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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Pleasant Surprise Cari Di. Nice prologue n Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Comphused soul here, kyun be. . . U added all ymur fav characters in a mix up, khichdi, too bad I'll be following it, bwaaahahahaha
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
mysterious concept... waiting 4 the start of dhamaka...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
wow superb story continue soon 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
great story
send pm to me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
nice plz meko pm karo di😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
intresting prologue ,but I really want this story end on abhiya only
pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Wow...interesting prologue.Plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Right - This FF WAS MEANT TO BE A APRIL FOOLS PRANK - AND THE IDEA WAS ANNIE'S
BUT after seeing so many hopefulls here - Cari didn't have the heart to play this prank fully.
So I will do an FF on this concept... Just me - by myself..
So here is the first part...

ABHAY sat alone – in the dark jungle amidst the deadly animals, silently weeping and haing only Anamika's headstone for company. He lit a candle near her grave, the only way to communicate with her. Despite this being a routine for 100 years – Abhay's hands still shivered.

Amidst the silence which only the howls of wolfs distrupted came a silent and soft voice and warmth surrounded Abhay. "ABHAY"... It was Anamika's gentle voice. "Hum aap hi ka inthazaar kar rahey they Abhay". A tear dropped from Abhay's icy blue eyes... he almost choked back on the remaining tears. "A.. A.. Anamika", he whispered almost.

"Aap aaj bhi kyun rote hain Abhay? Aapke ansoon humein dard poncho they hain". She reasoned. Abhay wiped back the tears to answer... all he wanted to do was to see Anamika, and to hold her.. to cup her face and stare into her wide dark eyes. "I miss you – sooo much, come back Anamika, come back...". He couldn't hold back his emotions anymore and weeped like a baby. "100 years have kept us apart.. I cannot live another year without you".

"I let you down Anamika, I let Viraj kill you... I should have died – not you". He covered his face in his hands.

"It was not your fault... why do you blame yourself... I wasn't going to allow Viraj Dobriyal to hurt you Abhay", Anamika tried to console Abhay.

"He was my enemy... after your death – I managed to kill him but could only give myself half a death. I Separated us even more...".

"WHY are you punishing yourself Abhay, why are you remembering the past so deeply?". Asked Anamika possibly knowing the answer already.

"Because it's 100 years today – since we died.. and in these 100 years I still haven't found a way to unite with you. I'm still a Vampire after death and you are a ghost, I can't bring you back and you won't let me die... I don't know what to do – I've tried everything". Abhay was broken.

"Abhay only the sacrifice of a Dobriyal can bring me back... and all the Dobriyals... vanished a long time ago. Viraj's descendent can unite me with you". Anamika weeped knowing this was going to be impossible.

"I will find that decendent – there has to be one somewhere and I will not rest until I do – I promise. I have never killed a human – but I will tear it's heart out the day I find that decendent and pour it's blood over your grave – I will bring you back Anamika.. hook or by crook". It was decided and before Anamika could intervene or change his mind – he blew out the candle and the darkness fell again.

"Dehradun – Fantastic – This is perfect, I'll get packing". An excited Pia started packing her few belongings in a suitcase as the phone rested between her ear and her shoulders. She'd finally received the scholarship she was waiting for. "Finally Pia Jaiswal is going to Dehradun", she sang.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
OMG- sounds very very interesting!
So Piya is the descendant, is it?

I'm really really glad you went ahead and made this into a real FF- I mean, it was great!

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