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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update.hope things sort out between them soon.thanx for pm and continue soon.
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Awww shoo cute n funny i love it poor piya n abhay
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gud job👏 so how is Abhay gonna win back pia?
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amazing update
feeling sad for abhiya , look like this time abhay really do so much hard work -pia forgiveness, waiting nxt update
pls pls pm me
this time you didn't give my pm of this update
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wow great story plz update soon
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chapter 44
part 1
abhay looked at the golden earings on his hand with thoughtfull face.he was on his room lying on his bed.he was feeling so restless from the time he came back from collage.everytime her wet eyes and shrunked face he was feeling so much disgusted towards himself.he just wanted her to keep away from himself,from the monster inside him,but never thought that he wld break her so badly in that process!"damn it!!what have i done?!u are r8 piya,i am a jerk!!but i didn't mean to hurt u!!pls believe me piya!!when i said those words,the burn i fell...but how can i make u understand that how much sorry i am!!..."he continued to say with his broken voice.he made her cry today!!why everything was going so complicted?!he let out a painfull laugh.it was obvious to have complications between them.although being a monster,he dared to become close to an angel!!they were poles apart in nature.he didn't deserve a pure soul like her.she was light and he was the darkness.cld light and darkness ever be together?!but he cldn't had the eabillity to controle his feelings anymore!!he and his inner demon,both had started to crave for her.his dead heart had fallen for him madly!!"pls piya,don't leave me!i cldn't imagine a single day without having a single glance of you!i didn't imagined that i'll ever said thosr words but it's the very true of my life!!..."he said with so much urging tone.her hurt distrudtfull eyes again hit him.wld she ever trust him again?!he shouldn't come that much close to her.she was not like those usual girls and she had guts.but...suddenly he smilled remembering about her reactions when he was kissing her!!she still feel for him!!although she was trying hard to hide that but her heart's every loud beat exposed everything and till she had that feeling in her heart,there was hope.he just had to snatch out those feelings again and he knew how to do that!!abhay again smilled tossing the golden earings on his hand.her token which she unconciously giftrd to her,still containing her lovely scent."jitna chahe nafrat karlo piya par hum to tumhe pukarte rahenge,barbar tumhare paas ayengey jabtak tum mujhe maaf na kardo!!"he said with a love filled voice and kissed that golden earings feeling her lovely essence spreading allover him."piya!!"he whispered lovingly.
piya was trying hard to get some peacefull sleep,but as soon as she was closing her eyes that washroom incident was flashing behind her eyelids."why piya!!why ur touch melts ur all determination?u know that he is a jerk,then why are u still being attrackted"she was rolling in the bed from one side to another."god!!pls i wanna forget everything!!i want to forget him!!pls..."she whispered closing her eyes.her fate seemed smilling looking at her condition.suddenly piya again felt that touch.his cold intoxicating touch.she clearly felt his cold lips brushing over her chicks.she frozed!!"piya..."suddenly a clear whishper floated into her hear.piya jumped up from the bed pooping out her eyes!!she looked at each and every corner of the room.but as usual he cldn't find any tress of him and somehow it seemed that he was not at the room.his voice seemed coming from far distent.piya got up from her bed and slowly and came near the window.the boat of the moon was standing steal on the sea of clouds.a very rare sight."abhay!!"his name automatically came out of her mouth when the cold night breeze touched her.
abhay was still lying on the bed helding that earing on his chest when he heared piya's voice which made him shocked.he opened his eyes with an amused look.how cld she be there?but he heared that voice so clear although,it seemed like coming from far distant.suddenly he understood and smilled."so,u r thinking of me piya?!do i still occupy a small corner of ur heart?"he whishpered with a smille.
after the dance reharsal sanaya dragged piya forcefully to the reharsal hall.piya didn't wanted to again face him after yesterday's incident.but deep inside her heart she wanted to meet him again.hesitantly she stepped inside the hall.the practise was going on.abhay and t was in the stage as romio-juliete.abhay was standing at a corner with an irritated face looking at t and t was full on with her overacting."romio...ow mere romio!!..."her dramatic nosy word make every1 irritated."ow mere romio!..."the way she was mooving her hands like she was dancing although the scene was so damn emotional and touchy."god just say the next line..."sanaya whispered irritatedly."really!!never have seen this type of romio julliet act."piya cldn't afoard to giggle."arey yaar!!i knew that this t wld be disaster but i wonder what happened to abhay?!!u know whenever i saw his act i feel goosebumps!!but today he seemed not interested at all!!"sanaya said.
abhay was totally irritated with t's julliete act and he was not a little bit concentrated on the act.he observed piya coming inside hesitantly.after that his was just admiring her smilling face."oww romio...i love u romio,i love u so much..."t again said in her nosy voice continuing her dance.arohi cldn't take further and rushed to the stage with a disgusted face."hey hello!!what's going on?kya ho raha hain ye sab?!"she screamed on t's face."what do u mean?i am playing my part!!"t said loudly."part?!!madam t u r julliete,not a dumbo!!..."arohi screamed."what??!how can u call me a dumbo??"t's head started to boil."cause u r acting like a dumbo!!"arohi said,"just look t.ur romio has come to meet through so many obstacle!!where is the emotion yaar?!and u r just saying a same dialouge again and again!!agey bh to ku6 bolo madam t!!"arohi screamed."how dare u to speak to me like this!!u said my acting is dumb!!!!i will quit the play and then lets c how can u found another julliete for the play!!"t said angrilly."listen t!!we have to give u julliet's roll cause princi told us to do so as ur father is one of the trusty of this clg.otherwise we won't ever cast u for any role."arohi promped."what the hell?!u only give me this roll for princi's req..."t was totally mad."obviously!!u know t every1 present in this room can act better than u!even the side roll actors are doing so good!!but our all effort is fruitless cause we have to put a girl in the main lead who is not worthy of being a being shoilder!!"arohi said loudly."what??!!me a dead sholdier?!how dare u!!how cld u say that other girls of our clg can act better than me!!better than t??!!they didn't have a little bit of my beauty!!"t said proudly."oh hello,apni nose ko thoda niche karo t.to play julliet,it's not enough to be just beautiful!!u have to understand the pain,the passion,her craving for her romio and u c'nt have the sense to feel it!!and i am showing u the truth t.not only our clg girls,even look at piya,she cld also act better than u!!!"arohi screamed in flow."what??!!"as soon as arohi took her name piya's jaw drooped in shock.
part 2 at nxt pge.
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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part 2
"what!!!!..."t screamed madly as arohi compared her to piya."that good for nothin girl,even doesn't have dressing sense!!!she is better than me??how can u say that?!!"her face was all red in anger."ohh yeah!!she is truly btr than u t!!"arohi said."arohi no!!.."piya said with worried face as t looked straightly towards piya with her all angry face."f9 then tell her to come hear and play the scene.i sware if she can act a little bit i will never complain again."t muttred."she will!!cmn piya!!"arohi called her loudly."no arohi plz not me!!"piya said loudly.t smirked,"now c,she doesn't have the guts to come on stage."she said."cmn piya!!it's now the matter of our prestige!!u have to do it!!"sanaya promped."but.."piya was still hesitating.she didn't have any problems with julliete's role.she was always been a promter in her clg plays for her sharp memory and catching power.so she reminded most of the dialouges!but how cld she act with that abhay raichand!!!"cmn piya!!what are u waitin for."arohi said.piya slightly turned and looked towards abhay who was giving his super irresistable signature smirk towards her.god!!everywhere she went fate always brought her in front of him."piya go.."sanaya said.clutching her longskirts to controle her violent heartbit and blood rush through her vane piya took measured steps towards the dias.she didn't looked towards abhay once,otherwise she wld observe the chsnge into him.the person who seemed all dull and monotonous,suddenly his ocean blue eyes flickered the intensity at the moment she took first step towards the stage.she came on the stage and stooped at the centre.t and arohi got down from the stage.abhay stepped towards her looking to her all red face with so much intensity in her eyes.piya's eyes were all shifted towards ground.she felt him standing infront of him."listen mr.i don't have any interest in this rubish act and i know u can never wish to do such things!!so just finish it off!!i'm going..."piya quickly turned back without looking towards him for a single moment and suddenly abhay caught her one hand and she frozed sensing his touch!!he slowly mooved her behind causing her to face him and when her baby brown eyes met his intense ocean blue eyes she was dumbed and rooted to the spot.suddenly light got dimmed and only foccused at the centre.the audience cldn't help the gasp looking towards the perfect romio julliet at the stage they had ever scene.like some unknown spell made both of them allive and snatched out from the classic tale.abhay looked straightly into her mesmerized baby brown eyes.so close,which he always dreamed of.he got melted into those warm eyes who was uneable to remove itself from him.as abhay started to say romio's words his deep,beautiful mesmerizing voice stunned piya.
romio:mohabbat ne mujhe pankh di hain aur yahan tak pouchaya hain.ye patthar ke dewar khari hain hamare beech.lekin aaj..maohabbat ne ek jurrat ki hain,ek awaz di hain.ab rok sake na hamko koi.
piya got lost into those eyes,into those voice.her each and every being seemed just for him.it felt like worthless if she cldn't be with her.the emotions which she locked somewhere in her heart suddenly came out and drowned her allover.she submitted herself to those eyes and julliet's dialouge automatically came out of her mouth.
julliet:kyun aye ho tum yahan?!tum jante ho agar unhone tumhe dekh liya to wo tumhe maar dakengey,kyun aye tum meri jindagi mein?!tumhare ane se pehle hum kitne khus the.par jab se tum aye ho aisa lag ta hain jaise sabkuch badal gaya hain!jaise ek tufan aya ho aur main sukhe patte ki tarah uske sath beh rahi hoon.kyun kar rahe ho aisa?tumhe pata hain,ham dono ek nahi ho sakte.hum dono ke bich ki yeh patthar ki dewar itni majbut hain ki kahi ise paar karte karte tum khud na kho jao.nahi...aisa nahi ho sakta!!tumhe jana hoga yahan se...kisine dekh liya to tumhe maar denge sab.jao yahan se...kyun itna bada khatra mode le rahe ho mere liye?kyun barbar mere samne chale ate ho mujhe satane ke liye?
piya cldn't stop herself anymoe.she felt like it was her own words not julliet's.she felt julliete and her feelings were so much simmilar.suddenly abhay leaned closer to her and draged her closer by her waste.piya lifted to look towards his face drymouthed!!the passion and intensity playing on his eyes melted her allover.
romio:raat ke andhere mein chupna sikha hsin maine.tumhare mohabbat ke liye to ab maut bhi kabul hain.hazaro baar maut kabul hain.sirf aajki is raat ke liye...
piya closed her eyes to supress her tears.she was feeling so terrified as it seemed like the most beautiful dream she ever had and beautiful dream never stayed long.she opened her eyes and slowly backed her feet looking towards his bewildered face with a sad almost wet eyes.with a long pause she said slowly,
julliet:tum to mujhse nafrat karte the,to phir kya hua aaj?!tum to hamesha mujhse door rahena chahte they?!!to phir aaj kyun mere karreb aa rahe ho?hum to bhula chuke the tumhe!!to phir kyun bhulne nahi de rahe ho?!pehele to tum mera chehera bh nahi dekhna chahte they aur aab har pal mujhe dekhna chahte ho?kyun kar rahe ho aisa?kyun apne sabse bade nafrat ko apne sab se badi mohabbat bana rahi ho?kyun door nahi reh sakte ho mujhse.
cldn't be eable to hold herself anymore,piya drooped her gaze.despite of trying hard a teardrop rolled from her eyes.abhay slowly came near her and cupped her face cause her to look into his eyes.piya's tears stooped at the moment as she was all amused and mesmerized.for the first time she saw that emotion in his eyes which she always wished for.yes,she saw that immense love for her in his oceanic eyes.his eyes were so carefull,warm and so much love filled.looking into piya's warm innocent eyes,abhay felt like watching into those eyes forever.both of them had forget the world and remembered nothing without each of them.abhay promped slowly caressing her chicks.
romio:kaise door rahesakta hoon main tumse?ab dekhe jise dekhna hain!ab roke jise rokna hain.mujhe nahi pata mujhe yahan kya khich laya hain.bas itna janta hoon ki ab tumse door nahi raha jata!dekho in chandni ko.jo tumhari akhon ko chukar sidha mere dil mein utarti hain.dekho in akhon ko,jo tumhe chukar mujhe apni bahon mein samet leti hain.ye sab bh yahin chahte hain ki ham dono ek ho.phir kyun tum ho mujhse itni door?chali aao,chali aao mere paas.
piya cldn't ignore that so much intense call of love.her lips trmbled and she closed her eyes he leaned closer to her and there lips were just inches away when suddenly the light brightened causing to come back them to her senses.piya opened her eyes and frozed at the place founding abhay so much closer to to her.at that moment the each and every portion of the hall filled up with the sound of clappings,amusing sounds and praises of the audience.piya quickly slipped out of his hand and without looking behind for a single time she stormed out of the hall with all red face.
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guyz,i think u all allready understood that the whole romio julliete act was stole from pkyek with some of my additions!!😉sorry if i offend anyone,and pls don't mind.i have all respect towards the gr8 shakespear and cvs of pkyek.don't wanted to bash any1😊!but those dialouges my one of d fav dialouges from pkyek and c'nt cntrl myslf to lend them,😳and also sorry for the emotional atyachar of 'sudh hindi' dialouges!!!😆hope u can keep up with this!!just kiddin.plz reply soon!! :)
yeppii!!sajni has reached to it's 100th page with this post!!thx so much guyzz.love u all and cont to lv ur cmnts.
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Originally posted by: singhshailesh86

amazing update
feeling sad for abhiya , look like this time abhay really do so much hard work -pia forgiveness, waiting nxt update
pls pls pm me
this time you didn't give my pm of this update
pls continue soon

so sorry for not sending pm earlier.there are so many peoples in pm lst.thx for likin and cmntng.sorry again nd plsdon't mind!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
i can not wait for the next part of your story
thanks for the pm
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part 43
amazing update
liked t part😆

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