FF : Curiouser and Curiouser!(Ch17pg104)DISCONTINED.See Pg106

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@Trouble.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Poor Mutants..treated really badly.But this is something really new Shreya & I like where you're going with this FF.😛

Poor Abhay,felt sad when he was tortured,who wouldn't feel like that?

Edited by Trouble. - 12 years ago

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

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Hmm...when i told you that i donot have anythng to say here..i meant it! Becoz as a story thts exploring a completely diffrnt n new genre..nt old mre than 3chaps...yet wonderfully managing to gve a consistently interesting edge to the story is in itself a very big thing!!!
the characters n the plot are intelligent n well tackled just like T&A!! The sentence formations..their use...twisting words sumtimes to explain grief..sumtimes love..sumtimes anger..n sumtimes longing...is one of the beauties of your writing that we again see here!⭐️
the grief for kabir was at first describd in so few n brief space..tht for a moment i felt it nt at all convincing enough..bt then just the next line...cleard my doubts when her love that she had lost even earlier..explained it and proved its validity! So once again i was left wth admiration!👏
ths update in itself is a unique blend of mysteries..n also the answers to the questns that arise frm it!! That is if one tries to one cn see..just has to hav a keen eye for observing behnd the lines...and it gives immence joy n at time is fun too!..i mean to discover those hidden meanings..😉 and that is the beauty of ur updates..👍🏼👏

nw there..u included my name!!🤣n poor thng as a dead being..nope mutant!😲 😆 ofcours i hav no objectns..4 i cud hav rarely got such unique guest appearance anywhere else..😉😆
Ok nw jokes apart--

Piya noted it with more than a touch
of statisfaction...let him hurt as she
had she had been, let him feel the
pain..."

She stared at him. A part of her
recognised she had gone too far, but
that cruel satisfaction lingered."

Piya turned away. She could not
allow herself to soften now."

[B]These lines are incredible!! Soo wonderful expression of behaviours, those even vampires do carry just like humans!! Bt the thng ths part deservs credit for is its clever use of words..clever becz it shows bth pain n anger !bravo!👏

nw the last part where abhay secevs punishmnt n pia tends to cure it n later breaks into tears..was very justly executed scene!! I lovd it! Mainly for the restrain n fine balance tht has been applied here, n nt taking thngs overboard!! Bravo again!!👏

p.s. So thats it. Nthng to add..nt nw at least! Sorry if i have lft to mentn any imptnt part. And am cmmentng in off time..in uni nw..so if there's any incongruity ...then plz dnt mind!

p.p.s. nw plz updat soon! And ya u dnt need me or anyone else to cnfrm..hw well u write!! 😊

Edited by Bleak_House - 12 years ago

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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Superb update

Very well written

Abhay loves piya

So piya loved a guys named vikrsm b4 kabir was he is vampire

Kabir death was accidentally

I h8 that strategist he hurt abhay but piya saved him

So abhiya are gonn be on quest to find out ho killed kabir as she wants to find out

Thanks for pm

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

who's him?...now another love rival

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@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: forever.alon
abhay loves piya 😳..looks like piya also feels something for him..he is now piya's bodyguard 😉 ..interesting. 😳 ..awesome update. 👏 loved the way they confront themself...

Thank you so much Raatry😳

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@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Kreya
awesome update.👏..Kabir met wid an accident...😲

thanx for da pm...update nxt part soon...👍🏼

Kabir died😛

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@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
fantastic update
i lvd that for a change abhay is in luv with her .there were some glimpses of many things that might have happened in past...looking forward to read it further.
m happy that abhay is her bg.it's gonna be superawsum.

Oh there will be unravelling of the past as the story moves on. Thanks for reading Megha and yeah Abhay has to protect her😛

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@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: ashu1909
awesome update👏.so abhay saved piya and now is her bodyguard.piya is so rude 🥺 for blaming abhay for kabir death.abhiya r now going on mission is so interesting do continue soon

ya well Pia was in shock thanks for liking😳

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@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: Janani24
wow nice update👏 u have clearly portrayed pia's anguish n abhay's remorse. so pia on a mission along wid abhay😊 i hope pia understands abhay's luv soon😊

Thank you so much😳