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Ayeshu read cs, 1 and 2nd chappy wow let me take a breathe ufff. Awesome awesome awesome, just loved the cs, and both the chappies. I love the way u use simple words to describe things.
In the first chappy kiara's nightmares were really terrible, poor soul, I guess why she expeirences such things, it's connected to her in some way ri8? I loved that dalia part full on ayeshu style comedy lol. Haseena remembering her son and daughter in law was so touchy. Lol I liked Mary. Kiara is so naughty she really knows how to get things she wants lol. So now chandeena and kiara are in dehradhun wow. Ufff metz ka naam inka peecha nahi chodegi lol.
Now coming to the 2nd chappy, I loved the way u wrote everything. Arya last was really painful. Hated the way metz killed his family and made arya kill his own sis himself. O god arya is blinded by rage thank god sam and naina came on ri8 time. Poor kiara felt bad for her. I am now waiting to know what will happen next.
After reading all 2 chappy now I am 100 percent sure that u are a fab writer. So u are a awesome writter and now no one can say yaha ki acchi writers ki galti hai kuch bhi lol.
Just loved it dear, awesome work!!!!
shria thanks for all the pm yaar!!!!
Wait will read and comment
**edited**
Ayeshu read cs, 1 and 2nd chappy wow let me take a breathe ufff. Awesome awesome awesome, just loved the cs, and both the chappies. I love the way u use simple words to describe things.
In the first chappy kiara's nightmares were really terrible, poor soul, I guess why she expeirences such things, it's connected to her in some way ri8? I loved that dalia part full on ayeshu style comedy lol. Haseena remembering her son and daughter in law was so touchy. Lol I liked Mary. Kiara is so naughty she really knows how to get things she wants lol. So now chandeena and kiara are in dehradhun wow. Ufff metz ka naam inka peecha nahi chodegi lol.
Now coming to the 2nd chappy, I loved the way u wrote everything. Arya last was really painful. Hated the way metz killed his family and made arya kill his own sis himself. O god arya is blinded by rage thank god sam and naina came on ri8 time. Poor kiara felt bad for her. I am now waiting to know what will happen next.
After reading all 2 chappy now I am 100 percent sure that u are a fab writer. So u are a awesome writter and now no one can say yaha ki acchi writers ki galti hai kuch bhi lol.
Just loved it dear, awesome work!!!!
shria thanks for all the pm yaar!!!!
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