An Unfinished Canvas Abhlya FF New Update Pg 11

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harinisriram39

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Thanks a lot for the FF Syria, Please do update whenever you get time

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Resh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Nice update
If I m sure 2.years back u started this story but never finished
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Petal_Pose

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Note, I am not pming anybody when I update. Two reason -1 laziness, and 2 don't have time.😆I will announce ahead of time when another chapter will be updated.Chapter 2 and 3 will be updated by 2 am U .S. time today.I am updating this for Shreya who is not leave me alone until I do so.🤔😆

Edited by Siberian_Pigeon - 12 years ago

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Trishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

oye lazy gal koi gala ni dont pm us but just update it...

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Fabulous Syria. im loving it. lots of action can be here and strong characters. waiting for chapter 2

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read
my name is alicia pm me

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Petal_Pose

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 2 (The Master, Raichand Mansion)

Peter(Abhay's trusted informant )raced to the library to inform his boss about the latest killing of the vampires.He informed the bodyguards he need to talk to the boss about an emergency.The body guard did as he asked, and let him in the library where his master was sitting.

Sitting at a expensive, leather sofa by the fireplace Abhay Raichand (The Lord of the Vampires) sipping a bottle of his favorite wine looking like a Godfather, reading a book. He was his navy color suit. The suit fit his lean body very well. His blue piercing eyes, angular jaw, pale skin and his mysterious aroma could make any female fall in love with him at instant. Abhay Raichand, the name itself evoked fears in the supernatural community.He was one of the powerful supernatural creature that was walking the face of the Earth.Known for his aggressiveness, and ruling with an iron fist over his community , he never liked to manifest his soft side.He always manifest soft side because he knew his enemies could use it against him. Vampires only knew he was never unfair with anyone no matter where they came from which did irritate some of the members of his council, but they never dared to say anything due to fears. At by his side were his trusted eunuchs never leaving the sight of their lord.They were all standing dressed in black t-shirt, and black pants guarding him like the President of U.S. If anyone desired to meet their lord, they would be with Abhay unless he dismissed them.

Abhay dismissed his bodyguards ,and instructed Peter to sit down. Getting him from the sofa, smirking and putting the book aside he was reading. He poured some wine,and handed it to Peter.

Peter awaiting to release the news to the boss took the wine, and waited for him to say something.

Abhay (grinning) - So has he been killed ? (Abhay asked taking the sip of the wine that he was drinking before).

Peter (nodding) - Yes your excellency . The girl has killed one of our finest man again.

Abhay (smirking)-Interesting as always she is .Can you inform me how many shots it took her to kill him this time? (Abhay raised his eyebrow)

Peter- Boss, she killed one your man torturing him .And,you are smiling (confused)

Abhay - It always interesting when Pia Dobriyal kills one of our man. (grinning)

Peter ( bewildered)-Why boss?

Abhay -Because when Miss .Pia Van Hassling kills, she kills for a reason.It gives me pleasure to know more about her.(Abhay sipped a piece of wine , amused)

Peter(pleading to Abhay-, protesting nervously)- Your excellency she killed one of our strongest man.She keeps on killing our man , yet we never take any action against her.

Abhay (annoyed , shattered his glass that had held wine).Peter knew he had said too much today .

Abhay (hissing under his breath)-When I told you when Pia kills vampires, she only kills those who deserved to be killed. She might despise our species, but she never hurts the one who have done no harm. Varun deserved to be killed. He had violated most of the principles I strictly laid for our community.Yes, it's dangerous that she is killing our species at a such a fast rate, but we have new born being born everyday. Anyway, I won't have any problem with her killing our own species as long she does not harm the innocent ones. Saying this, Abhay stormed out of the room living Peter trembling in fears what he had just done.

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Abhay's room

Abhay had by now calmed down a little bit. He had nearly ended up killing his most trusted informant. He pulled out a picture from the cup board staring at Pia's mother picture. Hearing footsteps,he quickly tucked the picture away. It was his mother who entered the room. Dressed in half color red long sleeved dress, and dazzling in jeweleries , Haseena ( the King's mother) entered the room. Looking as always radiant as usual, she hugged her son.

Haseena (examining Abhay)- You looked flushed .What do I see? Human emotions ( she asked curiously)

Abhay- Nothing mother, you knew the usual matters, and stress. ( He said trying to cover it up.)

Haseena ( furious)-You might be a vampire lord, but you are my son.I know when you are lying.

Abhay( looking away walked over to the window, staring at the moon)- Mum , I don't want to discuss this any further. It would be better if you left (he said closing his eyes)

Haseena came around, and put her arm around his shoulder)- I know you blame yourself what happened fifteen years ago to Piyali's mother, but it was not your fault. (she spoke softly to her son). She knew her son still blamed himself for what happened to Pia's mother.Pia did not know Abhay than, nor that it was Abhay was linked to her mother some how.

Abhay ( closing his eyes, tears of blood dropping from his eyes)- You know mum when times she comes to know, I could have protected her mother.She will come after my life.She has not made any move to kill me or risk it because she knows I am powerful yet I am fair in justice.I can't bear to see her hate me you know.I hate manifesting these human emotions to others, but u know she is the reason behind my humanity.I still have been able to give her mother the justice she deserves. The killers were untraceable after that night, and have put some kind of spell that only a descendant of a Selene can unlock it. I am unable to unlock what happened that night, and find the descendant of Selene which can unlock for me .(Abhay said softly,disappointed at himself).

Haseeena (speaking in a low tone voice,and assuring him )- Have patience my son.! We will catch them some day.

Abhay (looking back Haseena)-It's funny how I am one of the most powerful supernatural creature in the world, yet still I can do one tiny thing.(

Haseena told him not to think about the matter anymore,and left to meet Chand (her husband). Abhay stared back at the moon thinking it was about time he met Pia (again after 10 years). He knew this meeting was going to be interesting. He knew she had grown up in a beautiful women. He did not know if she still remembered him after all these years, and how she felt about him. Also, he had to get her on his side not his enemies. It's fascinating that she hates vampires, yet spares the ones who cause no harm. Ones who try their best to fit in to human society,and follow their rules. The girl definitely has conflicting emotions when in terms the species she hates, Abhay pondered.Why was she sparing them?Abhay pondered looking at the full moon .

Don't ask me to jump on Abhlya romance at all once. I am not doing it, and Abhiya are not meeting until Chapter 6.😆Next update will be on 2nd of Feb.If anyone wants to collab with me, please do pm me because if u do that I can give faster updates.😳

P.S. not pming due to laziness.Enjoy :) Do leave feed backs,and suggestion on how u want to the story to shape up. 😊

Edited by Siberian_Pigeon - 12 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Wow. Awesome update Syria.
I wonder why Abhay blames himself for Piya's mother and what will she do when she finds out?
Eagerly waiting for more Syria.

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Petal_Pose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Wow. Awesome update Syria.
I wonder why Abhay blames himself for Piya's mother and what will she do when she finds out?
Eagerly waiting for more Syria.

As always the first one.😆You will get your answers soon a you get along. Ohh Pia is gonna demand some thing from Abhay in return for her cooperation for something. U just wait and watch..It's not gonna be a rosy ride. There is a reason why Pia who loathes Vampires, yet still spares who cause no harm to humanity.You will know why she spares them as we go along, and what she is working on to bring them to humanity.😳