Abhiya SS: Magnetic Dipoles Epilogue(+NOTE) page 168

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#691

😡 u sure are one hell of a meanie. always ending at a point which readers are desperate for 😡

coming to the update, it was really very well written. abhay's attempts at hiding his feelings, but finally giving into jealousy, was really good.

Edited by ..dishu.. - 12 years ago

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rockstarashu

@rockstarashu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#692

awesome update.waiting eagerly for next update

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#693

Lovely update Sherya😊

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Bisweswar

@Bisweswar

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#694

hate u di. ab mujhe raatbhar neend nahi ayegi apki wajahse. sirf yahi sochti rahungi ki piya ne kya kaha hoga. so pls pls pls pls updt soon . and btw di my name is mampi. nd btw di i am mampi.

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

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Posted: 12 years ago

#695

Pia is just awsm...Gaurav ki full on BBB kar di.The cliffhanger...uff..damn eager to know what happens next

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Seema

@...Seema...

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#696

hats off to u for such a wonderful update.👏aaww abhay is nw living at piyas place.wow.dat gaurav😡piya ne kya bbb ki uski.loved jealous abhay all and all a fantastic episode.u ended it at a cliffhanger but i think she have spilled da beans😉thanx a lot for pm and continue soon

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...Rishab...

@...Rishab...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#697

nice update:)

i think u like too much suspense.in most updates u put a suspense in the end.i think i am not wrong 😛

and about the update i want pia to confess her feelings to abhay which gave him 'Jor ka jhatka' I am really very worried for pia's nightmares.but it gives relief that abhay is with her.

continue soon...

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Shria

@-JuniorAngel-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#698

shreya i loved loved loved it😆😳it was just awsome & u wrote brilliantly⭐️
awww abhiya are once again staying together😳
piya & gaurav's scene was just awsome😆😆
jealous abhay☺️☺️ wow i love him
culdn't u write one more line😡 i guess she said that she loves himnw update fast😈 eagerly waiting to knw wat piya said & also abt her nightmares😳

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#699

amazing update

abhiya are staying together and both are trying to hide their feelings from each other...pia had indeed took away the smile and attitude from gayrav's face...he deserved it.

abhay is angry on her...got jealous...i feel pia had spoken out that she is in luv with him...can't wait to read more.

thanks for pm

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#700

Shreya I hate u 😡 😭 *Chucks watever is within the periphery at Shreya's head* 😡😡😡😡😡

I cannot comment now 😭 Will do it later

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Its a case of pot calling the kettle black 😛 U felt like chucking stilletoes at me??? Well I feel like chucking everything I get hold of at ur head 😡 How cruel! U stopped it at such a crucial point? Now ur torturing me by not updating soon 😭 I really really hate u 😵

There's a drastic change in Pia now. She is so unlike her old self 😆 So now its Abhay's turn to share Pia's apartment? 😉 Gosh I am loving this even more. More nok jhok 😉 Pia's proximity is affecting him but that moron assumes its a platonic feeling? 😡 Uff le ladka kab sudhrega? Well atleast Pia isn afraid of her feelings. I can understand Abhay is insecure thanks to his past but still he is the one helping ppl to get over their fears n lead a normal life. Then y on earth doesn he do that with himself? He is the one who needs more help than anybody 😭 I can understand Pia's POV coz Abhay himself refused to acknowledge what was between them after they kissed that night. How can Pia confess her feelings now? Coz if Abhay rejects her then she loses him as a friend too 😭 Damn this idiotic Abhay 😡

I simply love this unnamed relation between this 😳 n u have written it so well that I find it hard to believe that ur just 17. Kudos to u 👏 I loved their lil moment in the balcony. I loved how Pia cheered him up to do better than Gaurav 😆

Pia's nightmares were never really gone n I felt so bad reading tat part 😭 Please reveal it in the next update atleast na? I am dying to know Loved the way Abhay comforted her and was there for her. Glad she didn have to go through it alone this time 😳 This part was very well written too 👏

Abhay ne Gaurav ki dhajjiyaan uda di 🤪 Me sooper happy 🤣 Loved the way Pia put Gaurav in his place 👏 At the same time Abhay got jealous on seeing Pia so close to Gaurav n now that will make him do something reckless n that he did 😉 I loved the last scene the most. Was intense n passionate n I hope atleast when Pia confesses her feelings Abhay doesn turn away 😛

I hate u for that ending n u better post the next part soon ok? 😛

Fantastic update 👏

Edited by ..mandy.. - 12 years ago