Abhiya FF:It is not easy to forget you UPDTD PG31 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
awsum prlogue
its quite an intriguing concept
do cont and pm me too.
the prologue reminded me of sherlock holmes...is it inspired from it?

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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing update rose and plz pm me next time
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
yar so gud that u start to write ff again
wow thats seems so interesting yar
nice update
so now three hunks are in danger
waiting to cont soon
plzzz pm me too
Edited by bellaaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

awsum prlogue

its quite an intriguing concept
do cont and pm me too.
the prologue reminded me of sherlock holmes...is it inspired from it?

thanx dear.😳.. Sherlock homes??? i had the read the books a long time back..😃 first chapter is not inspired from sherlock homes.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: bellaaa

yar so gud that u start to write ff again
wow thats seems so interesting yar
nice update
so now three hunks are in danger
waiting to cont soon
plzzz pm me too

thankoo☺️... surely i'll pm u. and about the three hunks in danger...😃well...are they in danger or someone else😉😉😉???
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

amazing update rose and plz pm me next time

thanks yaar. i'll pm u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: -_Sweta_-

Hey Rose..

So good to see you again...😊
And I'll be really waiting for your FF...😃
Continue Soon.. 😆
Lots of Love..🤗

Thank you sweety.. 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: smdosi

Great idea n concept...m already in...pm me when you update plz...i'v sent u a frnd req..

i have accepted it and yes i'll surely pm u😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu


Hey did it say the picture is too big or error or it did. Not post the pic it does that at times u might have to choose a a other pix if it stays blank.

Thanx for your help dear... atlast i am able to upload pics. 😊 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHAPTER 2

The jeep carrying the three handsome hunks reached infront of a simple yet elegant house. As they got down from the jeep, Abhay's eyes caught the attention of the beautiful name plate carved in the gate-"Sidharth Malhothra". Jay patted his back and asked,

"Abhay, this is your first time in Sid's house right?"

Abhay nodded his head in conformation.

Jay: "Lets go. You are going to get a lifetime experience here"

Jay said that with a smirk and lead Abhay inside.

Sid had already opened the door and he was searching for someone. Abhay was wondering as to whom Sid is searching madly. He looked at jay in confusion. Jay smiled and whispered,

"He is searching for..."

Before he could complete a loud explosion from outside shocked them. Abhay could see the colour draining out from both sid's and Jay's faces. After an initial shock both ran outside closely followed by Abhay.

There were smoke everywhere...

Sidharth screamed, "Piyuuu"... it was taking Jay's all strength to hold back Sidharth from going into the smoke. Sidharth was struggling hard to break free. All Abhay could do was to watch that duo in utter confusion. ..

Sidharth was in the verge of bursting out when they suddenly heard a girl's laughing. Through the thin layer of smoke that the explosion has caused, they could see a girl who was jumping and clapping.

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A relief washed through the faces of Sid and Jay. Sidharth ran towards the girl and pulled her into a bone crushing hug. He was hugging that girl as it to never let go. Next turn was Jay's. Sid and Jay were acting like they got the most precious thing back. Abahy was a silent spectator to all these. He wondered who the girl was...

After a few minutes she pulled herself away from Sidharth and jay

"Wow Wow Wow... what are you guys doing??? Do you have a plan to murder me by crushing bones or what?"

Sidharth (cupping her face with his hands): "Dont... Dont you dare play that prank on me Piyu... You know how much it hurts me with the very thought of you in danger??? Why you always do that to me Piyu? Why?"

For a minute the cheerful girl's face saddened. She stroked Sid's face lovingly and looked at Jay. Jay was also in the verge of crying. She took a step behind and observed both of them. In the very next moment she burst out laughing;

"Aiyooo... the great CBI officers... Afraid of small crackers... hi hi hi"

Both Sidharth's and Jay's face hardened for a minute & in the next moment they also joined the girl in laughing. Abay was watching all this with fury. Firstly the girl had fooled them and secondly adding cherry to that she was laughing at them.

"I hate this girl..." He murmured to himself. After a few minutes the threesome stopped laughing. That was then the girl noticed Abhay. She looked at Jay questioningly.

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Jay: "Oh!!! I forgot to introduce you... Abhay, meet Piyali Malhothra... Sidharth's Piyu... our mere bhi...She is our sweet little sister... Piya, meet Abhay... The new joinee in our team... The smart and intelligent"

Piya (with a giggle) : "Smart and intelligent!!! I don't think so"

Hearing this abhay's face hardened. Before he could reply, Jay interrupted. "Piyu...Why did you say like that?"

Piya: "If he was smart, he would have definitely understand the difference between the sound of a cracker and a bomb". She again started laughing. This made Abhay more furious. Jay understood that the situation was going out of control. He gesture Sid to take Piya inside.

Abhay (to himself): "What the hell she think of herself...How rude and snobbish! Whoever she is, I hate her"

The last line Abhay spoke a little bit loudly only to be heard be Jay.

"No Abhay, you don't hate her..."

Abhay looked at him perplexed.

Jay: "you don't hate her abhay... how can you hate her when you don't know anything about her??? The thing is that you are just angry with her. You can never hate her... infact no one can... she is really precious Abhay... not only to us, but also to all those people who are close to her...Yeah, I agree, she is a little different. But that what makes her special. You are gonna find it your own. One day you'll realise that you cannot hate her... you never can hate Piyali Malhothra... Our Piyu... "

He finished with a smile and entered the house leaving a flabbergasted Abhay behind.

Abhay(to himself): "Beta Abhay... your one slip of tongue and this much big lecture!!! WoW!!! Drop your thought of scolding that girl ever... Because if you do so, you probably end up killed by your own people... Now do we want that to happen? Hell No... You are not even married for God's sake... Now you go inside like a good boy and listen the Great Piyali Purana from Saint Jay and Saint Sidharth... Aargh..."

He stomped his feet and followed others by cursing himself for coming to the house in first place...

Edited by rosamale - 12 years ago

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