New Abhiya SS 'Ruined' ChapterOne Page 6

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Hey guys, i am back with a new idea of SS , I am trying my best to complete my FF Always ... will update that too , hope you like this new idea, need your feedback to continue.

"Ruined"


*Ring on the door*

"Nishu, open the door papa is here" A cheerful mother asked her daughter from kitchen.

A 6 year old girl came running and opened the door, as she saw the sight of her father she screamed "Paapppaaa" and hopped in his arms. The man in his mid 30's hugged his sweetheart daughter, threw bag and coat on sofa.

"So, papa didn't get kiss today" he said making a face , his daughter made adorable face kissed right and left again and again on his cheeks. He felt so content so happy to have her, 'Nisha' was his light of life.

"Dinner's ready, Abhay please freshen up, nishu help me with the plates"

And both screamed "Yes mooommaaa"

Nisha went in kitchen to fetch plates meanwhile she was in the room taking out clothes for her husband, water dripping from his body, just in trousers and towel around his neck, he came from back and hugged her.

"Abhayy,(she blushed) Nisha will see us"

"Let her see, how her father takes care of her mother" he tightened the hug more.

"I love you *pause* How was ur day?" she asked finally giving herself in his arms.

"hmmm *bites her neck* day was good, had very sexy patients today, I wasn't coming home today but'"

"but?" she turned around narrowing her eyes

"They had another plans with their grandchildren " he said making a sad face. And both burst out in laughter.

"Mommmaaa , paapppaa I am hungry" Nisha knocking on the door.

Both smiled to each other, Abhay let go of her, she handed him tshirt and was going, Abhay gripped her hand stopping her to let go.

"I love you too Alina, Thanks for making me live again"

And guys you read correct , its Alina not Piya, she will come too, wait and watch please!
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"If you want a pm , please like this post"


Index
Prologue Page 1
Character Sketch Page 4
Chapter One Page 6
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice prologue will loe to read it pz me to :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting prologue romi..continue soon😊
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Oh yeh toh abhi se twisted hai😆.So extra marriage affair hai ya or Abhay used 2 love Pia but had 2 marry alina 4 some reason
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Posted: 13 years ago
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surprising!!!!!!! unbelivabke yaar pia ki jagha alina not fair and ha aab to tumhe is diffnt ss ko complete karna padega and ya pm karna mate bhulna but still alina and abhay i can't belive... i am sending u buddy request plz accept
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely prologue!
Looking 4ward 2 d story!
OMG Abhay's wife alina! Not piya 😲 i can't tolerate abhay wid anyone else except Piya!
Pls continue soon!
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Hmmm nice prologue dear.
continue it and plz pm me ok
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting! continue soon😎

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