My first ss : De$tined to Meet updated ch-9/PG 30 - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update..hope abhiya meet soon/.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update! so sid is bck!! who's tht girl?? 😉 i hope pia ka call abhay ke liye achha surprice ho! try to update soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks guyzz Luv u all for this support... I'l try to update by d end of dis month
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update.
Kahin Piya ka surprise real mein horrible na ban jaye!
Who r those people who want 2 kill Abhay?
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Abhiya convo was cute😳 Liked it😊
Hope Pia is fine😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Is it included in Piya's plan or she is actually in danger?? I hope its in the plan!!...I dun want Piya in danger...btw nice updt...thnx 4d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Woaaa superb update yaar!!!! I loved it. Poor piya kitni scary dream dekhi usne bas ye sapna saach na ho 😔. Loved the part where abhay called piya in basement and both hugged each other, so cute. Hmmm so is it piya's plan to surprise abhay yea something happened?? Continue soon plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update yar
whats with piya dream?
aww abhay birthday and piya made a suprise for him
sid want to kill abhay
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh!! So looks like Pia has dont something special for Abhay!! But I hope that she doesn't get kidnapped coz thats what happens most of the times in shows!! COnt soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Ch - 9
Abhay ran to the jungle. He reached a clearing n shouted ' Pia Piaaa ! Where r u ? Piaa! ' Abhay closed his eyes as if to sense her. He culd see her...she was sumwhere behind the clearing.
Abhay rushed there.
N his phone rang . Abhay immediately piked the phone
Abhay - Pia kahan ho ?
Pia - Close ur eyes.
Abhay - what ?
N a soft hand came from behind n touched his eyes n closed them . Pia kissed abhay on the cheek n whispered in his ear 'Happy Birthday ! '
Abhay opened his eyes n saw that
Pia was standing in front of hin in a shoulderless white dress. She was lookin beautiful as ever. Her soft curls covered her bare shoulder. N her pink lips n rosy cheeks added to her beauty . She was holding a cake in her hand n was smiling. Abhay gawked at her. He forgot what he was doing here n was lost in her gorgeous brown eyes. Pia went n waved her hand in front of abhay's eyes as if to check wether he's able to see or nt ! Abhay came back to his senses n was all like 'Are u mad ? U scared me ' .
Pia - Tumhe dar bhi lagta hain ? :P
Abhay frowned !

Abhay - It is not funny ! Is stupid surprise ke liye tumne mujhe yaha bulaaya ? Iskeliye mujhe itna daraane aur bhagaane ki kya zaroorat thi ? Wish karna tha to call karleti ya Party mein aa jaati ! Have u lost it Pia ? Itni raat ko jungle mein kon aata hain ! Huh ? I thot that tum sach mein kisi problem mein ho !"
Pia - Bt Abhay...
Abhay - No arguing. I'll drop u !
Pia - I'll go.
Abhay - Shut up pia. This jungle is not safe at night.
Pia not even replying turned around n started to walk away.
Abhay - Pia. Ppia
Pia didn't listen to him .
Abhay was shoutin after her ' Piyali Dobriyal . U're not goin alone ! '
Pia ran n sat in her car n drove away. She reached the dobriyal mansion n ran into her room. She locked her inside .. She was hurt. Misha who saw pia storming in the house was banging on pia's door. Pia opened it. Misha came inside.
Misha - kya hua ?
Pia said fiercely- Abhay is too much. I tried to surprize him n make him happy but what do i get in return. A long scolding ! I don't believe it. What kind of person is he ?
Misha -' Pia just relax. It'z ok. N...'
Misha's phone rang.
'It's abhay's '
Misha picked up the phone .
Abhay - Misha pia ghar pahunchgyi ? She'zz ignoring my calls . Is she home ?
Misha - yeah she is !
Abhay said with a sense of relief ' Thank god. I was quite worried. Mujh... '
Pia took the phone frm misha's hand n cut it.
Misha - Wt the hell r u doing ?
Pia didn't reply.
Misha - Pia he did not do anything purposely. Maybe vo sach mein dar gya ho .He loves u a lot. Tum kyu choti si baat ka pahaar bana rhi ho ?
Pia frowned n said ' i know mish .He didn't mean any of the things. It's just that Kya apne boyfriend se gussa nahi ho sakti !?'
Misha - Uhm...Boyfriend n all haan !? Theres nothing wrong . Bas jyaada gussa mat karna
Pia - Watever !
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Pia came out of her bathroom. N was surprised to see Abhay sitting on the bed.
'Wt are u doin here ?'Pia said bluntly.
Abhay - M sorry.
Pia turned her face away n Abhay hugged her frm back. Abhay's chin on Pia's shoulder.
Abhay - Sorry. I know i talked rudely. Plzz... Sorry.
Pia didn't reply.
Abhay stopped huggin her n stood in front of her. Than he held both of his ears with his hands n said' sorry.' ( Awww that was so cute...back to story :P ).
Pia smiled.
Abhay - Does that mean u forgave me.
' No !' pia said sharply.
Abhay -' Pia listen Jungle'z not safe n u were waitin for me. Agar tumhe kuch ho jaata...Pia u don't get it. I care for u n... ' his voice died away .
Pia looked at his face n hugged him. Pia - am sorry. I know Abhay u got worried n all...but tumhe aese baat nhi karni chahiye thi .
Abhay - I knoe ! Am sorry too. N i promise i'll make it up 2 u.
Pia - Really ! How ?
Abhay - get ready by 9 at morning.
Pia - 9..? R u serious ? Abhay i'll not get up...it's too early.
Abhay - please..bas kal.
Pia - ok..Umm.. Gud nite !
Abhay - Byee
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#Jungle !
The girl - Sid. When r v gonna kill them ?
Sid - Soon !
The girl - Kab sid ? We need to kill them before its too late.
Siddhart lifted his face n said "relax ! I promise i'll kill Abhay . And pia ! Tomorrow will be their last night . '' And he started to laugh .

Next Day @ Morning
Pia was sleeping n Abhay entered her roon. He saw her sleeping peacefully. He smiled n went near her n said 'Pia wake up.'
Pia turned over the other side.
Abhay - Pia...it's 8:30 !
Pia sleepily - 'bas 5 minute ' n she kept her pillow on her ear..to cover dem.
Abhay culdn't help smiling . He whispered into her ears ' Wake up sweetheart '
Pia slightly opened her eyes...she looked at Abhay .
Then she suddenly got up wid a jerk. Pia - Sorry..vo..
Abhay - It's Ok ! Now get up n get ready
Pia - But hum jaa kaha rahe hain..
Abhay - It's a surprise..
Pia - Surprise ! Batao na Abhay...
Abhay - Jaoo..get ready !
Pia - Abhay..please tell na !
Abhay - Piyaa
Pia - ok , ok ! Jaa rahi hoon..

Pia came out of her washroom. Abhay was waitin for her outside.
Pia - one sec...i'll just put on my heels.
Abhay - Noo...wear sumthing comfy.
Pia - Abhay..i can't do widout them n vaise bhi am comfortable in dem.
Abhay - as u wish n i forgot to tell u..take a bunch of clothes with u !
Pia -for what ?
Abhay - Dat's a surprise darling
Pia - Right ! Wait a sec...

Abhay n pia sat in the car n abhay drove.
Pia - Hum kahaan jaa rhe hain ? R v going for shopping ?
Abhay - Something more interesting than it
Pia - Nothing is more interesting than shopping !
Abhay - Let's see !

SoO how was the update guyzz ?
I'm sorry for the delay but my exams were going on !

Hope u all liked it . I promise i'll update ASAP !

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