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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: koli97

waho lovely...j ne pia ki toh band baja di😆...continue asap😊



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

lovely update
sww abhay got jealous huh
like the jeh and piya bonding
so waiting for now abhiya dance
well thats gud to know its a joint ff now that you didnt close this ff😊
cont soon



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I will never close this ff and Hatke love story as they are both very close to my heart !

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

Lovely update😃 Metz n Misha r damn funny.Abhay is already smitten by Piya.Piya's 1st crush was Shaurya?😲.lol
Abhay-Metz past was really sad.
waiting 4 Raichands party



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Ab koi aur dimag mein nahi ayana isliye shaurya !😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
like pia & jeh convo
precap is interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
@45Pinky: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊
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Chapter 5: The Party ( By me and aaliyah)

Hostel:

Pia (on the phone) - Ya ya, it's done. Ok bye I have to go. Ya see you later.
Pia - Ok pia , you are ready to go . She checks herself out .
Pia wore a one line shoulder satin cocktail dress .
Suddenly her phone beeps ...
Pia - Hello ?

Metz - Hi Pia it's me!
Pia - Oh hi Metz!
Metz - Pia who mein tumhe ek baat batana toh bhul hi gayi . Actually meri mom na thodi psycho hogayi hai isliye unhone Party entrance ke liye passes banaye he . Mene ramsingh ke hathon unhe bhejdiya he . Tum yaad se use lan , ok ?
Pia - Ok , metz see you later ! Bye !
Ramsingh - Maam , aap pia ho ?
Pia - Yes ?
Ramsingh - Ye aapke liye pass !
Pia takes it and he goes away . Pia takes out the invitation .
Pia - are wah , lagta hi party bahot mazeddar hone wala hai !
Again her phone beeps . She keeps the invitation on the table and goes out in the balcony .
Pia (on the phone) - You did what I asked you na ? Sh... No one should know about this . I have trusted you so please .. Ya ok !
Pia - Jaldi kar pia and she takes the envelope and rushes out forgetting the invite .
...
Raichand gate :
All guests are entering the party . But our misha is impatiently standing out. Pia arrives .
Pia - Hey , tum yaha bahar kyun khadi ho .Andar jao na !
Misha - Yaar , woh ek bada pnga hogay he .
Pia - kya ?
Misha - Mein apna paas ghar mein hi bhul gayi aur ye gabbar singh mujhe andar hi jane nahi de raha .
Pia - Come mere paas pass he. Jane dega . come!
The guard checks!
Guard - Maam' ye toh khali he.
Pia - What??? Oh fish, mein invite toh dressing table mein hi bhul gayi . Yaar mishu , humara kya hoga ?
Misha - Tum bhi ? God god god , pata nahi kis janam ka badla le rahe ho ? Then suddenly she gets an idea. Chalo pia , chalo . and she drags Pia .
At the backyard :
Pia - Misha ...
Misha - Shh... Chalo mere saath upar chado . Ye idea kabhi fail nahi hoga . And they climb up the railway .
They enter the party from the back door .
Misha - dekha pia misha ka plan kabhi fffaaaiiilll nnnahhhiii hhhooggaaa ! ahh ! Abhay comes and stands right infront of them
Abhay - Kya kar rahe ho tum dono yaha ?
Misha - We...we , we were jus' chilling out !
Abhay - May I see your pass ?
Misha - Oie hum besties he Metz ke , tumhre nahi . Oh hi mumma , coming !
Abhay - Bina pass ke tum dono ko party mein enter nahi karna chahiye tha .
Pia - Listen ...
Abhay - Tum toh apna muh band hi rakho . Iss baar chod raha hun , agli baar nahi . And he leaves .
Misha - Ye KD apne aap ko samjhta kya hai .
Pia - Misha , come . Let's go to the loo .
Loo :
Metz - Hey kya hua tum dono itne angry kyun ho ?
Pia - I hate him .I hate your brother abhay raichand . He's just so ... so...
Misha - Rude , idiot , arrogant , obnoxious , bedimag aur batameez ?
Pia - Exactly !
Metz - But what happened ?
Misha - Are woh ... (and she narrates the whole story)
Metz - Ye bhai ka problem kya hai yaar . Isko toh mein ).
Pia - Chodo Metz .. Let's go .
Party :
Metz was so angry with Abhay that she narrated the whole incident to Haseena after chand's arrival .
Haseena (to abhay ) - Abhay , you should learn to properly treat your guests . Now go and say sorry to Misha , especially Pia .
Abhay - Mein usse maafi nahi mangne wala .
Haseena - You have to . Otherwise I know my ways . Say sorry to Pia infront of everyone .

Abhay goes and grabs the mike . All are present in the hall .
Abhay - Miss Pia Jaiswal , I'm sorry ki mene apka dil dukhaya . Please accept a dance with me .
All are stunned. Pia is like huh? Type. , Misha and Metz are both happy, while Kabir and T are angry.
Abhay - Please? (Offering his hand) Pia holds the hand and abhay twirls her around and takes her to the dance floor.


Dj changes the music to Dil Ibadat while all start dancing. (Ok I don't know anything about couple dance so won't write about it in detail)

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai

Dhadkane Meri Sun,

Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun.
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
Jo Bhi Jitne Pal Jeeyu
Unhe Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Kal Ho Ab Tera Use Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu
Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
Mujhko De Tu Mit Jaane
Ab Khudse Dil Mil Jaane
Kyu Hai Yeh Itna Fasla...
Lamhe Yeh Phir Naa Aane
Inko Tu Naa Le Jaane
Tu Mujh Pe Khudko De Loota...
Tujhe Tujhse Tod Loo Kahi Khudse Jod Loo
Mere Jism O Jaan Main Aa Teri Khusboo Odh Loo
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu
Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
Bahoon Main De Bas Jaane
Sine Main De Chhup Jaane
Tujh Bin Main Jaaunga Kaha????
Tujhse He Mujhe Ko Paane Yaado K Woh Nazrane
Ek Jinpe Haq Ho Bas Mera
Teri Yaado Main Rahoo
Tere Khwabo Main Jagoo
Mujhe Doondhe Jab Koi
Teri Aankho Main Milu
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo
Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Joho Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu
Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

The whole time they were dancing Pia was feeling very uncomfortable as an unknown spark was going through her body when ever their bodies touched . All were in awe by their dancing. Abhay was also feeling the unknown feeling which he never realized. The song ended with Abhay sliding Pia down
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All clap.

Later:

Pia was unknowingly blushing. How much she denied it , she knew she loved dancing with Abhay . This didn't go unnoticed by Metz and Misha . But still Misha was angry with Abhay while Metz tried to pacify her .

Misha - Tere bhai ko toh mein baad mein dekh lungi . Yaar Pia , you dance really well .

Pia came out of trance and said - Thanks !

Metz - Sorry hun , mere bhai ke wajah se ...

Pia - No,no it's definetly ok . Oh guys I have to go now . Mom must be trying to call and I left my cell at the hostel .

Metz - Come let me drop you .

Pia- No , metz it's definetly ok .

Metz - Madam yaha raat ko bahot khatra hota hai . Shhh.. come on . Bye Mishu .

Misha - Bye Metz , bye Pia .

Pia - Bye.

In the car:

Metz - Pia, I know you don't like my bro. But he is not like that. I mean he's a very sweetheart but he doesn't know how to talk to girls . Everytime all bimbo's go after him so he just gets agitated .

Pia - I can understand Metz . Waise why are you saying this ?

Metz (nervously) - Uhhh..woh.. just like that . I thought you got a negative opinion about Abby that's why. Otherwise, it's just, uhh, nothing!

Pia knew Metz was hiding something but she brushed it off as she had more work to do when she reached home .

Meanwhile ...

Chand - Kya hua haseena ? Abhay ko lekar pareshaan ho ?

Haseena - Nahi chand . It's not that .

Chand - Toh phir kya hua ?

Haseena - 3 ghante pehle Mussorie - dehradoon highway mein 8 ladkiyan ki laash mili he . Reporters keh rahe the ki ye kisi DD ki jungleon ki animal's ka kaam he but I could see the vampire bites in their neck . I think he's back !

Chand - Haseena , are you sure ?

Haseena - I went to that place chand . It's his smell , which I have not forgotten till these all years .

Chand - Hmm...Then we have to prepare for a fight. If he's staying in Mussorie then the treaty made by the werewolves will be broken and this will be a great fight .

Haseena - Let the time see Chand ...

Precap -

Pia is typing something in her lappy when someone says - Hi Pia !

Pia - Oh jeez , you scared me . Thank god you're back .


Edited by 45Pinky - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by 45Pinky - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update!
Piya n Mish got d same treatment as d serial lol
who s bak?😲.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

Lovely update!
Piya n Mish got d same treatment as d serial lol
who s bak?😲.



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