new abhiya ff-THE UNION-read once u'll love it - Page 15

The foot romance was hilarious...I loved writing it...:P



Thnx all for reading will continue soon...

lovely update
chand and haseena make piya o comfy like that
and table scene😆
loved abhiya scenes
cont soon

Originally posted by: temptations

Janvie ji...hum aapke comment ka wait kr rhe h...jaldi jaldii pado yar...sahi mai ruka ni jara ...actual mai tumhara comment padh kar lagta h..arre haan ye part to sahi mai maine acha likha h...pls janvie..jaldi yar...

Awww...So Sorry to keep you waiting...
But I was having some Internet problem,That's Why couldn't read it earlier. 😭 😳

Okay I cam consider it...well panchi is nt in my scene..bt I cn get sid if u ask...as u hv asked an idea has stiked my mind...sid will b super witty..n may b I will get panchi..may b..I mean if shhe's needed...bt done sid..will come. In the plot...thnks for such a blast comment..I'm really happy ..kisi ki hasana sabse. Mushkil kam hota h n if I m capable of doing dat..I feel gr8 ...really ..thnku...

Originally posted by: bellaaa

lovely update
chand and haseena make piya o comfy like that
and table scene😆
loved abhiya scenes
cont soon

Thnku ...will continue soon
..

Sorry guys .. I'm very busy...will b able to update by this weekend only...

Sorry again...will pm u as soon as I update..

I'm so so so sorry for late post pls..maaf krna..I was very busy..hope u like d next chp..


Recap:pia went to abhay's home.met haseena and was liked a lot by haseena.abhiya was given a green symbol by haseena.there were many funny moments in abhay's home.n finnaly abhiya had their first kiss.

CHAPTER 13:

Sharma niwas:
Pia reachd inside and heard sugandh

S-mahesh aaj saab massorrie gaye hai .do din tak unka khana nahi banana hai.

M-ji madam

Hearing this pia got struck by an idea.
P(in mind)- gr8 nanu nhi h..ab muje mom ko apne kareeb lana hoga .in do din mai mujhe mom ko vapis pana hoga..haan pia u hv to do this.

Pia went to room .changed into nightwear. And was raoming in her room..
P-kya karu..kya karu..haan mish ko call krti hun
M-hello ..

P-hey misha

M-bolo behnaa..

P-misha shh...kisi ne sun lia toh..ki tumhari behen kaha se paida hogyi..

M-haahah..dnt worry I'm alone in d room

P-acha sun..I need help..

M-bol

P-nanu ghar pe nahi h do din ke liye..wat shud I do ki mom ..u know..apni actual feelings muje dikhae..

M-hmmm...I see.. (aftr a min) pia emotional attack..

P-wats dat?

M- pia massi pe attack kar ,unse past ke ques pooch pooch kar n then wen she brakes down tell her..yes dat wud b just perfect

P-misha dat wud hurt mom

M- not more than wat she had and is facing since d past 20 years..come on pia unhe khushi dene ke liye u hv to do it

P-hmm..I think u r right

M-to fir soch kya rhi h..ja maasi ke room mai n shuru hoja..

P-yes misha...thnks yar..

M-come on man..I'm ur sis ..dnt embarass me..go n all d best..

They cut the call..
Pia straight away went to sugandh's room without thinking wat she will speak..

Pia knocked d door..sugandh opened it..
S-yes pia..any problem..

P-mm...aunty actually aapse kuch zaroori baat krni thi..something related to being a girl.

S-hmm...aao andar aa jao..
They went in..pia scanned d whole room and her eye locked on a photo frame which was turned back

S-betho (they both sat on the bed) ,bolo

P-mm...vo..aunty..mai bilkul akeli hoon..koi mere care karne ke liye nhi h.agar mai ladka hpti to shayad mere mom dad muje kabhi chodh kar nhi jaate..chaahe kuch bhi hojae end mai ladki ko hi suffer karna padta hai.mujhse koi shaadi nhi karna chahta kyuki mere family nhi h.

S-aisa nhi hota hai beta...

P-acha aunty toh aap ye batao ki aapki shaadi kyu nhi hui..

S(sadly,emotionally)- aisa nhi h.meri shaadi ho chuki hai. Bas mai yaha rehti hun papa ke sath.he needs me.

P-toh fir aapke pati ,bache kaha hai

S-tumhe kyu batao

P-kyuki bol dijiye aapne suffer nahi kara h..

S-haan kia hai toh...

P-aunty pls aap muje bataiye ,mai aapki madad karna chaahti hun..please..(pia rose and sat beside sugandh)

S(sugandh melted a bit now)-meri madad to vo uparwala bhi nhi kar saka tum kya karogi..kyu batao mai tumhe

P- ..bataiye aapko aapke papa ne kyu yaha rakha h..aap khush kyu nhi h..shaadi ke naam par kyu udaas ho jati h aap..mujhe pata hai aap ko yaha zabardasti rakha gya h..

S(angry)-kuch nhi paata h tumhe..(in tears)
Jaana chahti ho naa kyu hun mai yaha..sab shak karte hai mujh pe..sabko lagta hai mujhme koi kami h jo mai apne pita ke ghar par hoon..meri shaadi hui thi mere pyaar arnab se.shaadi ke kuch mahine baad vo muje chodh kar chala gya. Kahi dur ,kaha kyu bina kuch bataye vo chala gya..papa se nhi jhela gya mera dukh unhe laga mere unke maa baap ke sath rehna theek nhi hoga isliye mujhe le aaye yaha..meri choti se duniya cheen di papa ne..jaaan lia ki meri ujhdi hui zindagi ke peeche mere hi pita ka hath hai..

P-aap ne vapis jane ki koshish bhi nhi ki

S-ek pregnant aurat khud kuch nhi kar sakti..mai maa bane wali thi arnab ke bache ki.

P-toh aapkaa bacha..

S(was crying badly)- mera ..bacha..cheen lia papa ne..usse vaha ..mumbai chodh aaye..(sugandh fainted)

P-oh..no..oh no..ye kya hua..uff...I shudnt hv asked so many ques together..aunty..aakhen kholiye..
Pia sprinkled water from the glass beside .

Pia read a description of doctor..in which it was written sugandh is a stress patient

P-oh no pia ye kya kia
She sprinkled more water..sugandh woke this time..
P-i'm I'm sorry ..muje pata nhi tha..aap stress nhi le skte..
S(holding her head)- mera bacha..chahiye muje pia...mere bacha lao muje(holding pia's shoulder)..lao pia..kahi se bhi lao..na jana kitna bada hogya ya gyi hogi vo..
Pia cudnt control her tears n started crying..and was confused ..-(in mind)is this the moment I shud tell mom...yes pia this is d moment bol..ab nhi to kbhi nhi..

P-...mum...muma...aapka bacha aapke samne h muma..

S-mera bacha..tum meri beti ho...ye nhi hoskta..tum to..kaise..nhi tum zhoot bol rhi ho..tumhari maa to mar gyi h..pia don't lie(shooing pia's shoulder n facing other side)

P-muma mai jhoot nhi bol rhi hoon..mai pia dobriyal hoon maa...pia rai nakli h..mujhe rajesh aur archana dobriyal ne paala hai..mai hi arnab dobriyal ki beti hun..jise nanu ne dadu ke darwaze pe chodh diya tha..(pia started crying badly and fell on d floor)

Sugandh was hell shocked..cuz no one knew her inlaws name except her father n her..she had to be her daughter(she thought)
Sugandh got up from bed ,making pia stand holding her shoulders..pia rose with her
S-pia..mera bacha.. (hugging n crying)

P-muma...I'm sorry maine aapse aise sawal poocha..(hugging back)

S-kaha thi tum itne dino se muma ke paas pehle aajati beta...janti ho kitna roi mai tumhare liye

P-mom aapko kya lagta h ..mai nhi roi..maine 18 saal bina aapke nikale hai.

S-i'm sorry beta..mai majboor thi..tumhare nanu ne muje nahi jane dia kahi..unhone dhamki di thi ki mai agar yaha se bhagi toh vo tumhe maar denge..

P-nanu aisa kuch chaahte h..unhe pata chal gaya tha mom kuch din pehle ki mai aapki beto hun..par vo fir bhi nahi mane..muma..nanu ne bhit galat kia..

S(finnaly parting away n wiping pia's tears n pia her)- its okaay beta der sawer tum aayi mere paas..us bhagwan ne sun li meri..ab muje tumse koi alag nhi kar sakta..aane do papa ko..hum unhe milkar maza chakahenge..(both giggling)




Precap:

Pia and sugandh bonding increasing by every moment.
Sugandh tallks with rajesh and archana.
Shekhar(nanu) returns home and ab toh uski kher nhi.. :P



Pls do comment ..sorry for late post, but I was very busy..

Pls do hit like button and ur comment..u like the chp..tel me...n also tell wat u want to have next!!

First of all,Welcome back dear.🤗 🤗 You updated after so long,I was eagerly waiting for it.
Awesome + Amazing Update dear!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ I really loved it alot.❤️
Misha is really smart.What an idea man!! 👏
I really loved Misha-Piya sisterly bonding.They both are just perfect sisters. 😳 ❤️
Pia ne finally apni Mom se sach nikalwa hi liya.Really Great Job.And Sugandh was a stress-patient,I was like. 😲 🤣
I'm so happy Finally the mother-daughter duo got completed.Wow. 😃 😳 It was really an emotional part,
The maa-beti duo brought me to the verge of tears. 😳 😳 (I was seriously not expecting their Union in this part,
You really gave me a surprising shock. 😊 😳 😳 )
Hmm,Nanu ka Toh Ab Band-Baaja-Baarat nikalne wala hai.🤣 🤣 😆
You said What We ppl want next,Hmm,Deal with this Nanu thing in the next few updates.And Pls Beech-Beech me Abhay and Abhiya ko bhi dikhana,I missied that in this part. 😳 😳
And Also I said to you about Sid's entry.I would like it If you also include him in this story after few updates.He can bring Spice with him.And Haan Agar Use Include karti ho,Toh Abhay ka Big-Bro hi banana.That would be the best thing.Also Last Time,I said about Panchi also,Hmm that's coz I wanted Sid to be paired with someone in future.It depends,Bring her only If it is needed.(If You don't want to include Sid then I don't have any problem.Just That I love him alot and his charachter can bring lots of spice in the story.If you don't have time now,Then after some updts,When you get time,Work on his charachter and then make his entry.I will surely wait.😊)
I said 1 hour while editing the comment and I'm doing it now in the morning,Actually mai So gayi thi raat ko.That's Why. 😳 😳 😆
Pls Continue Soon.😊 (When You Get Time,I will be waiting patiently.No worries.😊)
Thanks for the pm. 😃

nanu ki band baaj ne waali hai