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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
hello guyzz tomorrow i'm leaving for hostel will be missing u guyyzz very very much😭 and also writting this ff is lke my daily habit,i'll post next chapp after 15dec.but will be waiting for the response ofthis new chapp😊.be well and keep replying.
Bhool kar ke hamse agar koi bhool hue ho to bhool samaj ke bhoola dena
lekin bhoolana sirf bhool ko galti se bhi hamhe na bhoola dena
chapp 7
he was standing just inches away from her,his cold breath brushed over her face,she felt a cold wave through her spine!
"i can't understand anything!"pia said bending her eyelids "there are so many gals in this collage who will easilly fall for u then why the hell u r behind an ordinary girl like me?" she said sharply.then abhay loose his controle.he tightly grabd her two arms with his inhuman hands,"what do u think about me hn?!!"his voice was fierce,"u think i was doing this only to...listen i know very well what the other gals think about me and i don't care about their crapss!!!i only care about ur feelings,because u r not an ordinary girl to me!!! u r my menaxi,and i wanted u to remember that!!!".his grab tightened.pia was feeling her hand was becoming numb due to undescribable pain!!his word stabbed her like a knief and she understood she shouldn't say those words to him.she tried to stop her tears but her eyes became wet.abhay was to much mad that he didn't notice that his iron grasp was hurting pia.but when she looked towards him with her wet eyes it brought back his sence.he quickly left her hand."ouchhh"pia hold her arms quickly.she felt like if he would hold her hand for just one more min then it would surely broke apart.abhay was almost mad at himself to cause her pain.he looked at his inhuman stone hand and wished to broke them apart from his body.he looked towards pia who was busy to rub her arm."i'm sorry, is it hurt!!"he said grievely.pia looked at her with a boiled face to give him a doze of her angerness but loosed a huge portion of her anger when she looked at his face full of grief!!but she woudn't leave him so easilly."don't say a word."she sais harshly."1st of all it's not good to enter in a ladies washroom with a girl alone,don't u know that? and for the last time i'm telling u i'm not ur menaxi!!! i'm pia,u got that?"saying those harsh words she left the place quickly,didn't even give him a chance to apologize properly.abhay laughed painfully."it's good that i don't have a heart."he thought."otherwise it could surely stop beating after hearing that words from u pia,that u r not my menaxi!!!"
pia came back home in a bizzare mode,all the way misha was talking nonsences but she didn't even care to hear those words.abhay's painfull voice,his crazzyness,his passionate eyes were floating in her mind.pia was confused,1st she thought he was only trying to impress her and trap her,but after that washroom incident,it felt like he was not that easy to understand!!!2day his every word seemed very true to her.was he telling the truth? she thought,but for that she must solve the most complicated mystory,which was none other than menaxi!!!! however her mode freshen up when she reached dobriyal mansion and found danish and panchi in the garden chair."hey jijuuu..."both misha and pia shouted and ran 2words them."hello my super sallisss..."danish was very happy to sea them."so hello,ms jaiswal!how was ur 1st day at collage?"he asked pia."it was really nice jiju!"pia said with a huge grin."i made lots of new frnds,but jiju u have to help me in chemistry,u know my chem is so horrible! and our teacher sankar...".danish interrupted"yeah, even i can't catch up with shankar sir for this three full years.ok i'll help u"he smilled."but jiju.."misha interrupted"can u pls tell ur brother to give me some space.he almost eat up my head in three classes."she said irritatingly.they all laughed in her words."ok ok.."pnchi said"there's a good news for u gals, danish had to go abroad for an urgent work tomorow."."but we have ur engagement party at day after tomorrow!"mish said."so danish and his familly came aftr u leaved for clg then our elders decided to held the party 2night!!!".."whattt!!!!"both of their jaw dropped."r u sure!!" pia asked"but how about the decorations,invitations and...".danish and panchi smilled at their xpression."evrything has been arranged salliji..."danish said "just go inside and check out,and also quickly get readdy.the party will be start within two hour!!".HEARING this they both ran inside the house.
the party was on his way.people had started to come.mr and mrs dobriyal was greeting evry1 and thanking them to visit in such a short notice.dobriyal mansion was looking like a fairyland!panchi was looking gordgs in her orange and black veest anarkali.even misha was looking beautiful in a creemy pink lehenga."wow misha.."panchi commented."after long time i got my sis back."misha smilled."why not???aftr all it's my birdie's engagement!but all d credit goes to pia!!"."so where is she?" panchi asked."looking for me hn?"listening to her sound they turned away and gasped!!!pia was standing behind them wearing a red&white anarkali,and she was looking stuning!! like the first ray of sun,warm and heavenly!"piaa!!"panchi gasped"whats ur plan yaar?tu bhi mere sath engagmnt kar na chahti hain kya?"."what!!"pia said."birdie was r8 pia!"misha said."do char rishtey to tera yahi pe fix ho jayega!!"."shut up mishhh"pia gave a light punch to misha.then suddenly madhu came and asked"panchi,have u seen mr raichand and his fammily?r they hear?"."no mom they are not hear yet." panchi said.after madhu left misha asked surprisingly,"hey birdie does papa invited raichands also?"..."yeah of crs afterall danish works in his office.they all r coming!!!"..."oh no.."pia growled inwardly."hear they comes!!"panchi ran towards door.pia saw the raichands moving inside pia thought to go to another side to avoid them.but her eyes became wide when abhay came inside wearing a white dress and he was looking too much hot,dashing and irrresisstable!!!
"wow!!"automatically a whishper came out from pia's mouth.abhay looked straightly towards her like he had listened her compliment.still pia was looking at him with broaded eyes!abhay smirked a little and winked towards her!!
"oh no!!!" pia's face dropped in embarrashment."what hve i done!"
precap:the beautiful lady came towards him and hold his hand.after them they started to dance together!
checkout the engagement party wear of abhay (it's my fav snapshot of vivian when i looked at this i felt like😳)
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
lovelyyy update ria
ohh abhiya scene was too gud how they looking to each other
but piya is so irritate with abhay behavior
hahah abhay listen the conversation of misha and piya
loved the last scene when abhay face off to piya and said i am crazy for u
thank god abhay not stay far from piya
abhiya scenes u described really well
nice pics of trio sisters



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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
wahoo wonderful,lovely update & btw Its also my fav snap😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
nice update ria
goshhh abhiya converstaion too awsome
and how abhay said u r mine☺️
like the fighting of them too
so now engagement
danish is so nice
abhiya both in white dress wow
abhay wink piya hahaha
lovely part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
wow abhay ko black se white phena diya... ur ff is totally diffnt and i love it... waiting 4 mystery of miss meenakshi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
part 6
lovely update
loved abhiya part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
part 7
awww here Abhay stalked Pia till washroom lol
liked misha pia panchi danish part
wow Abhay Pia both in white...gr8
last part was cute where Abhay winked at Pia
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
both ch 6 and 7 were amazing👏👏
is pia really menaxi??
waiting for abhiya dance😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
nice update
like abhay convo
wow abhay wink pia
w8ng for abhiya dance
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Great ff plzz pm me too wen u uodt and count soon and finally piya is kinda faling for abhay but who's is dancing in precap

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