ss/sort ff:the game( chap4 pg 7 19feb)

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She was walking throw the forest.s she was new in the town so she lost her way.she was crying badly.she couldnt find anything except the trees of the forest.it is like a never ending journey.suddenly she felt that someone was there.she heard the sound of footstep.she became scared.she turned to see but none was there.she felt relived.when she again turned she saw a dark figure.she was about to scream.the figure stopped her by placing his hand on her lips.
Figure:who r u dont u know in is not safe in the forest at night??
Girl:---
He realized that his hand r still in her mouth.so he placed his hand from her mouth.the figure again asked who r u?
Girl:i'm piya.piya Dobrial.
Figure:what r u doing here?
Piya:actualy i lost my way.
Figure:where do u live?
Piya:my house is near the the forest.streat no 42.there is an old house.
Figure:i know that.let me take u there..
Piya:thanks.whats ur name.???
Figure:abhay..abhay raichand.
Piya:so abhay what r u doing here at this time it is not safe u said.
Abhay:that is none of your business.and by the way i am a boy,i can protect myself.
piya didnt say anything.she just kept walking with him.she didnt even see his face properly as it was dark.she just saw his eyes..cold gray blue eyes which made her feel comfortable.soon they reached on the streat and abhay drop her home.thats the first time piya saw his face.she was speachless for some moment .she couldnt beleive that she was walking with this exteamly hot and handsome guy..abhay also looked at her carefully..he was shocked but he controlled himself.
abhay:so miss piya...here is your home..
piya:thnx abhay..

suddenly abhay said something that stranged piya alot

abhay:u should not come here piya...u dont know u r in a big danger...but
dont worry...i'm with u..i'm a good player

piya:what??danger??what r u saying i dont understand..
abhay:welcome to the game piya..
piya:game!!

piya heard someone was calling her name..she turned to see.. it was her father.
she again turned to see abhay...but no one was there..piya felt stranged..just a few moment ago he was there where has he gone.??
piya worridly went to her home...</font>
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ok guys here is the starting...i wanted to write more but i have just come from chemistry practical xam..my hands are paining because of huge amount of writing😭😭..and i also burned my finger a bit carelessly by an acid😭>i'm gonna update it soon..the next chapter is chhotu one...so sorry
hit like and comment if u like this ss/sort ff ...😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye abhi comment kiw kiya.???bola na under construction..chapter abhi baki hain mere dost😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice . Loved It .😊👏
What was the game abhay was talking about ?
Sorry to hear that ur finger got burned , I hope it gets well soon.😊
Do pm me next time u update and continue soon.
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Wow Its amazing:-):-):-) plz continue.. Loved it:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update
do take care yourself
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amazing prologue.do pm me 4m nxt tym plz.
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amazing prologue.do pm me 4m nxt tym plz.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
what is going to happend next in your story
thanks for the pm
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wow concept seems gud.Cont..😳
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are kya yeh supernatural story hai... jo bhi hai achi starting hai plz update soon and that other ff love and marriage... use bhi update kar dai

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