊
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awsome story . but khobordar jodi etar sad ending diechchis . i want happy ending.
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Very Very Nice Start can't wait ti read more
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OH MY! I LOVE HORROR AND THAT TOO ON ABHAY PIADO PM ME AND UPDATE SOON😛
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omg ria dis time a romantic horror... i am so excited but one thing is sad dat its going to be a short ss... w8ing 4 ch 1
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nice start do continue soon
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thnks for the appriciation guyzz😳!!!i will cont it after i get a lil bit free.as i allready have my ff sajni on my hand!!😃.but will try to post it soon!!
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koi dastak, koi aahaT, koi aavaaz nahin
tu dabe paaNv KhyaaloN mein chalaa aataa hai
baarhaa aisaa bhi mahsoos huaa hai mujhko
aake chupchaap tu pahloo mein baiTh jaataa hai
chapter 2
piya was steal shaking allover!she cldn't get back to normal state.what was wrong with that water tap?!!okk leave that but what was the shadow she saw in the mirror?!!she was not so much coward type person but that scene colded her blood."piya...!!piya are u there?!"she listened madhu aunty's voice from outside door."ya comin..."piya quickly changed herself into a night gown and opened the door."good evening aunty!!"piya greeted."same tou dr!!i just came to ask that is everything allr8?is the water coming?!"madhu asked."ya aunty."piya said in low voice.she cldn't decide that she had to tell her aboit the odd incident or not?!"if u face any kind of problem,don't hesitate to say!!.."madhu aunty said deerly."thx aunty!!"piya smilled."can i come inside dr?!"madhu asked."of crs aunty!!it is ur house!!"piya said with a huge smille slidding asside to make way for her.madhu came inside.her concern gaze mooved at each and every corner of the room.like she had entered inside the room after so long time."you decorated the room really well dr!!"madhu commented,"so simple,sophisticated but beautiful.just as he likes!!!.."madhu commented unconciously."he likes...?whom are u talking about aunty?"piya asked confusingly."oh nothing dr!!.."madhu ignored.she was again trying to hide something.piya understood looking at her hesitant eyes.piya tried to let out some info."aunty it was ur sons room r8?!"piya asked."yes!"madhu smilled sadly.piya noticed that whenever some1 mentioned about her son there was a deep sadness in her eyes."so where is he now?"piya asked."ohh he...well he is currently in abroad for his job purpose!!"madhu said."if u don't mind aunty then can i ask in which country he is now?"piya asked."umm..canada.but don't ask the company's name!i don't know!!"madhu said."it's ok aunty!!sorry if i am being too curious...it's just i want to know if he comes back and c his room is belongs to me now!!.."piya said."u don't have to worry dr!!he is never going to come back!!"madhu again slipped her tounge."really?!but how can u be so sure?!!!"piya blurted out."oh just that...cause he is all settled there and he doesn't have any plans to come back so soon.u can live hea without any hesitation!!"madhu assured.damn this lady was again trying to hide something from her."okk dr.i'll take my leave now!it's really nice to talk to u!!"madhu said with a smille,"after he was gone,i felt so lonely but i felt so good after long time while talking to u!!u are such a nice girl!!"madhu smilled."oh thank u aunty!!.."piya said with cheerfull smile.madhu was about to get outside when suddenly piya asked,"aunty tell me one thing!is the pumping system of this room is attatched to second water source?".madhu mooved towards her confusingly."no!but why are u asking dr?!"madhu asked."the matter is aunty that...u said that the pump was not on right?!but there was still water in the tap!!.."piya explained the matter.she noticed there was a sudden flicker of fear in madhu's eyes.but she composed herself quickly."ohh thats...it sometimes happens in this house.might be there was some wateres in the pipes.u don't have to worry about that dr!"madhu asuured."hmm but u know aunty the water doesn't flow in such a full force when there was not random supply!also when i opened the tap just after that a single drop didn't came out.i wander why?.."piya said with thoughtfull face."what happened dr?!u seemed worried.."madhu asked in concerned voice."no it's ok aunty!!"piya assured.she didn't try to drag the matter more.aunty wld surely consider her as idiot if she came to know that she was so much affraid for such a stupid little unusual matter!!"ok goodnight dr!!"madhu said and went outside.piya closed the door with confused face.so much questions bugging on her mind.madhu aunty was a nice lady but sometimes she behaved too odd!!like she was hidding a big secret inside her.but from her talk she was sure about one thing.alina was r8!madhu aunty's relation wid her son is not good.might be they didn't get in contact with each other!!!same case with each andf every home.son leaving their parents behind for a prosperous future and don't even care they were allive or not!!poor aunty.piya felt so bad for her!!piya lost her parents in a very small age.she was brought up by her mama and mami.so she knew what's the value of mom and dad in anyones life.she looked at the photo of her mom and dad smilling towards her.piya smilled back and jumped to finish the remaining works.she didn't even arranged to prapare food in the home yet so she brought something from hotel.after finishing her dinnr she quickly got inside the warm blanket.the hill area temp was getting on her nerves.after the whole day of tireyness she closed her eyes and got into dream's world quickly.
she didn't know what was the time of the night when suddenly piya woke up suddenly feeling a so uncanny feeling.she was all startled at first when she didn't saw a single flicker of light.lttr she understood after some times.god power cut!!!she whimpered angrily.she was always a little bit scared of darkness from childhood.so she kept open the nightlamp before going to bed.god how cld she sleep.as the darkness engulfed her the old sence of fear got back into her.everytime it seemed like some1 was there.each and every single sound was making her heart jump.but they were nothing but wind."damn piya don't act like a scared baby!!try to sleep.."she almost screamed to herself.she closed her eyes to get some sleep.suddenly she felt a cold breath brushing in her neck!!!!piya was all numbed at that instant by trmendous fear.what the hell was that.she cldn't even open her eyes in fear!!after getting her sence back she was trying to detect that if it was the part of her crap imagination.but again another cold breath rushed through her hairs freezing her heart.piya didn't have any doubt left that there was some1 in the room.she pooped out her eyes hoping to sea something horrible.she just saw a shadowish dark figure leaning towards her.piya's mouth got opened and she was about to let out a scream when a smooth broad palm clamped on her mouth supressing the scream.piya felt a jolt throughout her whole feature by that icy cold touch,she was too afraid.she struggled to shove away that hand but she cldn't!!it was so strong.she cldn't breath.she needed air.she felt her lungs were getting out of air.she was loosing her strength.she felt her eyesight becoming blur and some cold dead feeling sptreading over her all nerves.was her death so near?
piya jumped up in her breath gasping heavilly.she was wet allover.her eyes were all wide in fear and shock.there was no sign of a single person in the room!!the nightlamp was even on!no power cut!!was that a dream?!but why it seemed so real like she cld still feel that cold breath arround.piya clutched her hairs in frustration.her head was all spning.hoping that a little chill wind wld help to get her nerves back,she got out of the blanket and came near the window.the chilly wind ruffled through her curls and touched her curls.the outside was dark but luckily no fog.her eyes fell on the rose plant she was surprised to find another rose on the brunches.strenge,there was only one rose in the evening!!suddenly the brunches of the rose plants waved haevilly in the wind.like they were calling her!!piya smilled and touched the rose!!and again she gasped in ashtonishment.she cld swear that no one was standing there biut what was that?!she cld easilly feel that her delicate plams were caught into another stone grasp!!!piya's eyes wided!!she tried to pull back her hand but that invisib;le stone garap resisted her with so much power!!piya gasped and struggled more.but it was all in vauge.suddenly she felt that the invisible grasp was loosed and she jerked back in the floor with so much push!!!horror stuck her face as she looked back to window.there was a slight burn in her palm and she mooved it in front!!there was a huge svratch of rose plant thorns on her palm!!a small blood was dripping from her wound!!
---------------so huyz hears the nxt chapp!sorry i sucks at horror!plz reply soon!😊
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago

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