Abhiya SS: Magnetic Dipoles Epilogue(+NOTE) page 168

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zahara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1041

Ooh! Shreya, didn't know you write as well! Magnetic Dipoles! Hm, sounds good! Will read as soon as exams are over, that is on Monday. Wait for my reviews/comments/replies whatever you want to call them, till then! =D

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1042

Hawww u upd the SS even before I could unres the previous res 😆 so I decided not to res this time .

Wow shreyu , it was beautiful upd 👏 I loved abhay's pov from the unknown writer 😳 and ahhh piya thinks abhay hates her , silly girl . That guy thinks of her day and night but well obviously circumstances led her to 😒 and alina putting sense in abhay , I loved that scene . That guy definately needed a reality check . I can't wait to read next upd to see what abhay does now .

Conti soon shreyu 🤗

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ChelseaForEver

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1043

Shreya u r a gifted writer 😃 and the Abhay POV was good too

But the whole painting thing.. its so confusing

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1044

that was great update
both were suffering in agony but never tried to contact each other what a stubborn both of them...
loved the way u narrate whole abhay and piya sufferings
liked the alina role in this update so much
now lets see what will abhay decide
cont soon

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didlr

@didlr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1045

hi i just read chap 18 n 19 and to tell u tje truth I'm out of words. Believe me when i say this. Very well written and such apt description about the feelings. Just loved ur writing.

Really excited fr the next update cause hoping for a happy ending, after all this pain that the two faced.

Hats off to u!

thanks fr pm:D

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jack-12

@jack-12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1046

aahhh this chapter was a treat. The entire play of emmotions was very well displayed in writing. So the big question- WHAT WILL ABHAY DECIDE?

alina played a very strong and supporting role so now fingers crossed for the upcoming update

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megha sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1047

superb update

it was an emotional update.

don't know what to say for both abhay and pia as both of them are in pain but i do feel that pia atleast has alina with her to support her but abhay is all alone. in a way they both are same. both of them fears rejection.

alina is a very kind person as she had understood both abhay and pia too well...she knew what both of them actually need and i.e. eachother.

pia was too violent when she was angry and even then it was abhay indirectly though that did make her stop.

sometimes i think abhay himself needs to see some counsellor as he hardle ever spoke about his pain and fears.

it was brilliantly written .

thanks for pm

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1048

awesome
loved it
now when pia came to know abhay loved her
will abhay go back
update soon

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1049

superb update.but its ending so soon😭.so piya found dat drawing and letter and now she is feeling guilty of breaking abhays heart.piya calling abhay frm phone booth but they didnt talk.and alina wow did a great job.thanx for pm and continue soon