FF : Fanaa..Destroy in Love (chapter 21 on pg 83, 26 feb /2017 ) - Page 12

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Ayeshu read cs, 1 and 2nd chappy wow let me take a breathe ufff. Awesome awesome awesome, just loved the cs, and both the chappies. I love the way u use simple words to describe things.
In the first chappy kiara's nightmares were really terrible, poor soul, I guess why she expeirences such things, it's connected to her in some way ri8? I loved that dalia part full on ayeshu style comedy lol. Haseena remembering her son and daughter in law was so touchy. Lol I liked Mary. Kiara is so naughty she really knows how to get things she wants lol. So now chandeena and kiara are in dehradhun wow. Ufff metz ka naam inka peecha nahi chodegi lol.
Now coming to the 2nd chappy, I loved the way u wrote everything. Arya last was really painful. Hated the way metz killed his family and made arya kill his own sis himself. O god arya is blinded by rage thank god sam and naina came on ri8 time. Poor kiara felt bad for her. I am now waiting to know what will happen next.
After reading all 2 chappy now I am 100 percent sure that u are a fab writer. So u are a awesome writter and now no one can say yaha ki acchi writers ki galti hai kuch bhi lol.
Just loved it dear, awesome work!!!!
shria thanks for all the pm yaar!!!!

gr8 upate

oh no that metz is a ***** BTW how does Arya freed himself from metz's clutch as a maker can control his/her transformed vampire

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

Lovely update!Thnx 4 d longer one.
Arya attacked Kiara! Bt his anger n hatred 4 Maithili is justified as what she did turned his life upside down.
Thank God Naina sensed it n came 4 her rescue!
Next update seems interesting!
Cant wait.Plz continue asap.

thanks kirti 😳 i m glad u like it.

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

amazing updt👏

thanks prima

Originally posted by: darkcocoa_renu

Wonderful update.Excited 4 kiaya's meet.I m just hooked to ur ff now.

thanks renu ...i hope u will enjoy .

Originally posted by: koli97

wahooo superb 👏...woww Maithili alive😡..she make him vampire...awww poor Araya kill his own sister & his anger not sense him btw human & vampirethanx God naina come right time & save our Abhiya's angel Kiara😊wahooo kiara &Arya meet precap can't wait plzz continue soon😳

thanks mishti 😳 maithali changed everything in his life ... n he hated her for this.

Originally posted by: pkyekrox

Hey Detective Conan partner!! 😉

Arya lost his family due to Maithili :(

And Kiara is meeting him in Chapter 3!!

Fabulous!! I am loving it!! BTW chek out my DC siggy!!

Cont soon!!

-Gauri

thanks partner 🤗 yeah they will meet in next part 😳 i like ur dc siggi ❤️

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif"><font color="#FF0000">so kiara has met not 1 but 3 vampires in a single night</font></font><font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif"><font color="#FF0000">😛</font></font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif"><font color="#FF0000">did they wipe her memory or just dropped her home like that???</font></font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif"><font color="#FF0000">bt seriously fab update ayeshu</font></font><font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif"><font color="#FF0000">😳</font></font>

no she met 2 vampires n one hybrid in a single night 😛 yup they wipe out her memory n drop her at home beause they r vegetarian vampires na 😛 thanks juhi 😳

Originally posted by: vmpy

Outstanding.wow a brilliant update.arya identity is revelead.so i was rt in guessing da person in jungle as arya.poor kiara she hav to pay for maithli deeds.thanx for pm nd continue soon.

thanks dear 😳 yes u were right 😊 in next cmnt do tell me ur name plz😳