Passion of an Evil Lover:lst chpt,pg 37,jul28

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

dishu where were u?had missed ur updates so much...!!!!
and this update was super amazing
it was from piya's pov as what she saw and felt with abhay...!.!
why was that servant clutching his pocket?? and was abhay delibrately showing his loneliness and all to pia??
continue soon...😳

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arwakantawala

@arwakantawala

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Lovely update Pia's loneliness and the delemma between her feelings for kabir and Abhay is written beautifully. Waiting for the next update.

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Piyali

@love.piyali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Amazing update...the updt was hot!!!!!☺️

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

amazing update.

it was hot but i have my doubts on pia's state of mind and abhay's intentions.want to read about his state of mind also.

i have a feeling that the servant was may be under abhay's control to lift those holy things out of her room so he can enter.

eagerly looking forward for the next update.

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maria

@Maria-capri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Superb update 😳

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.AgapiMou.

@.AgapiMou.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Finally caught with this one!😃I loved it!The way of reciting from Pia's POV is simply fantastic!Why would Abhay do all that..you know what☺️He seems a mystery to me.Can't wait for next!

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

dishu awsome update ... liked the way piya doubted the feelings of kabir ...abhay seems so mystery yr ... he hypnotized piya to do so but piya feelings shows so that she also started to feel somethg for abhay ... basically what abhay want from piya a really companionship??? and abhiya scene was hawtt ... waiting for next part
cont soon

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Prima :D

@Trouble.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

I loved Pia's POV here but I wanna know Abhay's 😳

P.S Awesome update! :P & update soon😳

Edited by Trouble. - 12 years ago

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@--Janvie--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

OMG!😲Such a Super-HOT update.☺️ ☺️Are you planning to kill us all with so much passion?!😲😡 😆😆

I really loved the update.❤️I was glued like a fevicol while reading.😉😛😆

Loved How you describe Pia's POV,and the passion between them.I especially loved the words you used for describing their romance.They were too decent😉😳So I readed happily and comfortably being only 16.😊😳😳So Hats off to your brilliant writing.!!👏👏⭐️ 😳

I wanna know Abhay's POV too and what was that guard clutching in his pocket?!😕😉

Can't wait to read more...Pls Continue Soon.😳😳

Thanks for the PM.😃

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Oh...my.
It's been like ages- ages! Since I read something like this from you 😳
Ohk somehow Abhay still sort of seems fishy to me since u have not written his feelings, but...wow. I love the way you showed that it wasn't purely lust between them which so many other writers fail to do. So kudos to you for the update - now I'm going to giggle and read the update again.
Heehee.
Encore! :P
and update soon :P

PS. Me first me first me FIRST!!!!

PPS. Why was the servant clutching his pocket

hmm... abhay is evil here, he came here for revenge only, but its true that he had fallen for her just like he had made her feel the pull towards him.

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