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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello guyzzz!!! remember me😊,yaad nahi to jaldi yaad karlo😛.my xam is over and i'm back with my long long huge chapters😆.i really missed u guyyzzz ,and missed to write this ff.so i am posting the longest chap so far...hope u enjoy all..😃

chapp 8
"hey misha,pia come hear..."panchi called them from door.
pia was about to run somewhere else to avoid abhay,but panchi took away her chance.unwillingly she followed misha.mr and mrs dobriyal along with panchi were greeting raichand familly.when they reached them,mr dobriyal introduced them to raichands.mr and mrs raichand gave them a dry smile."so,u 2 r in mt clg."mrs raichand said"abhay is also in mt clg.u knw each other?"she asked."yeah of course."misha said with a smile.pia glanced a little 2wards abhay who'se eyes were glued to her,suddenly to pia's surprise abhay expanded his hands to her"nice to meet u" he said wid that irrresistable smirk."grrr...he was again doing it..."pia said in mind.she wished if she could gave him a knockout punch for this!but there were too much people arround and uncle and aunty also.she didn't noticed abhay suppresed a huge burst of laugh when she was thinking to punch him.with a mocking face she expanded her hand to him and touch his broad palm.their hands touched eachothers.
pia was shocked!!his hand was too much cold.like she was putting her hands into a freezer or bunch of ice cube.that cold touch triggered a cold elactric puls through her spine which was not tollerable.she quickly removed her hand.abhay's smirk broaded.chand and hassena was continuously giving a poisonous look towards their son."xcuse us,"mr dobriyal interrrupted"we have to go now.engagement is about to start."chand and haseena came out of trance."oh ya sure!"chand said"btw congratulation."he told panchi.panchi thanked him.
pia quickly got far away from raichands as soon as she got the golden chance."hey pia..."misha came came behind her."why are u running?".pia made a face"i'm not running. i just want to get far away from abhay raichand,who is dangerously getting on my nervs!!!!"..."what,abhay???"misha said confusingly."but i thought u 2 had solved ur problem.like how friendly ur shacking hands."..."crap misha!!!"pia said"i did it only bcs uncle and aunty was dere.otherwise i didn't even..."pia couldn't say further,she was boiling in anger."arey yaar let it go na.why r u spoiling ur mode for her?"misha suggested."i also wanted it.."pia said"but everytime avide him,he found a new way to irritate me."misha laughed."peheli baar aisi ladki dekhi jo abhay raichand se irritate hain..."..."hey misha..."kabir approached to them."oh no i'm dead!!!"misha said panick stricken."misha ur looking beautiful!!"kabir said in a amused voice.misha made a face"btw u knw how do u look in this cream color sherwani?"..."how...???"kabir said with a xcited face."ekdam...GADHAA(donkey) lag rahey ho."misha said with a irritating voice."now will u stop to irritate us?".kabir made a poor face.
after some times engagement took place.evry1 grreted the couple.after the ceremony,young people decided to have some fun."let's play antakhsari..."panchi suggested after gathering the people"but with a new twist,it will be a boy vs girl.one team boys.one girls..each group will be given a situation by me n danish.the group members have to sing according to the situation...understood?"panchi xplained the game strategy.evry1 was xcited and started to make team."aaj to tum ladkiyo ki khair nahi."1 member of boys team said."haan hann hum bhi dekh lenge.."one girl said.it's decided that danish would ask girls team and panchi-boys team.pia was passing by and misha called her."hey pia what r u doin?cme nd join us."..."me?"pia said confusingly."tension mat le yaar.bas sath dena hain.gana na ata ho toh bh chalega."misha assured.pia smilled and sat beside her."so boys.."panchi said "ur the first,suppose u love a girl,but she is not ready to acccept ur love,then what song will u sing to convince her?'time starts nw"..."hey i knw it.."kabir quickly took his guiter,looked at misha and started to sing.'dil ko tumse pyar hua/peheli baar hua/ tumse pyar hua...".evry1 started humming wid the lovely tune.misha couldn't hide a faint blush!then the girls were asked to sing a song on subjct "when u r so much irritated wid ur boyfrnd" in response 1 of d girl quickly started "anarkali disko chali..."
while the game was ongoing.raichands,at a corner were busy indere secret convo.chand said"abhay how much time i have to say,controle ur emotions.it can be dangerous.".."why c'nt u understand dad? abhay said frustratedly"how can i cntrl myslf whn my menaxi..."-----"menaxi and menaxi..."haseena said angrily"from when u have found pia ur just...how could u said she is ur menaxi.."----"i know mom she is my menaxiii"abhay cntinued.
danish said to girls team"nw suppose ur lover is too far from u,but u loved him deeply and want to express ur love,how will u xpress ur feelings to him wid a song..."evry1 became tensed.no one cld find a proper song."hey say somethin"misha said"or we will loose.."pia was quite untill then,she quickly mooved towards the corner where a piano was kept.
abhay was arguing wid his parents but suddenly frozed by a sweet hermony and automatically his eyes shifted towards corner.every face present at the room was shocked to sea pia playing such a magical tune.after a short slow begining music pia closed her eyes and slowly speak out in her musical voice.
Tu muskura jahan bhi hai tu muskuraaa
Tu dhoop ki tarah badan ko choo zaraaa...
every1 entered into trance aftr hearing that magical voice.misha's jaw had allready drooped and she was watching her like a google eyed amphibian.then the musician and orchestras started to play the music catching the tune.pia slowly got up from piano seat and started the fast track.
Tu muskura jahan bhi hai tu muskura,
Tu dhoop ki tarah badan ko choo zara
while singing she slowly moved towrds shoked and frozed misha.she kept her hand to make her out of trance.misha smilled.pia cntnd the song.
Sharir si yeh muskurhatein teri,
Badan mein sunti hu mein aahatein teri,
Labon se aake choo de apne lab zara,
Tu muskura jahan bhi hai tu muskura,
Sharir si yeh muskurhatein teri,
Badan mein sunti hu mein aahatein teri'
then a long music pause came.pia and misha pulled danish and panchi in dance floor all couples including kabir and misha also.they all started to dance surrounding pia.and abay was frozed in that instant in that moment...she didn't know how he craved for this magical voice of her over a century!!!abhay saw a dream.in his dream dere was a beautiful girl wearing a pink lehenga,who xsactly looks like pia,abhay was also dere and he was wearing an outfit of stable boy.the beautiful lady came towards him and hold his hand.after them they started to dance together! the song continued in dream.pia sang,
Aisa hota hai khayalon mein aksar,
Tujhko sochu to mehek jaati hu,
Meri rooh mein bassi hai teri khushbu,
Tujhko choo lu to behek jaati hu,
aftr that abhay started to sing..
Teri aankhon mein, teri aankhon mein,
Koi to jadoo hai, tu muskura,
Jahan bhi hai tu muskura,
abhay never wanted to come out of that beautiful dream but when pia sang the last line his dream broke and he came back into reality.his eyes became very much frustrated and intense."abhay..."haseena became worried looking at his face."she remembered mom,she remembered evrything.."murmuring those words he ran madly.
precap:he quitely bends over her and places a soft kiss on her temple
ps: i used this song from movie yuvraj.i thought it suits abhiya..so how's the chapp pls reply quickly😃
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Omg it was fabulous and abhay sang omg i cant imagine hin singing ...So does dat mean pia remembered everything...and the precap is exiting...thank u r R da pm...and so updt soon again i want to know if pia is meenaxi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
P.s i love da song frm yuvraaj too
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
fabulous update
liked the game & abhiya song
try to continu soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Loved the update
liked the song part
so Pia now remember everything
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
wow superb update👏 Abhay too sang the song me too luv this song❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
hello guyzz hears the new chapp,hope u enjoy and give reply quickly,
rone de aaj hamko do aankhen sujaane de

baahon mein lene de aur khud ko bheeg jaane de

hain jo seene mein qaid dariya woh choot jaayega

hain itna dard ke tera daaman bheeg jaayega
chapp9
the competition was over and girls were declared as winner.evry1 was praising pia for her song."aww we have won!!"maya,1 of her classmate hugged pia in xcitemnt"jaiswal ur too good..."maya said."yeah,that was awsome."another girl lina said.

misha came and joined them,"piaaa!!!"she said with round amazed eyes,"ur just fantastic buddy."then added "why didn't u tell me that u can sing so well?" pia smilled in response,"cmn guyz..."pia said"i hven't done nythin gr8!!!"she said shyli."but pia.."maya asked"i nvr hrd this song bfr..kaun se film ka song hain?" pia said with shy"this is not frm any flm,i made this song myslf!!"they gasped"wow yaar"lina said"outsatanding!!"pia smilled and said"thanx!!".at some distance from those bunch of grls abhay was secretly listening to their convo.his blue eyes started to glow in happiness when pia mentioned that it's her song."u remember evrything menaxi!!"he mumbled but his voice was so xcited."evrything will be fi9 nw,ab sabkuch thk ho jayega.i'm coming menaxi!!"

pia xcused her frnds and went outside to take some fresh air.there was too much gathering inside.it was chill out there.she steeped on d tender grasses and reached at a quite corner of garden.but her foot were automaticaly became still when she obsereved a tall fig just some steps away from her.abhay forowards his steps to her."what's he doing hear?"pia thought.she was going to make him listen some bitter words,but her anger was taken a back

after looking at his eyes!!his blue eyes were most beautiful ever,glowing with warmness and affection!!and also a keen intensity which totally traped her.she couldn't think about anything,she stood their dumbfounded,looking into his eyes.without shifting his gaze abhay slowly came so close to her,and after then evrything happened so soon!!!

he quitely bends over her and placed a soft kiss on her temple

with a sudeen electric shock through her vains,pia got back her sence and pushed the stone hard body of abhay with her full strenght,although in that process her arms ached like hell!!abhay looked at her with a shocking and painful eyes.pia gave him a disgustfull look.her eyes was full of hatered and anger."listen i..."abhay tried to say.

"don't even try to talk..."pia burst into anger."though i'm quite that doesn't mean that u will do evrything as u wish and i won't say a word.listen mr abhay raichand,i thought i was rude to u at the clg and i also thought to apolozige u!!but u again prooved me wrong!!!! what do u think i don't understand ur intensions?" she was to much mad at him.abhay was too much shocked,looking to her hateful eyes he could easilly understand that she hadn't remembered a single thing.but he couldn't contrl himself and the word came out automaticaly."but menaxi,i thought u remembered evrything!!!!"

"enough!!!"pia screamed"bahut dramma kar liya hain tumne,now please leave me in peace and never show ur face again.when u'll believe that i'm not menaxi!!"

"but that song..."abhay tried to ask."i made that song when i was in 10th std ok?!!now if it emitts ur quary,then stop following me!i want to be far away from u as much as possible!!"pia's eyes was in tears.she turned back and rushed inside.

abhay was left behind,with his frozen shatterd dead heart,unable to beat.unable to xpress his love for her.he shrunked in ground.suddenly his eyes started to change in deep blue color.the pain of his eyes suddenly shifted into anger,frustration and crazzyness.he got up in a flash and stormed towards forrest.

abhay was never that much furious before,he was running through the forest like a cyclone.evry being on his pathway ,that might be a wild animal or dry leaves were just vanishing.his eyes had caught the deepest blue color,even glowing in darkness.at last he reached the burnt house.he entered at the last room and crushed over floor."whyyy?????"he screamed furiously and punched heavily on the stony floor leaving a deep crack there,"why menaxi,why??u remember the every bit of that song but you have forgotten the person for whom u used to sing this!!!"his angelic face twitched in pain.a blood tear drooped from his eyes."i know menaxi,"he said in a husky voice"u r angry wid me na,because i cldnt save u from dat fire!!u hve to be.don't worry i'll convince u,i knw u'll forgive me,i knw..."

no one was dere to hear his painfull confession!!only the burnt house,broken furnitures and stone walls were there.but they were unable to reduce his everlasting sorrow!!

pia was on her bed. but the ache in her hand didn't allowed her to forget the incident.how dare he...pia didn't know why she didn't feel good after telling abhay those harsh word.his face was like he had lost evrything!!pia was also feeling a little twing of pain.had she talked too much.she didn't know why abhay had so much impact upon her,although she know him only for few days!!and didn't understand why she was always distracted by his eyes,why she also felt pain while scolding abhay!unknown to pia a teardrop dropped from her eyes.she started to sob quitely!!

both of them were so far from each other,but their hearts were deeply connected.both of them cried for eachother in that night.the twinkling stars who'se the owner of the fate of each n evry being in this world,looked at both of them and smilled!!

precap:"i'm sorry!!!"pia said quickly.abhay looked at her with shocked xpression.
ps:i used the song "tu muskura" from yuvraj as pia's own song.i didn't owe the copyr8.it's the only property of team"yuvraj" aheartly thx to gr8 mr rehman for composing such a heart touching music
😊
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update!
So Piya didnt remember anything.So sad.Felt bad 4 Abhay.Piya was too rude 2 him bt every gal wud react like dat.
Excited 4 further story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
finaly pia is going to apologize to him and she shud she was extreamly rude to abhay and great updt thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
gr8 part
feeling bad 4 Abhay as Pia was really rude
Is it in next chap Pia will remember everything?

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