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#152

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Please take your time.

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Originally posted by: Taniyavd
Congrates for book 3😊

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I think I have replied to each and every comment here. I am really sorry if I missed any as I replied in a hurry. But I have gone through each & every comment here and I am just over whelmed by all the responses I got!!! Love u guys for keeping up with me till now. I will be posting the next update tomorrow pakka. Today I am feeling hell tired :(.
Thank u once again and I am really feeling extremely bad for keeping u all waiting for so long 😔. I hope u guys have not given up on me :)
Love u all!!!
Romi 🤗

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Chapter 36
Part A
Dehradun Forest
The prolonged heavy downpour had stopped at last and it was just a perfect peaceful ambience in the forests of dehradun now. The battle of love and hatred has finally came to an end.
Some creepy sounds of insects were there though but still the forest looked calm than usual. It looked like the huge storm that had taken place here was over but the tremendous effect of the destruction that the storm did could be observed very well through just bare human eyes.
Mother nature was both the spectator and decision-maker of one of the most disastrious and destructible war ever!
It is said that everything comes with a price and so did the war. Many warewolves and vampires were slaughtered mercilessly. Tons of blood were shaded; Hundreds of trees were destroyed and the part of the forest where the battle took place just looked like a cremation ground now. The dead bodies scattered around reminded one about the worst possible outcomes of each and every war that takes place in the lap of our mother nature!
Abhay Raichand the ultimate winner in the battle of love and power was running like a maniac now. His eyes roamed here and there only to see the sight of those lifeless bodies lying around scattered and unattened. The dead bodies made him feel more scared and depressed, he felt scared for his own people, for everyone who fought for him and for his love, sad for those who lost there life because of this destructive war.
Abhay's face looked petrubed and gloomy. But it was natural for him to feel so. He needed to find his foster parents and Piyali at first. They stood by him and supported him throughout this whole disaster. Its because of them only he found his angel and his Piya back; and no Abhay Raichand won't just let them sacrifice themselves, he will find them out at any cost!!!
Abhay was just about to cross the boundary line and enter the vampire's territory but before that he heard a faint male voice of someone calling him. He used his powers to locate the source of the sound. He recognised the voice and hurriedly rushed towards the source of the voice!
Raichand Mansion
Living Room
The living room of the huge Raichand mansion which was beautifully decorated and designed for the special purpose of marriage looked totally lifeless and dull now. The night which was supposed to be the most beautiful and blissful for two lovers turned into a cursed one!!!
Misha, kabir and Panchi was sitting on the couch of the living room. All three of them was just staring at the clock and at the main door. Their faces looked impatient and helpless at this moment. The room's ambience was completely silent and cold now. Only the sound of the clock ticking with each and every passing second could be heard!!!
Piya's room
Piya was sitting in the room quietly but her innerself was facing a myrid of emotions now. She was badly hurt and her body was literally screaming at her to take some rest but her mind refused to do so. She didn't feel any pain because for now nothing mattered to her more than the well being of her family and ofcourse of her Abhay!
Piya's face looked distressed while her eyes looked weary and lost. The tears that escaped unknowingly made her eyes look more swollen and puffy compared to that it was before.
Mrs Dobriyal was sitting on Piya's bed too and was requesting her to have something as her baby must be hungry too but piya refused to take even a single morsel of food till she gets some news about Abhay and her family!
Dehradun forest
In the backward side of the forest Haseena was lying motionlessly while chand was feebly leaning against a tree. He looked badly bruised and helpless. He tried contacting Abhay by using his mind power but it seems his powers weren't working at all. He just whispered Abhay's name slowly hoping that Abhay had heard him!
On the other part of the forest Piyali was lying in a subconscious state .A white aura surrounded her body which looked like a shield that was protecting her feeble body from the wild animals that were hovering around her. She looked badly bruised and her wounds were still bleeding. Her flawless white skin have turned pale yellow now. Her charming beauty have started decaying slowly revealing her real self. Her powers have already drained out and the little bit that was left in her body was not enough to bring back her senses. The only thing that her subconscious mind could think of now is someone's arrival for her help!
Abhay reached where Chand and Haseena were lying. Abhay went near them and after finding them alive he felt a sigh of relief wash through him. He at once went towards Chand and healed him while chand carried an unconscious haseena and rushed towards Raichand Mansion!!!
Abhay on the other hand found two member of vampire council and along with them he found a completely unconscious piyali lying nearby now. He tried healing her but none of his powers worked on her. He decided to take her home and then try finding some ways to heal her wounds. Abhay rushed back towards Raichand Mansion while the vampire council members went to search for other members of the clan!
Raichand Mansion
Abhay hurriedly entered through the main gate and rushed upstairs immediately. He kept Piyali in the guest room and went towards his bedroom. His first priority was to check piya and his unborn now!
Abhiya's Bedroom
As soon as Abhay stepped in the bedroom the smell of raw blood hit his nostrils. He found Mr. and Mrs. Dobriyal present there but couldn't find Piya anywhere. He at once started feeling scared. Millions of worries crossed his mind in the fraction of just few seconds. He was about to say something just then he saw that Piya with the help of Misha and Panchi was coming out of the washroom. She looked so weak and fragile. Her eyes were swollen and she had some deep bruises on her forehead and one of them was still bleeding!!
Piya who was looking downwards till now finally looked above as if she sensed Abhay's presence. Her face which were filled with worries and restlessness till now looked calm and relaxed now. Her baby brown eyes which looked dull till now brightened up at once. She meekly managed to give a warm smile and at once started taking small steps towards Abhay.
Abhay felt like thousands of wooden stakes were stabbing his heart now. It was painful sight for him. His Piya and his little angel had to bear so much. Abhay's eyes clearly showed the whirlpool of emotions that he was going through.
In the mean time Piya reached almost where Abhay was standing but just as she was about to proceed further to cover the little bit distance they had her left foot slipped thus freezing each and every soul standing there... Fear overtook her senses and just when her head was about to touch the floor a pair of strong arms caught her in the mid way!
Abhay who was lost in his chain of thoughts until now came back to his senses at once. He straightened Piya and embraced her in a tight breath-taking hug. That hug was just not a simple hug. It had millions of unspoken emotions of two desparate lovers poured into it. The two soulmates who were separated in the hands of their own fate had been brought together once again. Their undying love and desire for each overcomed each and every hurdle they have faced on their way. The two soulmates finally got united and found solace at last!!!
Mrs dobriyal signaled others to move out of the room as she knew that both Abhay and piya needs some rest now. The whole family looked contented and after praying to god to keep them united always they moved out of the room quietly.
The sound of the door being closed knocked sense back in both Abhay and Piya who were standing in each other's embrace still. Abhay saw that it was getting hard for piya to even stand properly without his support. He lifted piya in his arms and carried her towards the bed while Piya kept staring at Abhay whose eyes looked peturbed still.

Part B below

Edited by Rmuk - 11 years ago

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Part B
Piya at once realised what must be bothering Abhay and mentally scolded herself for being so careless and selfish.
''Abhay, how is mom, dad & Piyali?I am so sorry Abhay I didn't even ask you about them. I hope everyone is fine.'' Enquired Piya sounding worried tone.
''Piya you don't need to be worried. They all are fine.'' Lied Abhay in a straight voice.
''But..'' Piya was about to say something but Abhay didn't let her complete.
''Piya please you and our angel both needs to have some rest now. I will take you to their room tomorrow. I Promise.'' Said Abhay in a assuring tone.
Piya smiled and nodded as she knew Abhay was right. Abhay made Piya lie down on the bed and gently patted her forhead. The deep wound formed there caught Abhay's sight at once. He slowly planted a small kiss in her forehead thus healing the deep wound formed there. His eyes roamed all through Piya's angelic face as if he was trying to detect out the injuries and wounds that were present there.
Abhay softly planted feathery healing kisses on her hands, her arms and her lower chin thus soothing away all the wounds and scratches out there. Gradually he went towards her neck and unbuttoned her T-shirt a little. He planted a series of kisses there thus healing the wounds there as well. He adjusted her T shirt at last and stopped himself from going any further as he knew Piya needed strict bed rest now.
Piya looked ecstatic now as the slow and gentle touches of Abhay was creating havoc in her system. She missed those touches badly. Her breathing started becoming uneven. Her eyes were shut tightly now and she was biting her lower lip slightly which startled Abhay a little.
Abhay at once separated himself from piya and turned his head away. He needs to control his desires now. He needs to hold back himself and it was not easy for him do that at all.
''Abhay'' Spoke Piya softly.
Abhay at once controlled himself and turned his attention towards Piya.
''Piya I think you and my angel both needs some sleep now.'' Said Abhay in a gentle tone.
''I know. But before that I want you to have my blood'' Said Piya all of a sudden thus shocking Abhay to the core.
''What? Piya do you even know what you are telling me to do? I won't do that ever. Just sleep now and no arguments'' Said Abhay sounding serious.
''Abhay please. I know what I am saying you to do. You have taken away all my pain then why can't I do the same for you. I know my blood can heal all your deep injuries at once. I have read about it long back.'' Said piya in a pleading tone now.
''Piya I know you love me and can do anything for me but piya trust me I can bear this little bit of pain. Its nothing big for us vampires. You relax and go to sleep. I will recover by morning'' Said Abhay sounding gentle this time.
''Abhay please. I can't see u suffering. Please just take my blood a little. Just enough to heal your wounds. I promise I will go to sleep after that.'' Said Piya urging Abhay.
''Piya you know I won't do it. I can't risk your or my angel's life for anything. I love you Piya and when you are by my side these wounds are nothing. No pain is greater than your love.'' Said Abhay pouring out all his long trapped emotions.
''Then you shouldn't have healed me as well. Its not fair. You never let me do anything for you'' said piya sulking a bit now.
''Come on Piya you have given me my angel and nothing matters to me more than you two now.'' Said Abhay while adjusting himself beside Piya.
''And nothing matters to me more than two so I want both of you sound and safe always.'' Said piya while patting her belly.
''I know My teeny weeny Piya and congratulations you won'' Said Abhay in a light tone now.
He wanted to lighten up the situation now and avert the current ongoing topic as he knew Piya's stubborness very well.
''Teeny weeny Piya? What was that? Sounds so funny and congrats for what?'' Said Piya in a confused tone. ''So question bank is back to her business again.'' Said Abhay while winking.
Piya glared at Abhay but before she could tell anything further Abhay spreaded his arms for piya to sleep on as he knew his arms were Piya's most favourite place of all; It was her comfort zone after all.
''Ok fine don't throw those scary glares at me. Actually Piya our angel is a baby boy and you always wanted a baby boy so yea you won.'' Said abhay sounding joyful now.
''I know Abhay and I am so happy that I will get another little Abhay in my life. But who told you this?'' Said piya sounding elated now.
''I heard his voice and you know he is the one who guided me and all of us to you.'' Replied Abhay while smiling.
Piya snuggled close to Abhay now and kept her head in his arms. She was about to say something but suddenly she cried in pain ''Ouch... Ah...''
''What's wrong Piya? What happened?'' asked Abhay in a tensed tone.
''He kicked... Abhay our baby kicked... This is the third time he did this. I think he heard us and he is trying to make his presence feel'' Said Piya sounding hell excited now.
''What? Piya he kicked? Oh god I want to feel him doing that. Piya it means he is fine right?'' Said Abhay sounding both excited and worried at the same time
''Ofcourse he is fine Abhay. He is just playing in his own little house'' Said Piya while placing Abhay's hand in her belly.
Abhay kept his hand on Piya's belly and tried to feel something but unfortunately he couldn't feel anything.
''Piya he isn't doing that now.'' Said Abhay looking quite dissapointed.
''May be he is tired and needs some rest now so he fell asleep. Don't worry you will feel him doing that next time.''Said Piya while adjusting herself back in Abhay's arms.
''Yea you are right and now its time for his parents to sleep as well. Now keep quiet and sleep.'' Said Abhay while switching off the lights.
''Good night Abhay'' Said Piya while hugging Abhay tightly.
''Good night'' Whispered Abhay and both of them drifted off to a much awaited long peaceful sleep.
Both the soulmates were together now and nothing could keep them apart. The night was a perfect one for the two lover to lose themselves in the valley of darkness where something more calming and peaceful awaited for them!!!
PS-:So here I am ending chp 37. I updated this one after 13 months or so I guess😆. I may sound illogical or went off track at some places because I don't remember my own story fully so please pardon me for that. And yea sorry if this update is a short one because the whole update that I wrote since this many days got deleted coz of my own stupidity and this one is result of my just one day work so plz ignore the length, errors & mistakes!!!
I also owe an apology to u all for updating this much late and for keeping u guys waiting like this 😔. I am a very bad writer actually 😔. No words about my writing as I actually have realised that kost probably nothing can change my poor writing skills so no worries I won't rant about it.😆
Lastly please do drop by ur precious comments here as its only for all ur comments & likes that I am continuing this one after so long. I won't blame u guys if u have given up on this one but still those who wanna read it till the last update do comment here & hit like as well :)
Thank u once again for keeping up with me always. Actually thank u is a small word infront of the immense love & support u guys have given me 🤗. I will try to update real soon this time pakka. And only 2-3 more updates are left so I will try to end it asap😊
Lots of love & luck akways<3
Romi🤗

Edited by Rmuk - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Finally meri angel ne update kr diya!!! or tu chinta mat kr, me tuze jaldi update krne ke liye satati rhungi!!! :P now coming to d update, it was really nice. Or kuch off track nhi tha. Abhiya moments was really beautiful!! i hope haseena and piyali will b fine!! abhiya r forever!! thank u fr update and pm! luv u my ss angel!!! aami tomake bhalo bashi!!!

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