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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rmuk

awesome prologue and cs lamu!!!
i am sure u will do a gr8 job dear!!!
plz do continue and yea update asap!!!
waiting eagerly!!!
thanks for the pm and do pm me for all ur updates
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glad to hear that,u like it.I will start it soon !@!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter -1

It's 8 o clock of morning. A girl is looking for something here and there in her room.

"God, where I have kept the file, it's very important for our next business deal" said Pia. She is much tensed but looking more beautiful as usual. she has got a superb careless beauty with loads of curly hairs , a pair of baby brown eyes & a bonus of rose petals like leaps .Moreover, this pink tops with black gens and a little bit of makeup and pink lip-gloss has enhanced her beauty. She is the most beautiful, mature &responsible girl of dobrial mension who is looking after the entire dobrial industry after the death of her father.

Sugandh : Come fast, beta, breakfast is ready"

Pia: "I am coming mom"

After sometime, both of them are having their breakfast.

pia : I have done, mom

sugandh : What are you saying pia????You haven't finished your breakfast yet. No, at first finish your breakfast properly.

pia :Seriously mom, I have done ,I can't have more. I am already getting late for office."

Sugandh: Office???? But today is Sunday that means today is holiday. Please stay at home and take some rest. Otherwise You will fall sick.

Pia- I am perfectly fine mom. We have a very important business deal in a few days,so today is no holiday in office. Now I have to go mom. Bye.

Sugandh-Pia, listen to me beta, please don't go anywhere and take some rest. God!!!! This girl will surely make me mad one day.

Its 12 o clock of noon .Maya, Danish & ayush are standing in the Mumbai airport.

Danish: Finally, we have reached to Mumbai. I have missed this city a lot.

Maya: Yes, Danish. Both of us were completing our higher studies in U.s.a. But our minds were always here. I am sure, Mumbai has changed a lot in last four years.

Ayush: where are others mom??? Haven't they reached yet???

Maya: beta, we haven't told anyone about our arrival. We want to give them surprise.

Ayush: wow!!! It will be great.

Maya: yes, beta. I am also very excited.

Danish: now, let's go home.

Maya & ayush: let's go.

Pre recap- pia is busy in office. She is shocked to see someone in her cabin.

guys,here is my os 1st chapter,plz,read and share your views about it.please forgive me for my mistakes...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start , do continue 😊

Edited by captainplus - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hmm lovely first chappy!😳,so pia is a business women!cont soon!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start...😃
pm me..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice star Lamu dear👍🏼Srry for late reply coz shift gujraat to delhi sooo late...nice starting...continue soon dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal

Nice star Lamu dear👍🏼Srry for late reply coz shift gujraat to delhi sooo late...nice starting...continue soon dear😊


koi baat nahi, I am really glad that u like it,I will continue it,soon!@!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter-2

Its 10 o clock of morning.pia is now at office, sugndh is in her room. She is little bit upset with both pia & maya.

Sugndh: today is mothers day. All of my friends are so lucky & happy,as their children wished them.But,neither pia nor maya yet wish me. Now a days work is the only important thing of pia's life. I am sure,she has again forgotten about this day this year.But,what had happened to maya???She had never forget about this day .But,then,why she haven't call me yet???God knows.

Sugndh is now sarching something in her cupboard.Suddenly,she has got an envelop with a red rose.She has opened it.Its a beautiful card from pia wishing her happy mothers day.She also get a little rapped gift pack.She also opened it & found a beautiful watch of her favourte brand.She is very happy & smilling now.Suddenly,her phone rangs.

Sugndh: hello pia.

Pia: hello mom,wishing you a very happy mother's day.Hve you found the card and the gift???Have you liked the watch???how is it??? Please tell me the truth.

Sugndh:pia beta,clam down. How could I answer you if you continuously asking me questions???

Pia: Sorry mom, okk tell me.

Sugndh: The card,rose, the watch everything is so beautiful. I have just loved it. I had thought that you have again forgotten about it.

Pia: No, mom. I just want to give you a surprise.I am very glad that you liked it. Mom , I have already taken some snacks here at office so please don't be worried and upset with me. Mom,I have to go to an urgent meeting, will call you latter. Bye.

Sugndh: okk beta, bye.

Its 2 o clock of noon.Maya ,Danish & ayush has reached at dobrial mension just now.They press the bell.

Sugandh thinks that pia has come back home.

Sugandh: wait, Iam coming.

She opens the door.

Sugandh: Maya, its you???

Maya: yes mom.We have come back to India finally. Happy mother's day.

Sugandh: Thank you.

After sometime,all of them are having their lunch.

Sugndh: Maya, Why have you not told us about your arrival dear, we can pick up all of you from airport.

Maya: mom actually we want to give both of you a surprise. So, we have not told you anything.

Ayush's eyes are looking for pia .

Ayush: where is pia masi, mom???I have to meet her.

Maya: relax, beta. She should be busy with some work in her room, okk, Finish your lunch then we will go there.

Sugandh: pia is not in her room, she is in office.

Danish: Office in Sunday???is everything okk???

Sugandh: yes, everything is okk. Actually, She has an important business deal in a few days .She is very busy with that deal. Wait,I am calling her now. See, she will come back home in some time.

Maya: No mom ,don't call her. We will give her a surprise.

Ayush: wow!!! Mom, that will be great

Maya: yes,now lets go to take some rest.

Ayush: I am now going to sleep with grandma.

Maya: okk.

It's six o clock of evening, maya has got up just now,while Danish is at wash room.Suddenly,maya finds an envelop with a chock let on her side table.It's ayush's favourite choclet.She opens the envelop.There is a big hand made card with a beautiful painting of both her and ayush. There is also a lovely wish of mothers day in handwriting of Ayush. Maya had lost totally in watching that handmade cardwhile there is aknock in the door,Ayush was standing there.

Ayush: Happy mothers day mom. Have you got the card & the choclet???

Maya: yes beta, I have seen it. This is so sweet.Thanks.

Ayush: Both me & masi together have made it. Masi had given me all the instructions through webcam chatting. Dad has also helped me in arranging them together.

Maya looks at Danish. He is smiling.

Maya: Thank you all .This is the best gift of my life.

Danish &ayush: most welcome.

It's 8 o clock of evening.pia is very busy in office.

Pia: I want these files ready by tomorrow, is that clear to you Rakesh???

Rakesh: yes,mam.

Suddenly, there is a knock on the door.

Danish: May I come in, mam???

Pia: jiju, you, here???what a pleasant surprise!!! Please come in. you may go now, Rakesh.

Danish: yes, all of us wanted to give you surprise,but it seems like that you were also ready to give us surprise .Relly, office in Sunday, is such a big surprise!!!

Pia: There is nothing like that.It just the excess pressure of work.

Danish:Yes,mom has already told me about it.Now,can we go back to home???Every one there is waiting for you.

Pia: that means, didi & ayush has also come to India.

Danish: Yes, mam.Now,lets go.

Pia,Danish & ayush are planning about something.

Edited by fabliha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update .
Really well written .

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