Behind the truth: story of a butterfly - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
😊thank u👏 vaise idea was from jiya master pice
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

a small update

*FLASHBACK*

She got out from the car.she was trying 2call mechanic wen suddenly she heard a strange sound from 4est.she slowly went there&saw. there was a shock 4 her .there a guy with fangs & blue eyes.he holding an animal in his hand sucking it. blooddrops fell down from his lips.Pia was scared.@last she cud see his face. It was ABHAY behind whom she was running like anything.she ran away from there leaving bhind a sound which made abhay aware of her. he wiped blood from his mouth &called piyaaa... but she kept running

*FLASHBACK ended*

pia was feeling diff 2 continue"and i went there & i ...'before completing it she fell unconscious into his arms.he held her.

so how was it?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
hey short but intererting update... and ya u knw wat u r writting sumthing which i want in show as i was fed up wid abhay's stay away mission and this jiya relation give him a piece of mind... as regret forever dat wat he left, what he loss, and what rejected him... he live eternaly in guilty of lossing pia which i want 4 faking relations wid other
Edited by trishnawaliya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
abhay love pia and pia carved 4 abhay she dont want any human or any other spntrl but he never understood her and her feelings and want her to chose human and loath her in every way humiliate her and his act of taking her memory which is spcl part of once life is wrost mistake and he have to suffer its consequence when pia left him and chose jeh despite of being him warewolf and rejected her 1st luv abhay and as both are spntrl its gud punishment 4 him
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
hi!!!!! dear i luv ur cmbept and pair no m nt fan of jiya but fan of abhiya and dont like jeh 4 act of kidnapping pia but actully at climax cvs destroy all charactes so its nt matter big

but i want u to continue dis story and complete it as dis is wat i want in show mentaly...
dont knw dat wether u get gud response or nt as all r abhiya fan but i like story despite being abhiya fan and when one can write story on abhay and alina then y nt it is jeh and pia...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

hi!!!!! dear i luv ur cmbept and pair no m nt fan of jiya but fan of abhiya and dont like jeh 4 act of kidnapping pia but actully at climax cvs destroy all charactes so its nt matter big

but i want u to continue dis story and complete it as dis is wat i want in show mentaly...
dont knw dat wether u get gud response or nt as all r abhiya fan but i like story despite being abhiya fan and when one can write story on abhay and alina then y nt it is jeh and pia...

thank u im gonna continue it& i want 2 show abhiya fans that there r jiya fans& there me b jiya ff also
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

he held her from 1 hand & took mob & called misha but failed.he litfed her 2 car & took her 2 home.he shouted @the servant 2 open the door& tok her 2 his room.but it rained suddenly 7 he got wet in rain but saved pia from getting wet.

he made her ly on bed & started fireplace. he opened the cupboard & took a shirt & went 2 wash room.he changed the shirt & came out but pia was still unsconsious.he went & tapped her.She woke up slowly she was confused.she asked 2 herself "how did i come here" she looked @ watch . it was 9 o clock."I need 2 go home"said she."my driver will drop u "said & he went out.she thouhgt"how weird"

Next day in college Jeh noticed changed behviour. she wasnt talking2 anyone& not quarelled with him 4 the seat

*the very next day*

There was a shock 4 all.evry1 was suprised.there was a fancy dress comp. & couples were chosen by teachers.evry1 shocked 2 see couples. That couples were...

Misha & kabir. pia was too happy 2 hear it.of course pia knew about kabir"s secret[liking misha]. And like always ruhi& angad, T & abhay.the most shockinh news was PIA & JEH!!!!!!! hearing it pia shouted "nooo"but wat was the use? she cud do nothing.

then couples had 2 select characters. ruhi& angad became heer ranja.misha's idea was 2 bcome juliet & she made kabir romio. T & abhay chose edward & bella. Jeh wanted 2 become saleem. But pia plainly said no.she wished 2 bcome cindrella.

they quarelled once again"cindrella & prince charming" "saleem & anarkali"

pia: Jeh we r going 2 bcome cindrella & prince charming.right?"she stepped on his feet intentionally. he said houuuh in pain.pia:see u agreed with .thats great .lets go

he opened his mouth & astonished 'jeh close ur mouth & lets go there is a lot of work""were?""of course shopping""nooo"

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nice but again short... all rite but y nt u put update in chapters and give pg no. along wid chapter no. on first page it will become simple 4 one who read in future... so in ur story abhay already entered... i thought dat his entry yet going to happen...

k to cindrella and price charming... waiting 4 next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

hey nice but again short... all rite but y nt u put update in chapters and give pg no. along wid chapter no. on first page it will become simple 4 one who read in future... so in ur story abhay already entered... i thought dat his entry yet going to happen...

k to cindrella and price charming... waiting 4 next part...

actully i wasnt sure abot responses & new bies cannot post links
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: -ScarletRose-

awww what a cute update :D

thank u
wat happened about jiya masterpiece wont they con?

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