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Posted: 12 years ago

#981

Nice update

So the secret is out before abhay could say it himself...wrong timing or bad luck...pia's pov was nice...she is thinking abhay didn't love her...so sad. hope he convince her that his love is true.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#982

Fantastic date

Oh no piya heard everything but did not hear he loves her :(

Poor piya and poor abhay

Poor abhiya 😭

But I am glad she heard he wants o tell her everything but it went wrong

I love how u wrote out everything 👏

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#983

finally...like finally i caught up with the story😛..like really..i was so lagging behind...now i am literally typing with a cheshire cat smile at having finished reading till the last update😆...

okay coming to the story as a whole...it was brilliant!!!⭐️ ⭐️awesome shreya👏...first of all the way u portray abhiya's relationship...with so many intricately woven emotions and so much accuracy...i could literally feel the scenes while reading them u know...i loved the way u brought out the emotionsnot only of abhiya but of all the other characters..for example piya's parents do not directly appear as such..but still i can get an idea of thei characters..and that's wonderful!!👏

my heart literally weeps for piya...how much pain does a person have to suffer that the brain has to lock all memories of those nightmarish moments...piya's experiences and her childhood...if it can even be called that...affected her so badly..scarring her so badly..and her parents fed on her guilt and nightmares...torturing her till the old cheerful piya was lost forever..

abhay really loves her, the way he's trying to hold her hand and trying to bring her out of her shell...he recognises her for the golden person she truly is...lost and hidden behind the ice queen facede the world has seen..

but now..oh dear, i hope nothing serious happens...piya will at least give abhay a chance to explain the real meaning of his words right? i mean i know she's afraid to accept that someone can love her for who she is...and that's tragic...but deep down she does know abhay will never leave her alone right?

waiting for the next update😊..fantastic work once more⭐️

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Posted: 12 years ago

#984

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
EDITED

it was a short was shocking update. I didnt see it coming. I knew Pia would know about Abhay treating her actually but i didnt expect the truth would come in such a way and she totally misunderstood it, badly and specially after going so intimate with him. its heartbreaking. her past is even more horrible than i thought it was. horrible doctor 🤢 i know there are sick doctors exists who does that to adolescent or innocent patients 🤢 oh god her parents, still didnt understand the trauma of a child all because of she is a daughter and not the son and they lost it. well it's actually possible because i knlw still in this 2013 year people go crazy for a son ignoring their other children who are girls. how sad

I know Tanzie there are a lot of sick people in society and even more so these days. I have seen this kind of thing happen to two young girls I once knew. they were kids but still🤢
im feeling more bad for abhay. sorry cant help it. like i said before. i just understand how difficult it is so go against your will, go through such mental turmoil, give your beloved ones such stress ONLY to help him, get her out of some nightmare. immense courage and immense love needed. shows how much he loves her and the honesty he had choosen more than being with Pia at that moment. its endearing, i just love him more <3 Pia cant go through this again. not anyone of them - they had enough so just let them be happy. please let pia understand. i hope abhay will make him understand n Misha can help. she is a perfect sister. loved her.

I know and you will feel worse I guess in the coming episodes Lets see. Pia might understand or she might not understand😛

amazing update shreya. 👏

thanks Tanzie🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

#985

Originally posted by: vmpy
shreya i have told u rt from beginning dat im in love with da depth of magnetic dipoles.its not a simple love story its da reality of life.well nw coming to da update a v well written indeed.abhay confessing his feelings,flashback,his convo with misha were really fantastic.felt bad for piya as she took da things da other way.thanx a lot for pm.waiting for next one

Thanks Aqui. Yes well, it's not supernatural. it's reality in a way I guess

Originally posted by: samwllms
misunderstanding!!...no pls...they were about to start their new profound relationship!!...then why!!...i hope abhay will sort out everything...

why? because I love giving surprises😆

Originally posted by: arwakantawala
Good update so Pia misunderstand Abhay and now hate him but why I think now the victim will be Abhay but very very good update

Yes poor Abhay right

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
simply amazing update. what a turnaround in this update.
jus when everything was going well pia misunderstood him.
after reading this part i hate pia's parent's more...how can someone be so insensitive to their own kid???plain disgusting.
that therapist was pathetic...taking advantage of a patient...i really wished that misha had filed a complaint against him.
i lvd misha...she actually was the real guardian of pia...keeping her safe.
feel sad for pia as she had a nightmare in name of childhood and i really want her to be happy...she deserved it and so does abhay.
abhay had really put in a lot of hardwork in getting pia out of that trauma and i seriously hope pia would listen to him once coz even he need someone to whom he can pour out everything he had kept hidden inside his heart.

Yes Misha really took care of Piya😊 Yes Abhay needs Pia but will she listen?

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
i knw this... really knw this this is going to happen and i am not at all sad becz from my side these are only things get in mind in such situation... if i was at pia place or may be any other its same rexn one can see... hope mend with situation... wish 4 happy update...

hmm...happy update, I don't know😛

Originally posted by: singhshailesh86
emotion feel update + no secret keep b/w relationship+ evil creature action + caring side of misha toward pia + misunderstood due to half truth
update was contain almost all flaws in which every emotion is done perfectlly which I can't describe in word
first abhay wanted to tell truth to pia , due to his bad luck while confronting with misha , pia hear half things & misunderstood abhay
here some extent hate pia , but we can't ignored the fact which phase pia was go in her past that phase was really drastic due to this anyone go in this stage lack in believing in relationship
hope abhiya solve out this problem & accept each other
waiting for nxt update
thanks for pm & continue soon

well both abhay and piya aren't at fault . Circumstances went against them you see

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
awesome update!! omg!!!😲😲😲😲piya heard only half part and now...*sigh*😭 piya is starting to hate abhay

I hate you like I love you😉

Originally posted by: Janani24
OMG super update👏 abhay accepted his luv at last😊 but why should pia be there in the wrong time😕 she exactly came at the wrong time😕 waiting for ur nxt update😊

Yes Piya came at the wrong time and unfortunately made a wrong judgement

Originally posted by: jack-12
loss of words! N i mean it. This was an amaxing update, complete in all senses:)
yar plz let me know ur name,addressing u with is id name is difficult:D

Oh thanks. You may call me Shreya or ALS. Whichever suits you😆

Originally posted by: didlr
that was just awesome:D abhay's confession, misha n his conversation n yeah not to forget the most imp thing- MISUNDERSTANDING :D
i agree with all, it was a complete package filled with wow n enjoyable reading elements:)
Plz pm me from next updates:D
Thanks
plzzz dnt forget me

Ok I will pm you and thanks😳

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd
now this what I was afraid for Pia taking the things wrong way but again she didn't heard the whole convo just the last bit just hope she don't do anything stupid and loved the whole flashback convo between Abhay and Misha and that doctor aarrrggghhh just hate him screw him up he touched her but did Pia's parent's knew about it glad Misha came on time and it's going to end I am gonna miss it😔

Thank you so much😳 I will miss this too, strangely enough😲

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Posted: 12 years ago

#986

Originally posted by: ..dishu..
oh God Shreya, why did you have to have this misunderstanding track 🥱

Because i am an evil person. Beat me up😆

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav
god no
i thought
now it will all be happy happy
no misunderstanding now

Then I am happy I surprised you😳

Originally posted by: ifians
gr8 update!!pia misunderstood abhay! 😭so sad!!
thx for pm...

yes unfortunately she misunderstood him

Originally posted by: hema_rawat
nice update ,,,,,oh ho pia heard only half part ... thoda jaldi ni aa skti ti ya thoda late ..

haan , aa jati toh koi MU nahi hota na😳

Originally posted by: captainplus
nice update 😊
bt another MU 😔

hope abhay xplains everything clearly 2 piya

tnx 4r the pm 😊

Let's see😆

Originally posted by: bellaaa
great update
shreya 😭 you make again misunderstanding between abhiya
no plsss now what will piya do? she hate him nw :(
plsss cont soon

She hates him so she will shoot him😆 just kidding 😆

Originally posted by: AbhiyaDewaani
OMG!!!aise ghatiya parents kisi ko na mile...poor pia!!! Great update

Milte hain aise parents Ishpa

Originally posted by: Bisweswar
oh no di piya mu abhay. ab kya hoga!pls sab thik kar do and iss baar jaldi jaldi updt do.i cant wait.pls pls pls updt soon.

updating shortly😆

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal
Woww noo pia get misunderstand on Abhay...Ohh God!!😲Now how recover it?Hope Abhay explain his love for her...continue soon😔

Will continue soon😳

Originally posted by: anjali0111
Nice update
So the secret is out before abhay could say it himself...wrong timing or bad luck...pia's pov was nice...she is thinking abhay didn't love her...so sad. hope he convince her that his love is true.

Let's see what Abhay can do😛

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu
Fantastic date
Oh no piya heard everything but did not hear he loves her :(
Poor piya and poor abhay
Poor abhiya 😭
But I am glad she heard he wants o tell her everything but it went wrong
I love how u wrote out everything 👏
Thanks for the pm

Yes unfortunately Piya had bad timing

Originally posted by: Andromeda001
FIRST OF ALL SORRY FOR BEING SOOO LATE,,,. I m being stalked so coudn't update my comment on time.

Shreya it was simply M.A.G.N.I.F.I.C.E.N.T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No this was anything bt vulgar,☺️. IFeelings from both d sides were too intense and what intensified the situation more was Piya's rant. So she got it dat there s something really diff abt Abhay n he is kinda avoiding her. Of course she can sense any emotional change around her. She is recovering from trauma slowly and Abhay is surely her wall. But i m afraid of consequenses when she will come to know dat initially Abhay's motive was something different than loving her, though he always loved her bt still u know these too r unpredictable as far as depth of emotions is concerned.

What has stalking got to do with commenting? Were you stalking them back😉

Yes Abhiya are unpredictable and thanks for the comment😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#987

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.
finally...like finally i caught up with the story😛..like really..i was so lagging behind...now i am literally typing with a cheshire cat smile at having finished reading till the last update😆...
okay coming to the story as a whole...it was brilliant!!!⭐️ ⭐️awesome shreya👏...first of all the way u portray abhiya's relationship...with so many intricately woven emotions and so much accuracy...i could literally feel the scenes while reading them u know...i loved the way u brought out the emotionsnot only of abhiya but of all the other characters..for example piya's parents do not directly appear as such..but still i can get an idea of thei characters..and that's wonderful!!👏

Hey! I missed ya! When are you updating???🤗 I did try to portray them with the little mentions they have here😳 I am glad you liked!
my heart literally weeps for piya...how much pain does a person have to suffer that the brain has to lock all memories of those nightmarish moments...piya's experiences and her childhood...if it can even be called that...affected her so badly..scarring her so badly..and her parents fed on her guilt and nightmares...torturing her till the old cheerful piya was lost forever..

Childhood can be scarring in many ways
abhay really loves her, the way he's trying to hold her hand and trying to bring her out of her shell...he recognises her for the golden person she truly is...lost and hidden behind the ice queen facede the world has seen..
but now..oh dear, i hope nothing serious happens...piya will at least give abhay a chance to explain the real meaning of his words right? i mean i know she's afraid to accept that someone can love her for who she is...and that's tragic...but deep down she does know abhay will never leave her alone right?
waiting for the next update😊..fantastic work once more⭐️

Let's see. Will Piya give him a chance...or not?😛 Thanks soo much for commenting..dont see u much around nowadays

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Posted: 12 years ago

#988

Amazing shreyu ! It was a faboulous upd nd written very well 😃 piya's parents are horrible 👎🏼how cane anyone treat there daughter like that, oh my piya has been through so much 😭 and that disgusting doctor 😡 abhay bought happiness in piya's life but now this misunderstanding It must be so heartbreaking for piya to hear that and oh I wonder how abhay will handle the situation .

Better u solve this soon 😈

Won't tell u to upd soon cause u gonna upd soon anyways 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#989

Originally posted by: Mohit-deewani
Amazing shreyu ! It was a faboulous upd nd written very well 😃 piya's parents are horrible 👎🏼how cane anyone treat there daughter like that, oh my piya has been through so much 😭 and that disgusting doctor 😡 abhay bought happiness in piya's life but now this misunderstanding It must be so heartbreaking for piya to hear that and oh I wonder how abhay will handle the situation .
Better u solve this soon 😈
Won't tell u to upd soon cause u gonna upd soon anyways 😆

Hmm, I dunno how this will be solved😆 or better say I know but dont wanna tell😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#990

18. The Parting of The Ways

He vaguely had an idea of something breaking..shattering...as he stared at her. She was not speaking, but she didn't have to. Her hand was covered over her mouth, but he read the betrayal clearly in her eyes. An awful feeling of something nameless began to consume him. He could only stare at her. Then he saw the tears began to fall. Driven by instinct, he took a step closer- and then she turned and walked away.
She did not pause or look back. Abhay couldn't even call after her. Something hard had stuck in his throat.

Something soft pressed against his left shoulder. He looked behind him to see a blurred outline . Abhay blinked away the burning from his eyes and a vaguely familar woman with curly hair came into view.
'Abhay?' she said softly. 'Are you- all right?'

He recognized her as Misha. In a voice he didn't recognize as his own, he whispered, 'Piya...'
'Go after her,' said Misha, pushing him slightly. 'Go, Abhay! Before it's too late...just go after her, make her listen, please!'

His lips quirked in a ghost of a smile. 'It's too late...it's too late. I'm too late...'
This time Misha pushed him harder. 'Just go after her, dammit!'

Blindly, Abhay walked into the apartment. Wiping away the moistness from his eyes with the back of his hand, he stared around the empty living room.
The walls were still maroon and beige. The fan still had a nick in one of it's blades. The curtains were still light purple, with flowers printed across them. They were half-drawn, so the sunlight filtered in...but perhaps since it was morning, and the sun had not risen, or perhaps simply because he was standing in the wrong place, that the sunlight seemed not to touch him.

The awful reality of the situation crashed upon him, and suddenly he realized he needed to see where Piya was. He hurried to her room and pushed it open.
Piya was sitting on the floor, motionless.

Cold dread rushed through him, choking him as he dropped in front of her. Her eyes were vacant and lifeless, staring off into space.
But her chest was rising and falling as she breathed shallowly.

'Piya? Piya!' he shook her shoulders. Her face remained blank, however, she turned stubbornly away from him.

Then she spoke, in a voice that was as calm as it was chilling.

'Am I cured, Dr.Raichand?'
He stared at her, involuntarily releasing her.

The bright bedroom seemed to close in upon him. 'Tell me, Doctor. Am I cured now?'

Look at me, please, he pleaded silently.

But of course, she didn't even turn her head in his direction.
'Please tell me, Doctor,' she said tonelessly.

Abhay closed his eyes. 'Yes.'

'Good.' she closed her eyes. 'Please take your cheque and leave. ' her eyes went towards the bed, and following her gaze, Abhay saw the paper on the bed, signed Piya Jaiswal, to Abhay Raichand.

He finally accepted the lost battle, and silently picked up the cheque. Without glancing at it, he walked out of the room.
And because he was too weak, he stopped at the doorway and turned back to stare at her for one last time. Her gaze still hadn't shifted.

As he packed, he fought to stop the tide of memories that threatened to overwhelm him.

Piya, laughing with him. Piya, shouting at him that he had turned her guestroom into a pigsty. Piya, throwing a pillow at him. Piya, smirking as she adjusted the photoframes in his room. Piya snorting at a joke, and then coughing as the coffee went up her windpipe instead.

He had been foolish, naive, idiotic to think he could have a happy ending after all. And this time- he had broken the heart of the woman he had loved- loved, even now, so much so that he could even see her in his mind's eye as he packed the checked shirt she had categorically told him once she hated.

And again and again, her blank stare.

He continued to pack his things, only making sure they fit in properly, uncaring of whether half of them were crumpled.

And then, even though he couldn't bear parting with what he had kept secretly all those years.
He finally took out the piece of yellowed paper...a theft it had been, all those years before.

No more secrets, he told himself. He took a look at the now bare room, then pulled open a drawer and placed the paper inside the drawer. Then, he pulled out the cheque he'd crumpled in his fist and smoothing it out, placed it on top of it.

Then, he took a pen, ripped a page from the writing pad that had been kept there in the room especially for 'visitors' and wrote a few lines on it. This too, he pushed inside the drawer.

After all, he couldn't leave without a goodbye.

He fully intended to resist the temptation to catch one last glimpse of her, but he couldn't help it. Piya was standing in the living room, her arms crossed and folded.

Something jolted back into him when he saw the fire back in her eyes. Yes, cold, ruthless fire...but at least she wasn't shutting it out. He could take anything she would say to him, as long as she wasn't smothering herself.

'Goodbye, Piya,' he found himself saying.

She cocked her head to a side and put on a vaguely curious expression.
'Was it nice?'

Abhay simply stared at her.
'Last night,' she clarified, her tone icy and cold. 'Was it nice? Did you feel nice? Tell me, Dr.Raichand. Would you like to say a few words on your phenomenal success of curing a very difficult case?'

She was mocking him.

Turning away, Abhay simply wheeled his baggage out of the house. As he was turning to leave, he heard her speak again.
'Did you-even once- think that you were playing a game with someone's feelings? Did it make you happy, thinking about how besotted I was with you? Did it make you feel better, knowing your patient was so in love with you she would even overcome her worst fears because you would tell her to?'

She advanced on him now, shaking in blind rage. Abhay's own temper spiked.
'There's no point talking to you,' he said. 'Not when you've tried and condemned me without hearing a word from me-'

Piya laughed. Her laughter rang out through the house, humourless and chilling.
'I condemned you?' she said. 'You make such lovely jokes, Abhay. May I remind you that it was you who said that you couldn't carry on this pretense of a relationship any further?'

'Piya, I can explain-'

'But I don't need your explanations,' said Piya coldly. She pointed to the door. 'Leave! Leave my house(her voice began rising)-my life- my head- just leave, goddamn you!' Her harsh voice grated on his ears.

Quietly, he stepped out, closing the door behind him.

Three seconds later, he heard the smashing of glass on the tiled floor of the apartment he had just left.

Abhay found himself looking across to see Jeh holding back a sobbing Misha. Unsurprisingly, Jeh glared at him.

'You need to take care of her.' His voice sounded passably calm.
'Her mental state is extremely weak. Distract her- keep her occupied- and please don't give up on her.'

'You're an idiot,' said Jeh bluntly.
Abhay inclined his head. 'It was my mistake getting too emotionally involved in this case. But now-'

'Wh-where are you going?' said Misha, hiccupping.

'Back,' said Abhay, shrugging. 'My work is done. Goodbye-' he couldn't go on.
'Just- can you do me a favour?' he said.

'Just- please, take care of her. Encourage her to date, fall in love, get married- just, keep her happy.' It felt like a stranger, forcing out the foul words from his mouth.
Jeh's rigid features softened, and a look of comprehension and sympathy came into his eyes.

'Yes. Yes, we will,' he said.
Abhay nodded, and went into the lift which had just arrived. The last thing he saw as the doors closed was Misha's tear-stained face.

It wasn't very hard for him to get a ticket on the night train to Kolkata. He stood alone near the door of the compartment as the train began to move away from the station. Even knowing it was useless, his eyes searched the railway station, hoping beyond hope to see a face framed by curls and eyes that shimmered with happiness- love...

The train pulled out of the station, and Abhay turned away, going back to his seat. And as the scenery rushed past, he felt as if an iron fist was lodged in his chest, squeezing the life out of him.

When he came back home, Kabir and Pankhuri plyed him with questions- all, somehow or other, having Piya in them.
'Go away!' he shouted, once he lost control. 'Just go!'

Pankhuri looked horrified, and he was instantly guilty. 'I'm sorry,' he mumbled. 'Please- just leave me alone, please.'

It was Kabir who understood some of the matter, as he dragged his wife away, murmering placating words to her.

As the days dredged by, Abhay fell into a mechanical routine. He went back to treating people, dodging unwanted attention- and even Kabir and Pankhuri never mentioned the incident again.
He was invited more oftener than ever to dinner at their house, and playing with Sneha had never been more of a blessing, but sometimes when he watched her giggle in delight, he couldn't help it when his thoughts wandered to how Piya's children would look like.

Then about a week later, Alina Khurana called him.

'So, Abhay?' she said. 'Are you busy right now?'
He had just reached home and was parking his car.

'No, of course not, Leena- I mean, sorry, Alina,' he fumbled at the last moment. So much for trying to be cool.

'That's strange,' mused Alina, sounding thoughtful. 'Looks like Piya's not the only one who picked up a few habits.'

'How is she?' he asked, finally parking the car, killing the engine and closing its door as he got out.

'Alina? How is Piya?'

'Better than she was last week,' said Alina, sounding depressed, 'but she's lost that verve in her, that spark.'

Horror surged through him.
'You don't mean- she didn't-'

'She hasn't lost her memory or anything like that, Abhay,' said Alina softly. 'But...I'm the only one she talks to. And my brother and Misha- she just bounces off their words.'

'Keep talking,' Abhay instructed her.
'She was a mess the day you left,' Alina's voice was bland, but he detected a touch of anger, 'She locked the door and had smashed half the house before I could get through to her.'

Abhay recalled the shattering of glass that had followed the door.
'Any...harm she tried to inflict on herself?'

'I'm visiting her often, and she has started coming to office,' said Alina. 'But I haven't been able to see any marks. I don't think she has... you know...'
The lock turned in the key and Abhay entered his house.

He exhaled in relief. 'Thank God,' he murmured. 'What?' said Alina. 'I didn't catch you-'

'She started coming to office?' he interrupted. 'How is she- you know, interacting with other collegues?'

'I haven't let anyone talk to her,' admitted Alina.
'Good,' said Abhay. 'But in time, make her-'

'I heard what you told bhaiya.'
Her voice sounding accusing even on the phone. 'What?' said Abhay.
'I told whom, what?'

'Never mind,' she snapped at him. 'But Piya's not going to fall in love with someone else. Hell, her creativity's taken a hit with all this!'

'She'll be fine,' said Abhay automatically. 'She's strong, she'll get over-'

Alina sighed. 'Yes, Abhay. Okay, I'm hanging up now. Will keep you updated.'

As the call ended, Abhay looked around himself. His housekeeper had kept the house so spotlessly clean and ordered he disliked it. It looked like an office now, not a home that someone lived in.
Well, the last bit was true. He was living there- he was simply existing.

Alina called him every alternate day, giving him updates like, 'she went out on a date yesterday. But she hated him, so she doused him with champagne and called him a pig.' Or, 'Piya cooked a really decent meal today.'Or,'She started talking to people today.' Or, 'Piya's more depressed than ever these days. Looks like the shock's sinking in.'

Or, 'Abhay, she's failed her deadline the first time. She's crying alone now!'

In answer to the last one, Abhay told Alina to just be with her and listen to her.

Alina didn't call him for a week after that and he got extremely worried.

After about two weeks, he got a text from Alina's number.
It simply said, 'Abhay, I am going to kill you slowly and make it hurt!!!! :@'