Book 2 :He is the one for me **(End note on page 22)** - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
omg wat a twist u seperate our dear abhiya... nice update... par abhay is really idiot...
Edited by trishnawaliya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
i can not wait for the next part of your story
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
awesome update loved it abhay is behaving like an idiot glad he heard what she said awesome update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Ye abhay bi idiotic behave karta hai kbi kbi.continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
awesome update
feeling sad for pia, abhay misunderstood her
pls don't seperate abhiya
can't wait for nxt update
pls continue soon
Edited by singhshailesh86 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
are nai ye kya ho gaya!! abhay ne pia ko MU kr liya...jaldi se sab thik kar do...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohh God...noo plzz don;t separeate Abhiya...hope they unite again...continue & thanx for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great update
what a twist in story
chand died...
ohh no abhay misunderstood whole situation now what will happened next?
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u so much Friends for showing ur love by commenting and liking 😊 And sorry to keep u waiting for update The next update will be posted by tonight! Inshallah 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter: 4

A year had passed, Pia's family had moved to a new house and Mr,Dobrial's business had earned great profits, Pia had moved to senior year . The Raichands mansion was now a deserted place, as no one lived there except for some bats. There was no clue of Haseena after that night. Abhay had also dissapered , everyone said that he had died in the fire along with Chand.Mr.Khurana was no more…Jeh had become the new warewolf leader.
Eveything had changed,except for Pia who was not able to digest the fact that Abhay was no more. Her heart always said that Abhay is alive. Pia had become totally silent, she lost her smile,she always tried to keep herself occupied in studies. She stopped hanging around with friends, she made herself distant from everyone.even Misha. She always appeared strong infront of everyonebut when she was alone she cried every night for Abhay. Every night had become a sleepless night for her.The pain of loosing Abhay was too much for her, Every day after collge she used to visit Raichand Mansion , she looked at the windows helplessly , only to get a glimpse of Abhay.
Mr. Dobrial: Madhu aise ni ji payegi woh…bas saans lene ko jina nahi kahte! Pia ke ander toh zinda insano jaisa kuch nahi hai. Aj vi maine use Raichand mansion ke bahar dekha..kaise uski aakhein taras rahi thi Abhay ko dekhne ke liye…
Madhu: Pia Abhay se bohat pyarr karti hai, uski maut ki sacchai ko bardsht nahi kar pa rahi hai. Khud ko sab se alag kar dia hai usne kisi se thik se baat vi nahi karti, Aisa lagta hai Pia kahi kho gayi hai.
Mr. Dobrial: but she is my daughter and I can't see her like this..
Madhu:waqt ke sath sab thik ho jayega
Mr. Dobrial: aur kotna waqt? Ek saal toh beet chuka hai…
Madhu: hum Pia ki shadi karva dete hai..shayad isse kuch ho
Mr. Dobrial: tum ye kya bol rahi ho? Shadi? Taki uske saath kisi aur ki zindagi vi kharab ho jaye, woh uss rishte ko kuch nahi de payegi..
Pia overhears this conversation…
Pia just goes to her room without reacting,
Mr.Dobrial: Dekha usse ab humare jhagre se vi kuch mehsus nahi hota, Pehle Pia kaise hume chup rahneko bolti thi…
Mai kuch dino ke liye London ja raha hu…important deal ke liye..tum Pia ka khayal rakhna and kuch vi problem ho toh phone kar dena.
Madhu: don't worry sab thik hoga…

At International conference, In London, UK

Everyone was present and all the preparations were done for the conference. All the board members were also present. Companies from different parts of the world had gathered to get this deal. This deal was offered by the topmost Industry of the world! "New Trend"was the name that everyone wanted to be associated with!
Mr. Dobrial (asked to his manager): Manetoh socha that ke zyada log nahi ayenge, afterall it is a new Company but people from all over the world are here, it is going to be a tough competition..
Manager: sir..it is one of the topmost companies of the world..sab toh ayenge hi. Bas ek hi sal mei bohat tarakki kar li hai is company mei.And all credit goes to the owner,Abir Malhotra...he is a dynamic personality. Bas 24 years ka hoke, full business akela handle karta hai.
Mr. Dobrial: oh I see. Where is he? I would like to meet him.
Manager: he is about to come..uska hi wait kar kahe hai sab…
They hear many noises fron outside the conference hall..
Manager asks a peon 'what is this noise all about?"
Peon: Lagta hai Abir sir aye hai. Sab unko welcome kar rahe hai.
Mr.Dobrial: sab toh aise treat kar rahe hai jaise koi celebrity ho..
Manager: celebrity hi toh hai..ek sal mei hi businessman of the year ka award mila hai..
Abir Malhotra enters into the conference hall and everyone stands up, giving respect to him.
But Mr.Dobrial is shocked to see him. His jaw fell open and he uttered "Abhay"
Manager: sir plz sit down sab baith gaye hai.
The meeting went of well,.
Manager:he liked our presentation..maybe he is interested. But sir ap chup kyon the?apne toh ek shabd vi nahi bola.
Mr. Dobrial: I want to meet him..plz arrange a meeting with him
Manager: Ok sir…let me talk to his secretary.
After an hour,
Manager: Sir he is very busy for the day but ap unse evening ko mil sakte hai..when he will be swimming but bas 15 minutes ka time dia hai.
Mr Dobrial: thik hai.

At evening, poolside

Mr. Dobrial is waiting ,
Abir: Hello!
Mr. Dobrial: kaun ho yum
Abir(laughing):strange! U don't know me and u came to sign a deal wit my company..I an Abir Malhotra..
Mr.Dobrial: par tum bilkul Abhay jaise dikhte ho
Abir: excuse me!
Mr. Dobrial: I am sorry! How can u be Abhay, he is dead.
Abir:I am not getting anything
Mr Dobrial shows him the pictures of Abhay with Pia
Abir: how can this be possible? What kind of joke os this?
Mr.Dobrial(nearly in tears): joke toh kismat kar rahi hai meri beti k sath. Jo Abhay ke pyarr mei khud ko bhulake baithi hai..ek zinda lash ban chuki ha..bas tum usko bacha sakte ho..mai tumhare aage apna hath jorta hai
Abir(pitting his hand on Mr. Dobrials hand): plz don't do this. I can understand how u r feeling..though I am an orphan but I can understand the feelings of a father,
Mr. Dobrial: mai bas apni bacchi ko haste hue dekhna chahta hu.
Abir:but how can I…I am sorry..
Mr. Dobrial: koi mushkil kam nahi hai tumhare liye .Bas kuch dino ke liye..ek bebas baap ki madat karo
Abir was silent he was in this awkard position…he just looked at Pia's picture and something happened to him…He just closed his eyes for a second and told " ok I will go with u!"

Edited by ScaryAngel - 12 years ago

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