New mini ss-: Life: a series of uncertain events!!!Updt pg24, 11/01

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Romita

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: barki
its ok
best of luck for exams👍🏼

thanks dear for ur wish

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Posted: 12 years ago

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<font color="#0000ff" size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Updates can wait until ur exams r over Romi 😊All the best 👍🏼</font>

thanks a lot manasa dear!!!

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Romita

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: additive_monaya
Awesome start Romi

Cont soon

Thank u so much dear and yea.i will updt asap.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 2:
The Unknown Feelings.

''The moment your eyes met with mine, I understood there is something between us.''

The bright clear sky slowly started changing it's colour, the light blue shade which was full with white clouds till now suddenly started turning greyish black, the sunlight faded and the whole atmoshphere became dull all of a sudden, but the two souls that have met just now was so lost in each other that this change went completely unnoticed by them. Abhay was lost in his own chain of thoughts just by staring at the stranger yet so familiar girl who was also lost in the pair of icy blue orbs that were staring at her intensely like they both belonged to each other, like those eyes want to say something to her, both of them were lost in each other as if they have lost the count of time, unknowingly both started taking steps towards each other, slowly, unaware of their surroundings. As both of them got more closer, some few steps away from each other, suddenly there was a loud thunder along with some few droplets of rain, as soon as few droplets of rain water fell on both of their face both abhiya came back to their to their reality. The sound of thunder made piya flinch a bit in some unknown fear, she felt scared, she badly wanted to hide herself into someone's embrace so that she could hide herself in his arms, suddenly the rain increased it's pace and it began to rain heavily, piya was shaking in some unknown fear while abhay was embarrased, he was confused about what he felt just few minutes before. The heavy rain made both of them wet completely, abhay who was again lost in his thougts realised that the girl standing infront of him needed support, he could clearly see her legs were shaky and her lips was quivering, she needed comfort, abhay was confused with the girl's strange behaviour, he didn't think of anything else, he knew only one thing will help the girl to recover from this state, that is a warm embrace, Abhay at first was shy and reluctant but the girl's wobbling state encouraged him, he just closed the few steps distance between two of them and embraced the girl, piya was shocked at first but she was in a bad state to react, she needed the warmth badly, piya remanied quiet while the rain washed away both of their bodies with it's pure and holy water. Both Abhay and Piya felt a chill run through their spine as soon as both of their bodies touched with each other, a spark ignited and both of just remained quiet. It was like after ages the rain stopped atleast for abhay and piya it was like ages but actually it was some ten minutes, the sky became clear, and the sunlight found it's way back through the dense patch of forest. Abhay got his sense back as the rain subsided slowly, he left piya abrubtly, both were embarassed and was not able to meet each other eyes. Both were completely wet, Abhay reluctantly mumbled a 'sorry' while piya at the same time mumbled a 'thanks' both were more embarrased now, everything again fell silent. Abhay was getting lost staring at the beauty who was standing infront of him in wet sticky clothes, while piya realised his gaze and looked down, her cheeks was flushed red now, piya decided to break the silence this time.
Piya-: (with a small voice) Thank u for providing me support that time, i have a strange disease of getting scared or sometimes faint because of thunder, it just makes me feel sick, i don't know why, anyways u should leave now it's late, i guess u lost ur way??
Abhay who was in trance till now came back to his own composed self.
Abhay-: (hesitatingly) it's ok, i did what my heart... I mean...
Abhay stopped in his tracks and looked at piya again, he kept quiet for few seconds then again spoke,
Abhay-: I meant i did what i was suppose do to at that time, yea i lost my way, i was suppose to go to jaiswal mansion, do u know the way? Can u help me plz?
Piya kept quiet for few seconds then replied in a calm and composed voice this time,
Piya-: ummm yea i know the way and i can help u out but you have to tell me the reason why u want to go there.
Abhay-: (surprised) what?? But why do u want to know the reason, do u know them??
Piya-: (smiled this time) Because I belong to jaiswal mansion, so ofcourse i want to know why are u going to my home.
Abhay-: (flabbergasted ) what?? U belong to jaiswal family? O god, my good luck then i found u here, i came from travel agency, i think u must know that ur family wants to go out so they booked a car from Maher travel agency and i am the one who will take ur family out. I am Abhay Raichand
Piya remained quiet for few minutes then replied,
Piya-: oh yea, i heard from mom, i am piya, actually whole family is not going only I will go and I was out here only, I think we should proceed then. Abhay-: (surprised) What only u?? But u don't have any luggage with u? Just look at your state how will u go in this wet clothes??
Piya-:(snapped back this time) I forgot my luggage at home and no we are not going back, i will buy something for me from any shop, don't ask me further questions, u are not supposed to interoggate me, just do as i say.
Abhay was little bit taken aback with piya's changed tone, he decided not to press the matter further and agreed to start the journey from there.
Abhay opened the car front door for piya and she sat down quietly abhay too took the driver position and started the car engine,
Abhay-: (in slight cold tone) where am i suppose to take you?
Piya-: (in a bit mild tone now) 4) Dehradun, shiwalik farm house.
Abhay nodded and started driving, he switched on the heater as both of them were feeling cold because of their wet clothes. He turned on the radio and some new rock song started playing, piya suddenly got irritated,
Piya-: stop this non-sense please.
Abhay was dumbfounded with piya's statement,
Abhay-: what??
Piya-: Are u deaf?? I told u to stop this song, it's so loud and discordant.
Abhay was now completely irritated, he pressed the stop button and the song stopped in it's tracks.
Abhay-: really this is discordant?? What do you think of urself, some famous singer? and for god sake don't show me ur attitude, i am not yr servant that will listen to all ur orders.
Piya-: (in a challenging tone) yes i do think myself capable of singing better than this howlings and u are suppose to be my driver, u are not prince Mr. Raichand.
Abhay-: (in the same pitch but teasingly) Really then why don't you enlighten me with your special melodious voice hun?? And i am not ur driver I...
Abhay was about to reveal his own identity but then he remembered that it will be against the game rules, no he cannnot take the risk of getting disqualified he decided to keep mum.
Piya didn't say anything for few minutes, abhay thought piya have lost the battle that is why she is so quiet, he just gave a proud smirk to himself and decided to let the topic go off, but his smirk wiped off as soon as he heard a beautiful melodious sound of humming, he turned towards piya and was surprised to see that she had rested her head on the car's seat and closed her eyes while her lips started to humm some tune which was unfamiliar to abhay but yet smoothing. Piya started singing, losing herself in some other world faraway from this living world.
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not completed still..

Edited by Rmuk - 12 years ago

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Romita

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part b
The song lyrics(This song is the english translation of shreya ghoshal's 'seena paada' song)...
I had to become what I did not want to become.
Having lost you today, I had to go on living.
The wound which time delivered me struck deep in my breast;
struck in my breast...
I've come so far away from your world that
today I'm not a body; I'm a shadow.
Everywhere around you, a flood of thronging people;
I have wrapped myself up in loneliness.
Whatever was within my reach, having found it,
I had to lose it.
Having lost you today, I had to go onU xc living.
The wound which time delivered me struck deep in my breast;
struck in my breast...
Moments past remain with me, with you.
Some will remain forever incomplete;
some dreams did come true.
I guard these very carefully in my breast.
They are all that remain to me in this world,
those days and nights which, as I recall them, make me weep.
Having lost you today, I had to go on living.
The wound which time delivered me struck deep in my breast;
struck in my breast...
You must vow to fulfill my dreams.
Those colors which I chose, you must paint them.
Now, whatever their outcome may be, it's left to you.
Don't cause me to despair of my hope.
The hidden depths of my heart were emptied, emptied.
Having lost you today, I had to go on living.
The wound which time delivered me struck deep in my breast;
struck in my breast...
Abhay was just lost in the melodious yet so painful voice of the girl sitting beside him, he even forgot he was driving or listening to someone's voice, he was just lost in the lyrics of the song which was though unfamiliar to him but he can understand the amount of pain that the lyrics holded with itself and the emotions that piya's voice carried made him feel something deep inside his heart, Abhay didn't notice when the melodious voice stopped singing, he suddenly felt a drop of something wet fell on his hand which was on the top of the car gear, his trance broke.
He looked at his hand and found two drops of watery substance, he was taken aback for some moments, he looked towards the girl sitting beside him, he was surprised to see that those drops were of tears that have just now escaped from piya's baby brown eyes. Abhay immediately stopped the car, he was confused as of how he should react, he just felt himself drawn to the girl, he felt himself experiencing the same pain that the voice holded, her painful voice and tears escaped have directly touched him and binded him into some unbreakable tie, the silent atmosphere around was making everything more hard for abhay, atlast he decided to break the silence,
Abhay-: (in a soft tone now) you really have a lovely voice, but why are you crying?
Piya got back her long lost sense, she directly looked towards Abhay and smiled a bit, she wiped up her tears.
Piya-: (in a broken yet composed voice) thanks and i just feel something, some long lost pain whenever i sing this song, you will not understand the depth it holds unless u experienced it.
Abhay was stunned by piya's words, the way piya spoke, the way her eyes looked lost, it clearly showed the amount of pain they holded. Abhay wanted soothe her pain, he wanted to pacify her but he knew piya will never allow him to understand her pain, he is no one to her, the only thing he could do is to try to make her smile, to change her mood, atleast it will make her feel better rather than leaving her captive in her own lonliess.
Abhay-: why do u want to go to dehradun shiwalik, farm house?
Abhay was expecting piya to snap back but instead she calmly replied,
Piya-: To meet someone special, my husband kabir singh Rathod!!!
PS-: So here i end my second chapter of this SS. I wrote this from my cell phone, so i know it full of mistakes and written in a shuffled manner, i am writing a chapter after 2 or 3 months i guess so yea i really have lost touch with writing updates and all. I think this update had nothing interesting in it, to be exact i found it completely boring but really sorry i couldn't come up with anything better at this moment. I didn't double check it, so ignore the mistakes. Anyways however it is i want u people to read and plz do comment. I know it's not upto the mark but just read it and leave a comment plz.
Thank u for all ur previous comments and patience!!!
Love
Romita
Happy Republic Day everyone!!!

Edited by Rmuk - 12 years ago

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

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Woahhh I m first 🥳

Yipeee , I😎

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Res
---unres---
it was not at all boring romi bt ya an amazing update👏
woa!!! i loved abhiya part😳
WHAT THE!!!!! pia is married nd that too kabir 😲

Edited by -juhi-lily- - 12 years ago

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BabyHimavari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

lobly chapp..heart touching!!

kabir is piya's husband😲.

btw loved abhiya's interaction.so beautiful👏

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Was Pia lying?
God this is weird . KaPi marriage that is.
Naah, you havent lost ur touch

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DestroyedInLove

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Posted: 12 years ago

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OMG...OMG...Fabulous @ROMI.
I remember that film..Koel Hiron wala film Jackpot..loved that film..one of my fav film..so what the idea of this SS is from a film i know u will rock...thanks for the PM..